(update-8 sep) OS My name is Trouble (pg 13, 14)

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
dat was truley mindblowing tanz!!
i just loved abhay-mathali's convo, every dialouge was telling its own story of love n hatred!!
when love cross d boundaries of madness, its become d reason of ur destruction, either u destroy urself or ur love n dat is well shown by u!!
abhay-pia scene was reli an emotional ride!!! it was beautifully written!!
n d way u covered d whole story in second part!! its truely awesome!!
hats off to u tanz
continue soon!!
n love u loads n a big hug to u🤗

Thanks dear. 🤗 emotional part is over. next part is memory back time and action time. i will finish it within next update.😊

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
It was very nice. Please let Abahy be succesful in explaining everything to Pia. Waiting for ur update.

Thanks Snigdha... before that Jeh will take her to Maithli

Originally posted by: Selinapiya
Tanzie!!!
it's awesome...update soon...

Thanks a lot Seli 🤗

Originally posted by: peehu24
ausum tanzie...fab...as usual...abhay came to pia to save her life...gosh!! he will never change...but this update was beautiful...i m very eager to read next update...hope u update soon...thanks for pm...

Thanks Peehu 🤗 Bodyguard hai na free ka 😆 Next update is full of action, betrayal and heartbreak. heartbreak of Piya, Abhay, Jeh and mostly Maithli

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: pratiksha2009
Nice & wonderful update, i love the way pia trust abhay, very well written , awesome , i love it so much

Thanks a lot dear 😳

Originally posted by: PrincessKhizra
Wao Tanzie, ur writing style is vry charmig yara. Its my 1st xperienc on ur fic n i really enjoyd it. Although i detest Maithli, still she sounds intrstng n elegant in ur fic...
Keep it up lv u

Thanks dear...welcome to my page 😳 I portrayed her a bit like Katherine from vampire diaries 😕

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
wow tanzie awesome update I loved it superb yaar.jAB aBHIYA PASS AANE HOTE HAI YEH JEH & Metz beech mai aranga daal dete hai but I m sure Abhay phir kuch karega.So I m f9.Nice dear,Plzz continue😳
Luv U🤗

Next pari is full of action and heartbreak. and off course time for Piya's memory to come back 😉 i will finish it within next update... so things will happen fast...very fast 😕

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aarendsena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

wow..nyc wrk ssry checkd d updates nw only...fantastc wrk

thnks 4 d updates... update soonn

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NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Metz is four steps ahead of everyone I say😆

The girl is sure a firecracker...

AbhI ya convo was superb Tanz...

Kudos👏

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Eowyn
Metz is four steps ahead of everyone I say😆
The girl is sure a firecracker...
AbhI ya convo was superb Tanz...
Kudos👏

Thanks a lot Nidz 🤗 I just tried to portray Piya's psychological condition right now which is seriously imbalanced due to Abhay's behavior... glad you liked it 😳

and im having so much fun writing about Metz...i love it 😆

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Khizra jabeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

OhhhMG... Whole chap was fab tanzie, u r really vry talentd. I lvd the way u showed every 1 planning n trying to double cross othrs. Feel vry sad 4 ABHIYA :( poor LOVE BIRDS have to suffer a lot... Update sooon dear.

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Arians

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

awasome part

thnx for pm

cont soon

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: PrincessKhizra
OhhhMG... Whole chap was fab tanzie, u r really vry talentd. I lvd the way u showed every 1 planning n trying to double cross othrs. Feel vry sad 4 ABHIYA :( poor LOVE BIRDS have to suffer a lot... Update sooon
dear.

Thanks a lot Khizra...welcome to my page 😳

I'm really glad you liked it...hope you will enjoy reading further 😊