Abhiya OS- In you I live. Last Part Updt Pg 14 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29

Nice n sweet short update 👍🏼 will look forward to next update. thank u for the pm.

Thanx Shivani.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow dear I so loved it I hope ab Abhay pia ko aur hurt na kare.I wnt my happy Abhiya back teasing each other.Hope 2 c Abhiya happy once agn.😳



Thanx Shirish. Abhiya will be in next update.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome update! I kind of liked how Piya is ignoring Abhay because that is making him run after her even more! 😆 I wonder what plan Abhay has up his sleeve to bring a smile on her lips! 😉 Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊



@red that trick always works.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pia was browsing through the library for a book which can distract her from imagining Abhay & Alina together hand in hand. As the mere image brings in her a storm of emotions ranging from sadness to fury to heartbreak.

Her hand stopped at a Mills & Boons book titled "A Stranger to Love." "Love in itself is strange indeed," mused Pia to herself. She took the small book & settled herself in a corner of the library away from the prying eyes to avoid her class mates or Misha or worse Alina as she does not trust herself to behave properly in front of them.

She prepared to lose herself in the love story of Laura & Frank when she felt the familiar intense & loving gaze on her which left her with a tingling sensation. She did not turn around as she knows that only he is capable of making her feel like this. She opened the book & started reading. Abhay came & sat across her without any word. He spread all his workheets at the table further irritating her & started preparing his assignment. After sometime Pia peeked a glance at him & was surprised to see that he was completely immersed in preparing his project behaving as if no one was sitting there except him.

"As if I care." whispered Pia.

"Don't you?" enquired Abhay, who had thoroughly enjoyed each & every gesture of her irritation --- from turning the pages roughly, to clicking her tongue every few seconds, making tutting noises, crossing & re crossing her legs--- and is quite amused. Everything about her makes him fall for her more.

"No, I don't. And why do you care? I have far better things to care for Mr. Raichand." snapped Pia back.

"Ouch. That hurts Miss Dobrial." He replied trying his best not to laugh at her cute anger which he can see is far from over.

Pia rolled her eyes & returned to her book pouting her lower lips in a way which made Abhay exercise control over himself not to kiss her at least not here.

"I've heard girls look more beautiful when they are angry, I, personally will vouch for that now. You look irresistible enough to eat."

Pia looked at him shocked & saw him wink at her smiling that killing smile of his. All this while Abhay had not looked up from his work but now he is boring his hypnotic blue eyes on Pia's chocolate brown ones shining with love, warmth with a dash of mischief. Before Pia would totally lost it someone dropped a book & the connection broke. Pia stood up & walked away from the library not in a mood to let Abhay win again.

She decided to go home so went straight to the parking lot. As soon as she sat inside her car she was pleasantly surprised to find 5-6 bouquets of her favourite Orchids in her car. A golden scroll of paper tied with a red ribbon was there too.

She unscrolled it & found a message in Abhay' hand:

"When those eyes looks at me makes me feels I am the most loved one in this world. When those lips utters my name it sounds like a caress to me. When you engulf me in your arms they feel like heaven to me. Everytime you say those three magical words "I love you." I feel re-born each time. Know this always my dead heart dares to beat only with the courage of your love. It knows & is stubborn to love only you. I may be far from you, not holding your hands but remember I live in you. You can ask to every breath of yours, every heart beat, every cell of yours whose name they take. You will hear its mine. Abhay. Your's Abhay. Pia's Abhay.I can't hold ur hands in front of the whole world, but why do you fear when I love only you, live for you in you. "

"Just believe in us, our love. Everything else are lies. If you want to know how much I love You than I am leading the way you can follow me i.e your heart & it will lead us to a world of ours." Your's forever Abhay.

Pia looked up tears streaming down her rosy cheeks, Abhay's car was in front of hers. It's engine started & without any hesitation Pia followed it. Abhay's car led her to the scarcely populated area of the town. When Pia stopped her car she found herself infront of an old house which badly need maintenance. She saw Abhay walking towards the backyard of the house & followed him. When she turned around Pia was stunned to see the sight that greeted her eyes.

A huge oak tree serving the purpose of a vast canopy was decorated with Pia favourite orchids, huge garlands of various coloured orchid criss crossed each & every branch of the tree. A white sheet was spread over the soft grassy ground complete with a an open picnic basket, exotic fruits, juices, cakes & Pia's favourite chocolates already served in beautiful plates & glasses. But what caught Pia's attention--- and she sat to have a close look at it--- most was a beautiful rosewood hand crafted by Abhay only four words carved on it. " I am all yours."

Pia looked up with fresh tears of love & happiness rolling her cheeks. She stood up & flung herself on Abhay & cried her heart out hiding herself in his neck. Abhay hugged her back & tighten his hold on her.

"I love you Pia. Its only you for me. No one else." Whisperd Abhay to her. She looked into his eyes & realized that how much he loves her & how much difficult it all was for him too. She stood on her toes and planted a soft kiss on his lips. But Abhay who was craving for her pulled her closer & deepened the kiss & returning for once giving a free rein to his passion. They caressed each others face, arms back with their loving touches. They broke apart & looked into each other. Pia all flushed & panting whispered "I love you too.". And their lips came close to each other once again to explore each others love & tenderness.

With this I end my OS here. Thank to all of you agin for your kind support. Hope you like it. I apologise if it did not turned out to what you expected.

Love to all of u.🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Like it is an understatement Snigs...
I love it...
From their cute fight to their passionate kiss and hug...
Everything was picture perfect and I could visualize in my head...
Abhay Raichand does know how to make things go his way...hats off dude😉...
Thanks for the pm Snigs...
Cntnu writing such stories👏🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
thts really beautiful snigdha. very nice 👍🏼
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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may be far from you, not holding your hands but remember I live in you. You can ask to every breath of yours, every heart beat, every cell of yours whose name they take. You will hear its mine. Abhay. Your's Abhay. Pia's Abhay.I can't hold ur hands in front of the whole world, but why do you fear when I love only you, live for you in you. "
wow i like this para so much, such an golden words i tell you, i like this so much, beautiful os, just perfect in everything. nice end, great job 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Nice ending and a big one loved it abhiya make me go mad anytime thanks for such wonderful os
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
luved it a lot... abhay sure knws how to cheer up piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update snigdha 👏 loved it to the core...😳 it was so dreamy and romantic...m in abhiya dreamland nw...😍 thx to u. cvs wont fulfil our dream atleast here we cn find some peace. ur os calmed me dear 😳 thnx again.😊

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