os THE BEGINNING OF A FAIRYTALE lastpart pg 28

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
Wow u ended it so nicely shivani...loved the last part...and the places...u described me bhi dream me ghumne chali gayi thi...i enjoyed this os thanks for the pm

thanks for liking

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story to end
when are u going to star a new story?

thanks for reading dear

i already have a ff and 2 ss running right now i can't start anything new

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Shivani I am just in awe of your writings hun.
Abhay is sucha a man now.
But you know when Abhiya went to that R&J Castle I felt like something bad is gonna happen. But no. This is so beautiful & yeah little Raichand on the way

thanks a compliment from a gr8 writer like u means a lot to me

i send them to italy only becoz i want them to visit r&j castle

sorry for no twist and turns but i want this os to be all happy with no complications abhiya already had their share of trouble

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: priya.1
shivani loved the update!!!
so pia is pregnant... little raichand coming.. 😃
italy was so well described that evn i felt like iv gone to italy...
plz continue soon...

thanks for appreciating dear

yeah little raichand on the way that's why i said the fairytale has just began

but dear this was the last part

i can't write about abhiya baby here as i think it will be a bit odd

but yeah i m planning to show them raising their baby in my ss

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: DonIsback
wow. its amazing. and very cute end... i love it lot...

thanks dear i m glad u liked it

i hope i didn't bore u with this all happy os with no twists and turns

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: sohiniluvsabhay
Superb update shivani u've describd venice nd verona so well dat i can imagine the whole place nd piya is pregnant!yayy!!! Gr8 nwz nd dis update was very dreamy nd luvd da 1st part nd da jealousy part... I hv no words actually u've written dis update so well its amazing...thanks for the pm:-)

i have introduced the jealousy part only to show pia's possessiveness and add some spice in this otherwise nonchalanting update

i m happy that u liked it

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
wow beautiful ending dear. 👏

thanks dishu for reading and commenting🤗

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
wow dear wht an ending.Abhiya honeymoon & ur description abt venice Romeo juliet balcony was so gud,I was lost in my dreamland.This romantic Abhay is so damm cute & tht jealous scene,Pia manoing Abhay sitting on his lap & at the end the happy news of Pia being pregnant was ice on cake😳

romeo and juliet balcony scene only forced me to make them celebrate their honeymoon in italy

after all to me abhiya are as epic as romeo & juliet

pia being pregnant is the indication that their fairytale has just started

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: zoozoo123
Superb...Superb...Superb...😛...Wht else shld I say...Its damn beautiful...Loved it 2 the core...U described it so perfectly tht I have no words...😛...Make more OS...😛

i m happy that u liked it i wanted it to be a bit dreamy only

well i already have a ff and 2 ss right now so can't start anything else i hope u will like them as well