JiYa OS ll No Love - Page 2

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

this was..wow. all of your OSes manage to leave me completely speechless .. i have no idea what to say. i mean, i really want to say that this is one of your best pieces so far, and it is.. and then after this you'll come up with a even better piece, and i honestly don't wanna take my words back for your previous ones, either..'cause they were awesome, too. so.. erm, bhaavnaon ko samjhoo. 😆

this was completely angsty.. i agree with someone here who said that not all writers are great storytellers, you can write from a POV, you can describe the scene, people write differently - and all of your OSs are written in a completely different style, analysing the character inside and outside. i know i've said this a lot of times..but a true writer manages to make the readers 'feel' what the protagonist is going through and also visualise them in the place physically - you do both. this OS required more of the 'feelings' anyway, & they're brilliant portrayed, as usual! and.. yay.. no RESERVES. 😆

Originally posted by: forbiddenlove

This was so tragic...so potent! I'm glad you didn't give a happy ending to this one ;) It hit me hard esp towards the end...beautiful <3

Originally posted by: -Untamed-

Mais this is freaking BEAUTIFUL. You are definitely one of my favourite writers on IF. Can you please write stuff with your own characters too? I'll read em, I promise!

I am in love with your writing <3