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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Shivani, it was more or less like a fairytale only. Beautiful update. Hoo Os ko prem karoo choo.😉😆. Thanks for Pm dear.😃

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Wow u ended it so nicely shivani...loved the last part...and the places...u described me bhi dream me ghumne chali gayi thi...i enjoyed this os thanks for the pm

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

wow great story to end
when are u going to star a new story?

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Shivani I am just in awe of your writings hun.
Abhay is sucha a man now.
But you know when Abhiya went to that R&J Castle I felt like something bad is gonna happen. But no. This is so beautiful & yeah little Raichand on the way

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@---Priya---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

shivani loved the update!!!

so pia is pregnant... little raichand coming.. 😃

italy was so well described that evn i felt like iv gone to italy...

plz continue soon...

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

wow. its amazing. and very cute end... i love it lot...

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Superb update shivani u've describd venice nd verona so well dat i can imagine the whole place nd piya is pregnant!yayy!!! Gr8 nwz nd dis update was very dreamy nd luvd da 1st part nd da jealousy part... I hv no words actually u've written dis update so well its amazing...thanks for the pm:-)

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

wow beautiful ending dear. 👏

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

wow dear wht an ending.Abhiya honeymoon & ur description abt venice Romeo juliet balcony was so gud,I was lost in my dreamland.This romantic Abhay is so damm cute & tht jealous scene,Pia manoing Abhay sitting on his lap & at the end the happy news of Pia being pregnant was ice on cake😳

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Ki fark Painda hai

@Courageous_Leo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Superb...Superb...Superb...😛...Wht else shld I say...Its damn beautiful...Loved it 2 the core...U described it so perfectly tht I have no words...😛...Make more OS...😛

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