New OS~Mend my broken Heart(part3*pg16*Oct17) - Page 17

Originally posted by: -srija-

Hey tanzie why dnt u write an os in abhay's POV.u r a great writer yar.its just a suggestion.

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

Amazing Tanzie. Thanks for reminding the pre-leap incident when Pia had protect the Raichands' secret, though she had almost broken up with Abhay

Originally posted by: cuteteddy

awww tanzie it was awesome n the song was also beautiful ! i luved it n what were u all talking in bengali ? r u bengali ?

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy

Why couldn't damn Kekta Maiyya hire YOU as the scriptwriter for the show?🤔 Awww thankuuu soo much Neethz 🤗

Seriously, I wish you and Dishu were the show writers. We would've never lost our PKYEK to this garbage they currently show then Honestly there are so many good writers in the forum and they have plenty of ideas 👏 my main complain is when they cant manage multi track why to bring it 😕 I love supernatural stuff but they sud shw abhiya too na and more importantly they are making Abhay dumb and lead female useless!! I mean seriously, to every problem only solution is fake romance 🤓 I know they get ideas from TVD...thik se ideas copy karna bhi nehi ata kya 😡

Coming to your OS, the highlight had to be THE VAMPIRE DIARIES!🤣.🤣.🤣 (which has caught my interest again from the past two episodes and HOW!🥺). Glad I made you ROFL atleast 😃 I wanted to add some humor coz this OS of mine is way too serious 😆 and talking about TVD, i know you wud be hurt about stelena.. my heart broke into thousand pieces watching Stefan in so much struggle and pain but they will come around sweetz.. im sure 🤗 I mean, seriously, I really don't blame Abhay, man! How can Pia see all this in a SHOW and think it's the same as reality (OS wali reality). Seriously!🤣.🤣.🤣

But I love how Pia was the HERO here!😃 wanted to give her some credit, take her own decisions like Elena. remember she was soo brave she stabbed herself and stabbed an original vampire in season2.. 👏 i wanted to see PIya fight for and beside Abhay not WITH him

Thanks for the PM! I wish this wasn't the last part but all good things come to an end. If they don't, they drag and become crappy😆.😆 BINGO 😆

Do write more OSs! I don't need the show on the TV to live AP if I keep getting such awesome stuff here on the forum by you people🤗 will write more because I need that as well...to distract myself ... I wish I have more time.. but maintaing 2 FFs already so time milna muskil hota hai... thanks for reading dear 🤗

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Finally everything is in place.. bcoz its the end 😉

AbhIya are where they belong in each others arms... yes they do 😍

Haseena cured and in Chands arms😆 i wanted to write tht lolz 😆

Feeling bad for Alina but hoping she will find a way back she will but this OS was not really abt her so i made her open ended actually..😕

Thanks for the PM Tanzie

Enjoyed reading this OS thanks Nidha 😊

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

awsum update dr!!!!! abhay sang a song... cool yr... n d ending is beautiful i hope cvs get some idea frm ur os n ff... waiting 4 more...

thanks 4 d pm!!!!