'I Choose You' || Jay&Piya FF || - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
@ .Yamini.

Hehehee LOOOL trust me, the whole time i was writing that part i was like "Is this too vulgar? Nope, too much detail, this is too little" Ahaha after writing that section, i just never read it again 🤣 I keep thinking "THAT is not my writing. 😳 " Ahaha THANKYOUUU! -sniff sniff- you hooked to my writing? 😳☺️ hehehe i feeel so .. proud. :D THANKYOUU AGAINN!! ^_________^

@Eowyn

OHYES. They just cant let each other go -.- hehe THANKYOU SO MUCHH! ❤️ Ive always thought Neil was the second hottest guy in PKYEK 😳 & only a decent role would fit him right :D Hehe glad you liked it! ^_________^

@...Tich...

OFCCOURSE DI! Youu're added to the PM list :D hehe thank you. dil se. ❤️ It means alot to me di. :') <3 Nobody here writes FF's on JiYa anymore, and im pretty upset with that fact. OS's but no FF's. :( I will try my best to continue this as much as i can, and hopefully to keep you guys entertained throughout the whole thing. 😃🤗 One thing's for sure thoo. I will never discontinue thiss ff. 😉 No matter how stuck i am. :D hehe its just too close to my heart <3 :D THANKYOU AGAINN! ^_________^

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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ...Tich...

yashi, i just love this ff...
i'll comment in detail later but first of all thanks a lot for writing the first ever ff on jiya.. i wish i could kiss your hands..
lovely dear.. keep it up...
oh yes, please pm me the updates.. i dont want to miss this..


😳 ❤️ <333333333
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
SORRY SORRY SORRY!
You all can throw all your chappals and whatever you need to, at me :$
🥱
i know i suckk cause its been AGES since i uploaded :(

darasal, kya hua tha ki my computer crashed and it took me a while to regain all my files.
Unfortunately, the AR ff that is still incomplete .. many .. MANY of my parts went missing. :(
So, i thought to discontinue it. But then again .. i changed my mind. :3
My FF's are too special for me to just trash .. :(
Anyways,
enough of my bak bak ..

Here is MUCH-AWAITED .. Part 5.

_______________________________________________

At this point, I completely missed the last few sentences she said, lost in her eyes, and beautiful face.

I couldn't take it anymore

I grabbed her waist, as I saw the sudden look of confusion, and embarrassment cross her face. I slowly pulled her shirt a little higher, revealing her belly button, and well-toned waist.

"Jay .. Uh. Mujhe jaana chahiye. Uhh.. " She looked around, her throat getting tight.

"DEKHO! SHIT! Its 9! Kal office nahi jaana hai kya?" she yelled, trying to make it sound like a good excuse.

"Oh shaaddup Dobriaal. I wont let you go. Not now that you've yourself got me into this mess. Before I knew it, I dug inside her neck, kissing it, as if taking all her breath away. She had her head flung back, closing her eyes, as she grabbed fistfuls of my hair, urging me to go on, with her actions.

RING RING

Aahh. f**k this phone. Why now? I thought while not letting her go.

I dug deeper in her neck, trying to blank out the loud ringing noises.

"JAY! Jaoo! " Piya said, as she, with great difficulty, yanked my head out.

"Ugh!" I grunted, moving across the hall to grab the silver-cased iphone.

"Hello!?" I practically yelled at the caller.

Piya gave me a rude look.

"Ahem .. Hello?" I asked clearing my throat and trying to be polite ' er.

"Jay beta! Kaise ho tum log! Aur yeh kya tha? " spoke the other end.

"Maa! Main bilkul theek hoon! Hehe .. uhh.. who kya hai na, ki aapki jo yeh laadli hai, who mujhe bohoth tang kar rahi thi. Isilye .. he .." I stammered nervously, getting several more deadly looks from Piya.

Before I could utter a word, Piya ran across the room at the word 'maa' .

She grabbed the phone from my hand, and chattered away happily.

I just adored her. Her and her cute expressions.

AWW! Look at her. She looks like someone just took away her cookie. That faraway, sad look in her eyes.

Oh! There it is! The gleam in her eyes. Its back.

I smiled, looking at her smile.

While smiling, I looked at the clock that was also smiling at me.

Smiling smiling, I realized it was 9:30 . It took me a minute to register that in my slow bheja.

HOLY SHIT.

The match! Today were the finals of the World Cup! f**k f**k f**k! I missed the first half.

AAGH.

I skidded over to the couch, and plopped my self on it. Aggresively flipping the channels, Eyes focused onto the TV. Yes. I hadn't missed it. OHSHIT. Dhoni almost got out! How could he! That was an easy shot!! I mentally yelled at him .

"YEAH MAA! Hum log wahaan Thursday ko aa rahe hai! " I gleamed with happiness, as I took a small glance at my 'hubby' . Ohgod. Watching his lame matches again. Ugh.

Anyways ..

" Toh maa, Panchi kaise hai? I heard they're going to London! Woh aur Danish! " I asked.

Agh. Panchi and Danish were soo cute together. He always protected her . I took a small trip of flashbacks in my thoughts. He betrayed her. But he came back. Better than ever. I smiled.

"Hello? Piya! Jago! Kitni baar kahaan tumse, stop daydreaming! 'sigh- Yeh ladki bhi na!" mom said.

I bit my toungue as I ripped myself out of my thoughts. Once again.

It had been hours, and we finally moved from the same place. Me from the phone, Him from the tv.

We both had our pizza, and were now cuddling with each other. Like always. ;D

I lay with her, with sudden flashbacks playing in my head. How I was this close to losing her. How she choose me, instead of her long-lost love. How she, with no regret came with me, and made my lifestyle hers. How much she loves me. I sighed. It had been a long time since that all had taken place. I tried hard to let it go.

Jay entwined my fingers with his, deep in thought.

"Kya soch rahe ho?" I said softly , lifting his chin so he I could see his eyes.

He had a thoughtful, distant look as he blinked his eyes, coming back to the present.

"Kuch nahi. Bas.. aisi hi. " he replied dryly, caputuring my lips.

I let it go and gave in. If he didn't want to tell me then, its okay. He will-

"Baby. Hum log kal jaa rahe hai na? To my in-laws place? " he interrupted my thoughts.

I smirked at the 'in-laws' part.

"Yeaup. I hope ki yeh shaadi jaldi ho!" I said, with a dreamy smile.

"Aaacha. I see. Waiting for the wedding night eh?" Jay replied , coming closer.

"JAY! Shaatuup!" I said backing away, blushing profusely.

Jay just laughed and swept me away.

Next morning.

Today, was the day. I went to the praying room, with the idols there, and closed my eyes. Oh god. Please please please bless us on this auspicious day! I hope our marriage date isn't set too late. I hope everything goes fine. I love you god! I opened my eyes, to see Jay beside me, eyes closed, smiling. I grinned, and left the room .

We left for my mom's place, where the pandit was being called.

Jay seated himself next to me, holding my hand tightly, as if assuring me everything's gonna be all right.


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Its pretty short. Cause thats all that i have so far -.-

But don't fear, i will continue it now. (:

Guys, please tell me that you're with me :$

I missed you all. <3

Much Love;
Yashi ❤️
Edited by RainOnMe - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
hey yashi..
after a long time you updated..
i just loved the part..
i hope there wont be any INTERRUPTIONS in the marriage..
do update soon...
would love to read more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
ok honestly i love your writing and i did follow the FF but was just too lazy to comment 😆anyway i'll keep this reserved for now..i have my exams starting tomorrow :( will edit this soon😳maybe after they are over..

*edited 😆
ok so i couldn't stop myself from reading the part you posted ☺️ as soon as i got some free time 😆
coming to the update 😳
mom ke phone ka timing ;@ couldn't she call a bit late? :/ lmaoo
and aw you make them so adorablee<3 the whole phone convo part screams *adorable* ;D
and ishh i can't wait for them to get married 😍..i hope there are no problems and stuff ;) 😆

and im online from my phone so can't hit the like button :|

update soon..will be waiting :)
Edited by ..SheWolf.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
@ ...Tich... Hahaha, thank youuu so muchh sis ? :D

@..SheWolf.. AWWW, thank youuu so much yaar! That is SO sweet! :'D 🤗
LMAOO ☺️ Yeahh im a very happy-go-lucky writer .. :/ LOL i hardly have any big "problems" in my stories 🤓 ahahaha it can get boring at times, but i hope i can entertain you guys :'D ?



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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Aahhhkay, im back again :) Not that i went anywhere .. :$

LOL anyways, here is .. Part 6 (;

ENJWOY! 😃❤️



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At this point, I completely missed the last few sentences she said, lost in her eyes, and beautiful face.

I couldn't take it anymore

I grabbed her waist, as I saw the sudden look of confusion, and embarrassment cross her face. I slowly pulled her shirt a little higher, revealing her belly button, and well-toned waist.

"Jay .. Uh. Mujhe jaana chahiye. Uhh.. " She looked around, her throat getting tight.

"DEKHO! SHIT! Its 9! Kal office nahi jaana hai kya?" she yelled, trying to make it sound like a good excuse.

"Oh shaaddup Dobriaal. I wont let you go. Not now that you've yourself got me into this mess. Before I knew it, I dug inside her neck, kissing it, as if taking all her breath away. She had her head flung back, closing her eyes, as she grabbed fistfuls of my hair, urging me to go on, with her actions.

RING RING

Aahh. f**k this phone. Why now? I thought while not letting her go.

I dug deeper in her neck, trying to blank out the loud ringing noises.

"JAY! Jaoo! " Piya said, as she, with great difficulty, yanked my head out.

"Ugh!" I grunted, moving across the hall to grab the silver-cased iphone.

"Hello!?" I practically yelled at the caller.

Piya gave me a rude look.

"Ahem .. Hello?" I asked clearing my throat and trying to be polite ' er.

"Jay beta! Kaise ho tum log! Aur yeh kya tha? " spoke the other end.

"Maa! Main bilkul theek hoon! Hehe .. uhh.. who kya hai na, ki aapki jo yeh laadli hai, who mujhe bohoth tang kar rahi thi. Isilye .. he .." I stammered nervously, getting several more deadly looks from Piya.

Before I could utter a word, Piya ran across the room at the word 'maa'.

She grabbed the phone from my hand, and chattered away happily.

I just adored her. Her and her cute expressions.

AWW! Look at her. She looks like someone just took away her cookie. That faraway, sad look in her eyes.

Oh! There it is! The gleam in her eyes. Its back.

I smiled, looking at her smile.

While smiling, I looked at the clock that was also smiling at me.

Smiling smiling, I realized it was 9:30 . It took me a minute to register that in my slow bheja.

HOLY SHIT.

The match! Today were the finals of the World Cup! f**k f**k f**k! I missed the first half.

AAGH.

I skidded over to the couch, and plopped my self on it. Aggresively flipping the channels, Eyes focused onto the TV. Yes. I hadn't missed it. OHSHIT. Dhoni almost got out! How could he! That was an easy shot!! I mentally yelled at him .

"YEAH MAA! Hum log wahaan Thursday ko aa rahe hai! " I gleamed with happiness, as I took a small glance at my 'hubby' . Ohgod. Watching his lame matches again. Ugh.

Anyways ..

" Toh maa, Panchi kaise hai? I heard they're going to London! Woh aur Danish! " I asked.

Agh. Panchi and Danish were soo cute together. He always protected her . I took a small trip of flashbacks in my thoughts. He betrayed her. But he came back. Better than ever. I smiled.

"Hello? Piya! Jago! Kitni baar kahaan tumse, stop daydreaming! 'sigh- Yeh ladki bhi na!" mom said.

I bit my toungue as I ripped myself out of my thoughts. Once again.

It had been hours, and we finally moved from the same place. Me from the phone, Him from the tv.

We both had our pizza, and were now cuddling with each other. Like always. ;D

I lay with her, with sudden flashbacks playing in my head. How I was this close to losing her. How she choose me, instead of her long-lost love. How she, with no regret came with me, and made my lifestyle hers. How much she loves me. I sighed. It had been a long time since that all had taken place. I tried hard to let it go.

Jay entwined my fingers with his, deep in thought.

"Kya soch rahe ho?" I said softly , lifting his chin so he I could see his eyes.

He had a thoughtful, distant look as he blinked his eyes, coming back to the present.

"Kuch nahi. Bas.. aisi hi. " he replied dryly, caputuring my lips.

I let it go and gave in. If he didn't want to tell me then, its okay. He will-

"Baby. Hum log kal jaa rahe hai na? To my in-laws place? " he interrupted my thoughts.

I smirked at the 'in-laws' part.

"Yeaup. I hope ki yeh shaadi jaldi ho!" I said, with a dreamy smile.

"Aaacha. I see. Waiting for the wedding night eh?" Jay replied , coming closer.

"JAY! Shaatuup!" I said backing away, blushing profusely.

Jay just laughed and swept me away.

Next morning.

Today, was the day. I went to the praying room, with the idols there, and closed my eyes. Oh god. Please please please bless us on this auspicious day! I hope our marriage date isn't set too late. I hope everything goes fine. I love you god! I opened my eyes, to see Jay beside me, eyes closed, smiling. I grinned, and left the room .

We left for my mom's place, where the pandit was being called.

Jay seated himself next to me, holding my hand tightly, as if assuring me everything's gonna be all right.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________

I was hella nervous, as butterflies fluttered in my stomach.

The doorbell rang and i felt my heart jump right out of my chest as i gripped Jay's hand tighter than ever.

"Sshh baby. Don't worry." he whispered soothingly.

After 20 mins of chatting, the pandit took out his .. book? I dont know what you call it :/ Its where the pandits match the 'kundlis' and stuff. I reall-

"Piya Jaiswal .. aap ek raschik[scorpio] ho na?" he confirmed.

"h-haan." I stuttered, eyes intently focused on his expressions.

"Aur .. Jay Khurana? aap ek kumbh [aquarius]?" he asked, looking at Jay.

"Uh . I think so" he said, unsure.

There was a long pause.

"Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai." he said, his tone sounding distressed.

My heart just dropped 100 feet from a building. I could feel tears coming to my eyes.

"Yeh rishta ka milan kabhi nahi hona chahiye." he looked up at us.

Jay's grip suddenly loosened . I felt everything around me blur as my head pounded in every way possible.

"K-kya?" Jay said, his voice berely a whisper.

"Beta .. dekho. You are an air sign, and she is a water sign. It won't work." he said.

"A-are you sure panditjee?! Phirse check kijiye na!" he said, his voice breaking.

I already felt like passing out.

The pandit sighed. "Okay .. aapka janamdin kab hai?" he asked me.

"February 20" he said, desperately hoping for different results.

"Haan.. toh dek-ek minute. Febraury 20? 20?" the pandit said louder.

"Yeah." he said puzzled.

"Par tumhare 'janam kundli' (birth certificate) mein toh February 19 likha hai!" the pandit screeched.

"Haan mujhe pata hai! I was born on February 20th, but unn logon ne by mistakely woh date likha tha jab meri mom hospital mein admit hui thi. It was a mistake from the hospital's side." Jay explained.

"Toh .. tum ek kumbh nahi ho?! " the pandit exclaimed.

My head stopped spinning as i stood up.

"WHAT?" i almost screamed.

"Toh .. what am i?" Jay answered , still confused.

"Tum ek meen [pisces] ho!?" the pandit too, got up, sounding excited.

Jay had no choice but to get up as well.

"Haan par yeh sab ka matlab kya hai?" he asked annoyed.

"You both are WATER SIGNS! This is one of the best jodi's there can be! Tum dono ko bohoth khushiyaan milegi saath hone par!" he screamed as well.

My ears had turned deaf at that point. Best jodi? Khushiyaan? Everything went still.

I jumped into Jay's arms as i hugged him tightly.

Tears had finally broken the gateway and were spilling down like there was no tomorrow.

All my relatives that were seated around watching the commotion with their jaws open, suddenly started congratulating others.

Jay held me as he was losing me forever. His grip was so tight and i could feel him crying.

I came out of his grip and held his face. I knew exactly how he felt. The sudden feeling of having to let go of each other.

I knew it was gonna be awkward, but i kissed him anyway. A soft, assuring one, as i heard gasps across the room.

After we let go, my mom's face was red at the sudden kiss. I looked around at all the aunties giggling. ugh -.-

After the food was served, my mom went on asking the pandit about the best date to get married. Apparently the best date was a month from now.

It's too long, but still . its enough time to plan the whole rasams. I was sooo excited! I strictly told my mom that i'd do the designing for the marriage, since it was always my dream. WOW. i sighed. That feeling .. when you realize that you're gonna spend the rest of your life, with that one person. That one person that means the whole world to you.

"Piya!" My mom called me, to help her clean up in the kitchen. I looked at Jay, who was sound asleep on the couch. It was a pretty emotional day for both of us. I smiled as i made my way to the kitchen

...

When we got home, me and Jay just fell right onto our bed. Too exhausted to do anything. I slept alongside him, who held my hand tight. The innocent look on his sleeping face made me want to kiss him like there's no tomorrow. I held his hand tight and fell asleep.

'

3 hrs later.

I woke up with a start as my iphone vibrated along my pillow. I opened my eyes unwantingly and checked who was calling.

MOM

The screen read.

Oh shit! I was supposed to be selecting designs for our house and telling my mom 2 hours ago! Shit shit shit!

I jerked myself up as I took the phone and ran out of the room to not disturb Jay.

"Haan maa .. uh .. a-aap kaise ho?" I stuttered, trying to mellow her mood down. I could smell the flames through my phone.

"CHUP KAR! Koi kaam tujhse nahi hota! Chal chod abhi .. I will select the designs myself." My mom said as my eyes widened.

"MOMM! Yeh MERI shaadi hai aur mujhe hi usse design karni hai!" I said, frustrated at the thought of leaving the decorations to my mom.

" Idiot .. abhi mujhe 1 ghante mein teri designs nahi mili na .. toh dekh." She said, as she cut the call.

I slapped my forehead as I went to turn on my laptop.

A few minutes while browsing, Jay's arms engulfed me in a hug.

"Jay?! You woke up? Want me to make coffee for you?" I asked as my focus shifted from the laptop to his sleepy face.

I held his face in my hand as he nodded.

After 2 cups of coffee and 20 mins of wedding planning, I looked at the decorations with a satisfied smile.

Red and Gold were my colour schemes. Such beautiful, majestic colours.. I said in my head proudly.

After I was done, I sent it to my mom ' thank god I finished before time.

I sighed as I lay back on the couch, resting my eyes.

"Baby, you need to teach me how to make such delicious coffee." Jay said as he sat beside.

My eyes opened as I smiled shyly.

"Aye hayyeee.." Jay said as he came closer and gave me a peck on the cheek.

I turned to him and lay my head on his hard chest.

"Wow.. can you believe it jay!" I squealed. "Just one month! ONE MONTH and I'll officially be .. Piya Dobriyal."


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Hope you liked it! ❤️ Please hit the like button! & If you want, mention this ff to other JiYa fans as well .. so i can get more feedback and readers 🥱

Edited by RainOnMe - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
hey yashi<3 will read this part soon so i guess reserved :P

Amu.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
awesome yashi...
thanks for continuing after long time..i just loved this part..
for a moment even i was like what the.. after kundali thing didnt match..
but hey did he say the truth being meen rashi?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
@ ...Tich...


Thank youu di! ❤️ haha sorry if i confused you :$ Wait, what do you mean "the truth being meen rashi?" 😲
Edited by RainOnMe - 13 years ago

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