Abhiya OS- In you I live. Last Part Updt Pg 14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

It couldn't hav a better ending.😍Awesome update dearie!! Loved it!!❤️

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sandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

wow superb update and nice ending thnx 4 pm

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Sumana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

nice OS snigdha 👍🏼👏... let me know whenever U start a new one buddy🤗...

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visma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

It was beautfully depicted the jealousy and the anger and how he tries to win her. But still I feel sorry for Alina she gets nothing finally in the end of the bargain. She is the same old plain girl left to her own to find her way out.

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inafa amjad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Thanx sweets. how was ur Birthday?

it was good... spent the whole day at home... and got phone calls and sms frm family and frends etc...😊

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Neytiri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Up2 expectation?snigs it ws beyond expctatn.superb,awsum.u r a fab writer dr.thnx 4 pm.

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cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

i luved it dear n thanx for the pm very much

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
Ohh snig... ofuronto valobasha for writing this para:

Know this always my dead heart dares to beat only with the courage of your love. It knows & is stubborn to love only you. I may be far from you, not holding your hands but remember I live in you. You can ask to every breath of yours, every heart beat, every cell of yours whose name they take. You will hear its mine. Abhay. Your's Abhay. Pia's Abhay.I can't hold ur hands in front of the whole world, but why do you fear when I love only you, live for you in you. "

I HEART it ❤️ It was really nice👏. .. Very well written... i hope they things will be alright between them very soon in the show. I hate to see both of them in pain... loved the OS 🤗

Valobasha tomakeo. 🤗

Awww Tanzie u don't know how nervous I was thinking Abhay is sounding melo dramatic. But that how I feel Abhay feels for Pia.

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: abhiora
dis os is lovely snigdha..so movng..u really xpressed their love for each other in a soul-touching way!i can say jst one word...WOW..

Thanx Sweets. Glad u liked it.