(update-8 sep) OS My name is Trouble (pg 13, 14)

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

great ending tanzie. and your last quote was very nice.

Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

tanzie loved it maithili died show me na to os me hi sahi thanks for the pm

Edited by strawberryrashu - 14 years ago

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

finally i m here

hey tanz first of all a bear hug to u for giving a perfect end to ur os...

tanz u managed it so well, otherwise wrapping up d whole story in 3-4 updates is reli difficult, although its my personal opinion ,coz when i tried to finish an unknown desire widin 3-4 updates, it never happened😕

i loved d whole set up of d story,it was power packed , wid abhay-pia's roller costal emotional ride!!!

i loved dat part specially where pia said dat she wl kill herself...n after dat d way abhay accepted everything!! beautiful!!!

then whole fight sequence was well written!!!

jay-abhay scene was nicely written

n loved d last part where mathali proved her love!!!

overall as an os this was reli very nice!!!

n pls nw update tilld end of timne...i m dying to read nxt part!!

luv u 🤗

Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago

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anjali

@adnilover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

lovely ending. Thanks for the PM

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srija

@-srija-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Wow tanzie it was awsm n heart wrenching.at least maithli died 4 gud.hats off 4 this update.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

nice ending tanzie👏, action packed😆👍🏼 abhiya's reunion was awesome😳 so touching...

felt bad for jeh, but i guess that's how it was meant to be

atleast metz did 1 good thing🤔

thanks for the pm dear

take care

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

It was great towards the end. Maithli towards the end did prove her love. She may hate Pia but she loved abhay and may be Sid as a friend in need. Jai seems to have lost everything. That was sad.

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Awesum update tanzie
the ending was superb
beautiful OS
i loved it
though , i didnt like metz but i'm glad dat she saved abhay !
Whooopieee !! Finally. . Abhiya together forever!
Thanks for the pm
tc

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Ume Salma Kakal

@sunflower52

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

Wow nice ending all I can say is Love Conquers All.

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: princessark
Amazing! I really never liked Metz. Oh, i do hope that abhay and piya will be ok and where is abhay taking piya? I hope that abhay stays close to piya during these 2 days. Could you write some abhiya romance scene cos these days we lack the romance of abhiya in the show? I wish that in some epsiode they would show abhiya romancing in the boys locker room or their other famous hot spots. Anyway, i got some gr8 news. I have been accepted by one of the best school in my country to do my bachelor studies. So i will be busy starting frm sep 11. It is a 3 year course and i have to study hard. So, i may or not able to have time to view your lovely os and ff. If i get a free time, i will read them. God bless you and thank you.

Congrtz dear... hope you will have a great future 😳 I updated the last part. i enver intend to reach that spot coz the ending was meant to be like this for Maithli. Though she was evil but she proved her love while leaving the world forever... that's what the OS was about. i will write another OS on Abhiya romance. no problem 😳