Abhiya OS- In you I live. Last Part Updt Pg 14

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: abhiyan999
wow superb update and nice ending thnx 4 pm

Thanx & ur Welcome.

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: --sumana13--
nice OS snigdha 👍🏼👏... let me know whenever U start a new one buddy🤗...

Thanx Sumana. 😊 I'll try to write & will surely let u know. Waise bhi maine adhe logon ko PM deke force kia padne ke liye.😆

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: kuttu
It was beautfully depicted the jealousy and the anger and how he tries to win her. But still I feel sorry for Alina she gets nothing finally in the end of the bargain. She is the same old plain girl left to her own to find her way out.

Kuttu even I feel for Alina but what to do. Hope she find true love for herself.😊

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Neytiri
Up2 expectation?snigs it ws beyond expctatn.superb,awsum.u r a fab writer dr.thnx 4 pm.

Thanks you all are really kind.

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Peehu24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

aww...that was so beautiful..the note which abhay wrote...the words were mesmerising..i so loved it..it was a perfect ending..i can imagine each and everything..beautiful...

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smittu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

It was FAB...super and out-of-this-world. Cnat the CVs think of something like this----but ur post was perfect , I could literally picture Abhay and Piya doing all that , wow

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: peehu24
aww...that was so beautiful..the note which abhay wrote...the words were mesmerising..i so loved it..it was a perfect ending..i can imagine each and everything..beautiful...

Thanx Peehu. Glad u liked that note para. I was thinking of poetry but I am not a poet so gave up on the idea.

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: smittu
It was FAB...super and out-of-this-world. Cnat the CVs think of something like this----but ur post was perfect , I could literally picture Abhay and Piya doing all that , wow

Thanx Smittu.😊