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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteteddy

hey iqra it was fabolous
loved it . so pia has already started falling for him . pata nahi when this abhay will get some akal hehe .
i think it is panchhi or sid in the car
thanks for the pm n update soon . hope ur exams were good .
take care .

oh...thank xx yaar ...

really really good guest n thank for been part of my game... feel happy ... i will tell u in the next update if uu r right or wrong...

n my exams were good ... n ok...


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Posted: 13 years ago
hey..awesome update..loved it...piya is surely falling for abhay..would love to read more...pm me when you update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: peehu24

hey..awesome update..loved it...piya is surely falling for abhay..would love to read more...pm me when you update...

hi thank xxx ... i will pm uu .. when i will up next time. ...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_vivian_luv

hello every one...thank xx for the support sooo far ...plz contain commenting ... do give u r opinions ...ii do read them of...n plz press the like button... 😊😛😃😆😉

part 8

pia was in her room she come home after having a bad party...bt she was in a gud mood ..coz she was thinking about some thing...for some weird reason she was think about abbya ...she was think about was wat he said today ... he told her the true meaning of love ...pia remembered word by word wat he said... she kept smling to her self...for some how pia was falling for abbya ..she didn't know abbya that... all she know that he was nice...pia got abbya's number coz of there project work ...pia talkin to her self..less ring abbya... then she got up and grabbed her phone from her coner draw...then dialed his number...after 3 or 4 ring some one picked the phone up...

AS U ALL KNOW ABBYA IS FROM A MIDDLE CLASS FAMILY...HE DOES NOT HAV ANY SEVERS WORKING FOR HIM... HE HAS TO DO ALL THE WORK HIM SELF... ABBYA'S MUM HASINA RAICHAND SHE WAS A HOUSE WIFE...ABBYA'S DAD CHAND RAICHAND HE JUS OPENED A NEW FACTOR ...THE WORK WAS STILL GOIN ON... AND ABBYA RAICHAND...

on the other hand.. in abbya house... hasina was upstairs in her room...and abbya was sitting in the liven room reading a book... chand was out for work... then chand come in..abbya hasina ..hearing chand she came down stair... abbya came to... guess wat.. u know that deal i told u about .. is final ..n nw we will be rich.. rich... abbya ..nw i will get uu every thing u want.. we will be rich.. that g8 new dad.. yh that bril... hasina abbya less celebrate ...juz then abbya got a call ... mum dad u lots carry one.. i got to rake this call... juz be bak...

pia:hello...it that abbya??

abbya: yh its me abbya.. who is that?

pia:am pia..remember me...

abbya: after a mint... ho..hey ...confused... yh hi pia.. (in his head thinking why she rang...) yh how come u rang me...

pia:i juz rang to ask how the project work in goin... have u done u r part ..of the work..

abbya: yh .. i have completed the work .. have uu done ur...work..??

pia: yh .. i have ... forget that .. wat u doin??..

abbya: nothing i was siting down n ...studying ..

pia:do u study all the time??

abbya:no.. i dont.. u tell me wat u doin??

pia:well i went to a a disco party today...

abbya:why?? ..

pia:coz .. my sister is coming from usa .. next Thursday .. that why..

abbya:ho..ok... that.. g8... so how was u r party...

pia:well...pai went quite...she was think or words to say...she had tears in her eye...then she said it was ok..

abbya:pia u sound upset ... r u cryin... why? tell me wat happened ??

pia:nothing.. am ok...

abbya:pia .. u know cant lie... so tel me wat happened...?

pia:..ok... i went.. to the disco/...soo pia told every thing to abbya:... abbya was very angry .. he closed his fist .. as he wanted to kill that boy...

abbya:pia... its ok.. everything will be fine.. dont worry ...n plz dont cry...

pia: ok..abbya... n thank..uu.. i feel a lot better nw...

abbya:no .. problem pia.. bye.. talk to uu later.. see u in collage...

pia..bye abbya..see u in collage.. tehn pia put the phone down ...as abbya did is well...

pia was really really happy...she was coz abbya ...understood her... ...she was happy coz ...today she saw ... a very new different soft side of him.. that she has never seen that before... she always ...thought .. that ..was a angry person.. bt oday he was totally different...then she put her phone down.. then turn the light n went to bed ..😊

the next morning .. pia woke up feelin vey nice .. n fresh ... she was looking forward to go collage today ..then she got ready n got changed in to black jeans and a pink top with a blue bow..she but some jeweler on a long lover heart necklaces then she look in the mirror...Ho pia ..abbya difo fall in with u...then she though about wat she said..OMG!! am soo stupid why do i want abbya to fall in love with me.. Ha...while she was stil thinking pia mum call from down stair pia come n have u r breakfast..n come quickly u r getting later..for collage..😊

ok..pia 's mum Madhu Dobriyal..she is a house wife who look after pia and pinchi bt she was in usa ans she was comin bak next week..misha was madhu's 3rd daughtert she was the lively one at home..she made the most noise misha alwys come to pia's house and stayed there ... arnab dobriyal pia's dad ..he is a business man the most know and well respected business man in Dehradun ..every one know them and there family ...dobriyal was the richest family in town...

madhu:pia come down be quick..misha has already got for collage...

pia:yh mum am comin.. then she went down stair and quickly grabbed a toast and went ...

madhu:have breakfast probably come n sit down ...

pia:no mum..am gettin later i will eat it in collage.. ok bye .. love both of uu ..

misha was waiting for pia out side the collage... then pia came when she came out of her car she saw misha waitin for her.. she walked over to her...

pia:hey mish... how come u left mee.. n came ... with out mee..
misha: sorry nw ..coz i jus came coz some one is comin today...
pia:who who??? tell mee...
misha:juz a friend told u na...
pia:ho..ok ..juz a friend.mish...ho...
misha:yh..juz a friend..ok...
pia:ok...juz then abbya arrived pia called him ..so he came over to pia n misha...
abbya: hello
pia n mish:hey ..
pia: have you compelet the work fo the project...
abbya:yh .. i have .. have u done u rs>?
pia:yh.. i have too...
abbya:mish have done you work ...
misha:no.. wat work...
abbya:you project work on love... hate...n more ..remember...
misha:oh.. that i didnt do any work .. my partner will do all the work .. i dont have too ... hahhaahah ..
while abbya pia n misha was talking a black car arrived at the front of the collage .. every one started at the car not knowing who was in the car.. all the girls ...want to know who was it.. every one stated talkin the black car...❓
who is in that car ??
is pia falling in love with abbya?
is that person good or bad??
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hi every one..plz read this FF n do comment on it.. i do read them all...n i amm really really really sorry for the relate in the FF it is coz i had exams n i was buzy revesing bt now they are finish .. so i will cont soon ...
soo every one i want to make this FF bter n nw i want to addpic to the post .. of the dress ..pia .. n abbya ..n more... bt i do not know ho wto put pics on the post.. bt my dear firend told me.. to use imgur n download pics on the post..but for some reason my imgur in blocked on my laptop..so i cantr use that .. bt if any one any idea tohow i can put pic on this post them plz let me .. knoe.. thank uu ...
ok.. every one .. i have a game for uu lots..
can u guest who is that new person will be... >??
it can be a boy or girl..
less see who can guest first n get it right ... i will tell every who guest it right ... in the update... ..
less start...

sorry for any mistakes...

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Thnx For The Luv And Support So Far
Iqra xx

INTRO- pg1
part 1-pg 3
part 2-pg 5
part 3-pg 6
part 4-pg 8
part 5-pg 9

part 6-pg 12

part 7-pg 14

part 8-pg17

plz comment ...love read themm 😊
thank uu xxx

iqra xx

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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic...sorry m not available this day so i cant reply u...awesome update...i miss abhiya now...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidushisang

fantastic...sorry m not available this day so i cant reply u...awesome update...i miss abhiya now...

heyy dont worry bwt it... n thank uu... i miss abbya tooo
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello every one sorry for the late update... i know some ppl will be angry .. coz i have update an FF after agess... sory its coz i been having exams... bt all done nww.. juz one left ... in june ... then finish till nxt year .. soo happy..

chap 9
Recap: pia n abbya r going a project on love ..while they were talkin about thier project a black car stopped... n who is in that car..
Every one was staring at the black car... the door open : a tall hand-some good looking boy was standing.He was wearing blue jeans with a white top and black jacket.
Vishal Gandhi
All the girls : .. OMG he is fit ... n good loooking... he is mine .. no he is mine...
He walk over to pia abbya n misha..
misha: hey ... dudee
Kabir Singh Rathore : hey misha ...
both of then hugged each other ...
misha n kabir were best firends snice child hood .. kabir also known piya though misha ... they have been firend for a long time...
kabir liked piya but piya never though of him like that way ... soo they only firends ..
kabir:hello piya
piya:hey .. kabir ...
kabir .. wanted to give pia a hug too ... before piya ... never use to give a hug .. but today she give him a hug .. she was giving a hug to kabir but looking at abbya ...
misha : dude when did u get bak .. from london .. n how u never told me.. am not talk too u nw
kabir : soz mish ... u know ... i went to give a surprise and i came bak yesterday ..
kabir look at abbya .. n give hime .. wired .. look ... like he knew him... for year s... mish hw is this ??
misha: its abbya ... he is working with piya ... in a collage project ..
kabir: ok .. hi abbya
abbya : hey ...
then the bell wen for mishs's lesson ..
misha : guy am off... n kabirrr u come with meee... i need to talk to uuu .. both of them left ..nw only piya n abbya was there ..
both of them looked at each other n then looked away...
piya: have u done all that workk i asked you to doo ..
abbya: yh i have ...
piya: ok abbya less go to clas nw we will have to tell the calss about it.. both of the walk to the class n sat down ... on their normal places .. they did mot sit together ... then miss V walked in the class nad every one stopped talkin ... the room went silent ..
then she sat down ..
miss v: ok class to today we are goin hear on what other member of the class did as their project.. about love war and family . ok we are goin to hear from misha and her partner ... both of the stood up and went to front of the class
misha : ohhh... ok
hmmm well our project was about family ...
mmm family is really important ... really important .. really important ..
miss v: misha ... speak ... then ...
misha:mam that what we only found ..
miss v: mishhaaa ... she said in really arcoss voice.. u will fail this ..
wait if you can answer my question then you might not fail...
misha :ok mam ..
miss V: why is family important..??
misha: well mam family is important beacuse they are always with uu they suppot u in all ur problem they u love.. more then any one ... they will always be there for uu when u need then.. so it really important to have a family ..
miss v stared at misha ... and then misha finish and looked at miss v ..
misha: miss v u ok?
miss v: misha ... u have not faill... coz that was the answer i was looking for ..misha smile and bowed to the class..every once clapped .. and then both sat in ther places...
then few more groups did their project ... finally piya and abbya was the last once to and give their speech..
miss v: piya and abbya its ur trun nw.. both of them stood up and looked at each other then walked to the front of the class!!
miss v: piya and abbya tell about ur project .
piya:miss v our project was about ..
abbya:we reseached on love.
Piya: do any one know wat love it?? she has the class.. do any of u have answer which sums up the word love.????
one of the boys in class shoted out .. i know .. love is when u like some ..
abyya:no..
misha:i dont know wat love it .. coz i dont have a heart ..
piya:we know that mish..
miss V: class quite down less seee what they have to say about love..
piya:love is feeling u get when you like and love some one .. this feeling is very strong and power full .. this can make you die for the person you love...then piya looked at abbya...
abbya:love can happen to anyone it can happen anywhere .. u will not know if u love that person till u lose them..
piya:if you love some one you should tell them before its too late.
abbya:if the person u love does not love uu then let that person go .. if that person comes bak to uu then it ws always your but if it does not come bak its means it was never your..
piya:it also means that u will find an even better in ur life ... who u will love more then ... any thing...
abbya:when you in love u can look at the person for hours and u will not get bored..
piya:love can make uu very strong and weak at the same... time ...also .love is the best feelin in ur whole life which u love the most..
abbya:if u love ur best friend but he/she does not love uu then still be there for them... as a best firend .. as wat ever they nedd juz be there for them... for ever.. so be that who they trust the most...in the world.. if u cant be the person love .. then bee there best firend...
piya:TRUE LOVE NEVER DIES...
the both of then said the line together...
abbya and piya: every one will fall in love no matter wat happens.. in the future...
then they finish...every one in the room was starning at then inculding miss v ... them misha stood up and clapped for then... then every one esle joined themm tooo miss v stood up.. too..
miss v: this was the best presentation i have heared about love... in my whole teaching time in collage...
u guys were amazing brill... sooo gud.. well done both ouuu ...u lotshad the best group project in the classs well done.
piya:you mam ..
abbya:thank u very much mam..
then of them went bak and sat in ther places ... misha started talkin to piya ...while abbya was juz to busying think ..about something..
then the bell went ...
every one leaveing the class room when ...
abyya:piya please can you wait a mint here i need to talk to uuu...
misha left pia...and went with kabir...
piya:abbya wat do u need tell me??
wat willl happen next??
wat is abbya goin to tell piya??
why was kabir lookin at abbya in a bad way???

sorry for any mistakes...

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Thnx For The Luv And Support So Far
Iqra xx

INTRO- pg1
part 1-pg 3
part 2-pg 5
part 3-pg 6
part 4-pg 8
part 5-pg 9

part 6-pg 12

part 7-pg 14

part 8-pg17
part 9-pg 19

plz comment ...love read themm 😊
thank uu xxx

iqra xx

Edited by luv_vivian_luv - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
grt story
read it today...
lvd abhay pia's contrasting nature here.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi! iqra nice ff and please pm me from next update and add me as ur buddy and please dont left this ff incomplete please and also complete ur other incomplete ff... please., i luv pkyek and abhiya
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

hi! iqra nice ff and please pm me from next update and add me as ur buddy and please dont left this ff incomplete please and also complete ur other incomplete ff... please., i luv pkyek and abhiya

HHeyyy trihnawaliya .. aww thank xx for likelin my ff... n will not defor not leave it incompelet .. coz .. i luv pkyek too .. n i love abbya ... n that part ... i ws write then i got to busy .. so didnt finish ... bt will do ... ok .. thank uuu xx

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