New OS~Mend my broken Heart(part3*pg16*Oct17) - Page 11

Originally posted by: madhuri16

wow...tanzie fantastic piece of writing🤗🤗...i sooo luved piya...the cv's r really ruining piya😡😡...nice concept ...so alina knows d truth n she is behind haseena😎...continue soon😊...

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244

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I have stopped watching dis show,but can't stop reading ur ff's..😊 Both da updates were fabulous,and a big round of applause for ur sensible thinking.. 👏

Dis days I hav stopped visiting da forum,as people r going insane and bashing da female lead left-right-centre,just to promote their anoder (favorite?) couple.😆 I am scared to comment at any post,as I'm afraid sum people will bite me after reading my POV.So I better stay safe...🤣

Ur dp in FB took my breath away...Haiii mera Damon..😳.

Era nijeder modhye kamrakamri koruk,amader ki!!😆 emniteo dojjal meyegulo ekhane jhogra kortei ashe..😆

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244

Ur dp in FB took my breath away...Haiii mera Damon..😳.

Era nijeder modhye kamrakamri koruk,amader ki!!😆 emniteo dojjal meyegulo ekhane jhogra kortei ashe..😆

Jai bangla!! dojjalgulo banglao bojhe naki!!!?? 😆 Ishhh,kheyechhe!! 🤣

Kemon acho🤣 i am not bengali

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Kemon acho🤣 i am not bengali

Ami kannad@tanzie no re i know only two words from very long time🤣we will spam angry

Last Part: Imperfectly Perfect

Piya has a tendency to do what exactly what she shouldn't or being in the places where she shouldn't be. That happened once again. She took the shortcut to new Raichand Mansion that goes in-between the jungle and voila, she didn't need to find Haseena and Chand. Haseena was already there doing her yoga classes infront of a hooded figure. She was bowing infront of that hooded figure like she's worshiping that. Haseena turned around with the sound of footsteps. The hooded figure ordered Haseena in her weighty voice, "You need more blood..more.. You are thirsty Haseena." Instantly, Haseena exposed her elongated fangs and her pupils turned blue. Piya swallowed hard and steped backward. "Haseena aunty, what's wrong with you? Please don't be like this? Don't you know me? Alina, don't do this to aunty. Please. You are not like that. Your mother is messing with your brain. Please Alina." She almost pleaded and with a gust of wind Alina's hood fell and she didn't look like the innocent, shy Alina at all. Her eyes were red and she looked lethal right now. "You are the reason for all of this Piya. You need to die. I love Abhay so much and until you are here he's never going to be mine. Haseena drink her blood" Piya was scared till now facing two dangerous creatures at the same time but this statement created a blaze of fury inside her. "Haseena aunty. Please don't listen to her. Look at me. I'm piya. You know me. Think about Abhay. Alina hosh me ayo..Abhay will HATE you once he comes to know who did this to his mother... hosh me ayo.."

Alina's eyes changed from red to black again and she said softly crying, "Piya..Piya..I donno what's happening to me. Please Piya help me. ."

Haseena's could kill her throat getting dry. She could hear the blood flowing in Piya's vein. Wait..Piya and Abhay loves her. Her pupils changed into black as she softly said, "Piya, What are you doing here? Leave right now. I might hurt you." She begged to Piya. Piya slowly approached her, "I know aunty you can never hurt me. Just take this you will be alright. Trust me aunty." She timidly offered her the glass bottle full of unknown herbs. Alina gave a blood thirsty scream in rage and her eyes changed from black to red again. Haseena's face turned into back to a hunter from a mother. Again she was the predator and Piya was her prey. She lurched into Piya's throat in her vampiric speed and pierced Piya's neck with her fangs. Piya screamed in pain but as soon as Piya's blood reached Haseena's thirsting gullet she loosen her grip on Piya and started coughing. Blood started pouring out of Haseena's mouth and she fell on the ground. Alina screamed and came running, "Piya, i'm so sorry. I didn't want this to happen." She started crying and Piya lost her balance but before she could fell on the ground a strong pair of masculine hands caught her almost in verge of crying, "piyaaa, ohh Piya.." now looking at his mother, "mom' what did you do Mom? Why'?" Alina cried, "Abhay..please forgive me.. I didn't want to do it.." Piya was writhing in pain as she managed to speak, "Abhay, take this. This herb will help aunty to control her thirst. I drink some of it before I was coming here so if Haseena aunty attacks me she won't be able to drink my blood for long. She will be alright" She gave the glass bottle to Abhay in her trembling hands. Abhay desperately kissed her neck to heal her wounds ignoring the thirst of Piya's sweet blood pouring out of the wounds that was knocking on his nostrils. "Why did you do this Piya why? That is exactly I don't tell you anything.." Abhay cried in frustration seeing his beloved in life threatening situation. Meanwhile, Chand who has sensed something is happening to Haseena has reached the spot and took a semi-consciousness Haseena in his arms. "Abhay, I'm so sorry I tried hard now to harm Piya but I couldn't. Please forgive your mother" haseena apologized to Abhay from Chand's arms. Abhay told Chand to take Haseena home and feed this herb giving the bottle to Chand. He didn't question anything though he had a lot in his mind but for now he decided to leave Abhay with Piya. Abhay looked at Alina in fury screaming, "I shall never forgive you Alina. You did this with my mother. You made her a killer?" Alina's innocent crying face changed hearing Abhay's accusation, "You cheated with me Abhay. You pretend to be in love with me when you are always in love with Abhay. My mother was right." Her eyes changed again and so as her eyes, "I love you Abhay. I donno what's happening to me. please help me. I never wanted to hurt anybody." Unable to take it anymore Alina vanished from that place with her powers.

Piya's eyes were now half closed, she was slowly loosing her conscious, "Abhay, Alina' Alina was putting spell on haseena aunty. But it's not her fault. Her mother is messing with her mind. Help her please. Don't do anything to her." Abhay didn't care right now about anything. He took Piya in his arms to reach Raichand Mansion right now to heal herproperly but Piya dodged off saying her last words, "I love you Abhay'"

24 hours later:

Abhay keep looking at Piya. She was looking so innocent lying here, unconscious from last 24 hours. He saw Piya moving her hand and he rushed towards her. He sat bedside and saw Piya was finally coming back. Piya tried to open her eyes but it seemed she has been sleeping for a very long time. She felt a cold touch on her hand and then cold lips touching her forehead very gently. Even with her eyes closed he could tell who that is. She almost whispered, "Abhay." Abhay felt something happening to his dead heart hearing his own name from her soft lips. "Piya, how do you feel? Open your eyes."

She slowly opened her eyes and saw the face she was longing to see, "Abhay. Where am I?" "You are home Piya. It's your room." Abhay answered taking her hands into her. A warmth of relief washing over him as Piya sounds completely normal. Piya tried to sit on looking shocked, "what? Home? What are you doing here then? Where is everyone?" Abhay helped Piya sit on the bed with the support a pillow on behind her and said, "I brought you home. Your parents are sleeping Piya. Its midnight. You have been sleeping for last 24 hours." Piya gasped, "24 hours? And you brought me home? What did you tell them? Where's Alina? And aunty? Hows haseena aunty Abhay?" Piya touched her neck. Abhay put a finger on Piya's lips, "Bohut sawal karti ho. Mom is alright Piya. And Alina I donno. I told your parents I found you unconscious beside the road, you car hit a tree. Doctor came, gave you a injection and you have been sleeping for a long time since then. No one knows I'm here but I'm always with you Piya. Always." Except for feeling a little sore around the neck Piya felt absolutely fine and she remembers she has some questions to ask. "Abhay you have some serious explaining to do." She said sternly.

"So as you Piya. What kind of stupidity was that? You could have been dead Piya!! I always try to keep you out of trouble and this is exactly what you do all the time. Anything would have happened Piya.. ANYTHING!! Alluring a blood thirsty vampire? Do you know what that means Piya?" Abhay scolded Piya but softly.

Piya freed her hand from Abhay's, "You are blaming ME Abhay? You should have told me that your mother's life is at stake Abhay then none of this proposal drama would have happened! For once you should have trusted me with the truth and don't call me stupid. Before I searched for aunty I drank some of those herbs with water. So that even if aunty drinks my blood it will make her weak!!"

"You drank that herb? What made you think it would work? You totally invited a vampire to drink your blood." Abhay shook his head in disbelief.

Piya tried to sound reasonable, "yes. I watched it in vampire Dairies!!!! Stefan's father mixed vervain with Stefan's tea so that when Katherine drink from him, she will collapse because it will make her weak!!!"

"You did it because you saw it in VAMPIRE DIARIES Piya?" Abhay sounded incredulous now. "Piya this is real life, not vampire diaries or twilight!! Don't ever do this kind of reckless act again. EVER. Do you understand if something would have happened to you.. mom would never forgive herself and me? You didn't think about me?"

"Abhay whatever I did was reckless I know. But I did save your mother and that herb will now help her to control her thrist. Instead of thanking me you are scolding me? It was better then your proposal drama to get the potion from Alina. Yes I know everything. I went to Khurana House and heard jeh's mom talking to someone I donno.You didn't find any better way to took the potion from her?" She turned her face in fury. Abhay understand the situation is going out of hand so he decided it's the right time to take her there.

"Let's go. I want to take you somewhere." Abhay offered his hand but Piya refused it. Nevertheless, Abhay Raichand always knows how to mend Piya's heart. He swiftly took Piya in his arms and jumped from the window when Piya didn't even finish saying, "Abhay, What the hell are you doing?"

He made Piya sit in his car and rove fast with Piya screaming, "Abhay, where are you taking me?" With his rare signature smirk Abhay said, "You will see." He drove her outside Dehradun to a beautiful lonely place. Piya was mesmerized with the beautiful decoration around the place. It was near hilltop and it looks like someone has decorated the place for a very special reason with flowers, table, chairs, candles, curtains around the round huge stage like place and a piano sitting in the middle. Piya asked Abhay in amazement, "Abhay, yeh sab?" Abhay silently took her hand and walked inside, made her sit on a chair. He went sit in front of the Piano and started playing it. Then he did something Piya never imagined in her lifetime would happen. He started to sing softly.

"sorry,"
It's all that you can say?
Years gone by and still
Words don't come easily
Like "sorry" (like "sorry"...like "sorry"...)
"Forgive me,"
is all that you can say?
Years gone by and still
Words don't come easily
Like "forgive me" ("forgive me"..."forgive me"...)
"Forgive me..."

Piya was mesmerized with his beautiful voice caressing her ears with love and the sound of Piano melting her anger. All the pain, bitterness was melting down and coming out of her eyes as warm tears of happiness. His each words flowing in the air was telling how intensely he loves her...

But you can say, baby
Baby can I hold you tonight?
Baby, if I told you the right words
oooh, at the right time
You'll be mine

"I love you"
Is all that you can't say?
Years gone by and still
Words don't come easily (words don't come easily...)
Like "I love you", I love you...

But you can say, baby
Baby can I hold you tonight?
Baby, if I told you the right words
Oooh, at the right time
You'll be mine...

Abhay was looking at Piya all the time while he was singing, it was impossible till now in his existence but anything for Piya. Piya ran and flung her arms around Abhay's neck crying, "You sang for me.. it was soo beautiful Abhay. I'm sorry. I'm really sorry I shouted at you. I didn't trust you. I'm really sorry." Abhay hugged her back, resting his head on her hair and almost whispered in her ear, "I'm sorry too Piya. Please forgive me for all the things I did to hurt you. I'm sorry Piya I didn't trust you enough to tell you the truth. But I don't want you to get involved in the darkness Piya. I was just saving my mom and that time I did everything I felt is right to save her. Saying the truth to you would have put you and her both in more danger."

Piya slowly loosen the embrace and face Abhay, "I know Abhay you don't want to put me in danger but by not telling me you are hurting me, yourself in this case Alina as well. I know you worries about my safety and by creating this confusions you are making me reckless. Did you forget I stole Chand Uncle's reports from hospital when I had a terrible fight with you. Why did I still help them? You parents are as important to me as my own Abhay. Trust is the key word in a relationship. I want to trust you then you should trust me too. I know I didn't and I'm sorry for that but from now on no secrets."

Abhay smiled a little and touched her cheek with the back of his hand, "I'm sorry too Piya and I promise I won't keep secrets in the future. But you have to understand my world is not easy and there's many things which should be better unknown to you. That's for your own good. By keeping them far from you I can actually work easily."

Piya touched Abhay's cheek, "I understand but I can't see you anyone else Abhay. Maybe your public proposal to Alina made me mad at you. I'm sorry I slapped you." As a conciliation she kissed him twice on his cheek and smiled, "We are not perfect Abhay. It's my fault as well. I'm forgiven?"

"You are" and Abhay slowly bend down to touch her soft lips with his. He pulled her closer and Piya wrapped her hands around his neck. They kissed passionately making fireworks inside their heart and body turning the lonely night into an magical night for enigmatic Abhiya...

Here I end my OS guys. the song part is filmy I know but still Abhay Raichand would do anything for Piya. That I always believe. 😆 Maybe most of the people are familiar with the song. It's Baby Can I hold you tonight by Ronan Keating. here the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vf8jaZiV3U8&feature=feedlik those who haven't..please do listen once..beautiful one 😳 I know romantic part is very less because the conversation as much important. I didn't write what happened to Alina, how long it would take Haseena to recover, Dipannita etc because it's an OS and it eas mainly about Piya and Abhay. so ending it like this 😳

res..waitng tanzie
EDITED..i luvd it tanzie..gr8 writing..lol u made abhay sing!!bt i was a nyc hatke idea that he is nt in sadu mood..the words of the song were soo touchng..glad how u portrayd piya!fantastic,..n it was gud to make alina grey!
p.s.waise i slept at 5 and gt up at 7..n read 2nd part..nw rplyng in clg brk..khub bhalo laglo shokale pore!