(update-8 sep) OS My name is Trouble (pg 13, 14)

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: sunflower52
Wow nice ending all I can say is Love Conquers All.

Thanks a lot 😳

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Super awesome update! I felt bad for Maithali at the end when she gave her life up for Abhay and during her last breaths how she said she would always be his! But I'm super glad Abhiya are safe and now together! You did an awesome job with this OS! 👏

Thanks Deepi. I wanted everyone to hate metz and sympathize with her in the end...thats what the OS is about 😳 im really humbled you liked it dear 😳

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Tanzie dear first of all thank you coz you made Pia slap Abhay.

And this was a good update I don't know how you wanted it to turn out but it is good. 🤗

Snigdha, join the club babes...Shrish and I also want the slap...he deserves it...then Piya can hug and kiss him 😉 thanks u liked it swty 😳

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NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Gripping,intense and action packed end👏

Metz died valiantly as Piya said...

Jeh- lost a lot but he did right thing by leaving...

AbhIya is together now and will be for a long time

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

written to perfection TANZIE just caught up with this OS. I think i have read the first 2 update but then lost track with finishing the ending.

I will try to catch uo with your other works when i have time.

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: matwamango

written to perfection TANZIE just caught up with this OS. I think i have read the first 2 update but then lost track with finishing the ending.

I will try to catch uo with your other works when i have time.

Thanks a lot Ayesha... I hope you will like my other works too... do read my new SS with Heena.. Beautiful Disaster... I think you will like it 😳