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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow nice update. Plz add me in ur pm list nd pm me next time.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jiya_tariq

Wow nice update. Plz add me in ur pm list nd pm me next time.

thank xx n i have added uu ... n also will pm u next ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
chap 10
Mount college
Abbya called piya n asked her to stay behind as abbya wanted to talk to her!!
piya: hi abbya wat do need to talk to me about??
abbya :well piya i need tell u something
piya:juz tell mee wat is it ?
abbya looking bdown at the floor said
abbya:piya -piya hmm am leaving the town ... am moving away
piya:oh why ?
abbya:my dad has some business there which he has short out soo i though i tell u that am leaving
piya:abbya why do want mee to know .!! its not like i care .. u were a nice and it was nice meeting uu abbya bye nw n hope ur like ur new house
abbya:is that how u want to be then it will be like this !! bye piya
both of then walked in oppsite directions towards the door ... abbya diffenent look bak he was hoping that piya would call him bt she didnt abbya left the room ...
piya didnt look too!!
abbya leaves the town .. this is the last time he spoke to her before he left !!!!
Dobrial House'..]
Pia's room'.



Piya was lying on her bed with her eyes closed and hugging a pink teddy close to her bosom. She felt restless for some strange reason. Strange because she couldn't explain it to herself. Or rather she could but she didn't want to accept it.
How could she accept that she was missing Abhay on the very first day- scratch that- evening of his absence?
Why did she feel sad when he told her after class that he was going to Mumbai for a few weeks to help his Dad in his new deal.
She opened her eyes with a sigh and stared at the alarm 3'o clock in the morning. She had never seen that time before in her life. Piya Dobriyal was a girl who valued her beauty sleep but right now sleep was far away from her.
She closed her eyes forcefully and willed for sleep to come. Though it was a futile effort. THen she sat up and got her secret diary and started writing...
Dear Diary,
i dont know wat to say i feel soo different today? i cant sleep i cant eat anything i feel soo different bt dont know why ... for reason i feel upset that i said bad things to abbya .. i juz want to say sorry ... sorry for wat i said .. wish i could say sorry right now ... it feels like a part of my body is missing like as if some one has made big hole in my heart ..but i dont know .. why .. why do i feel like that ... aghhh wish i could stop this feeling .. this way .. it is making meee soo cross n madd !!!! she closed her diary and put in under her pillow and then she hid her face in the pillow trying to sleep...

Mumbai

Abhay's old home

His room..



Damn! For past three hours he had been trying to read through this file. He had been stuck at one single sentence since 12'o clock and now it was almost nearing four.
When I should be soundly sleeping in my bed , here I am sitting up trying to make sense of a simple file Abhay thought ruefully.
All the blame goes to Piya he added with irritation.
Because at the end of that one sentence her face came waltzing into his mind - the smiling angelic yet naughty Piya. It was followed by her crestfallen face when he had told her about his trip to Mumbai.
He also had a nagging feeling that he had wanted to say something else, add something more but he failed to do so.
Aaargggh! Abhay screamed mentally before throwing down the file and throwing himself on the bed.
He had never behaved this way. Abhay Raichand was a very rational, practical human being . Right now he was irrational.
he trying to sleep but he coulnt .. soo he started writing .. abbya hated tell people how he feels about thingssoo he always writs them down .. he writes all his members as he think they are important.he got a pen and then started writing
Dear Diary
i feel upset .. i cant belive piya said that to mee .. i know i souldnt feel that way .. but i cant help it .. it feels soo bad ... my heart has fallen in pieces .. i know am bad .. and its the right thing to stay away from piya bt i cant help .it . i juz cant .. wish i could tell how i feel about her .. wish she feels the same for meee i cant livee nww my head is messed up .. OMG!!! Aghhh why do i feels like that !!!
he closed the diary and throwed the pen ...and then he walked across the room window n stared at the moon...
Next Morning

Dobriyal House'.

Piya came down the stairs groggily. Sleep had finally blessed her with it's visit at 5'o'clock. Unfortunately for her she had to wake up again at 9 as he mom kept calling her incessantly. She didn't bother with dressing up and came down in her pyjama's. After all it was Sunday.
She gave a confused look to the main hall. Why was it decorated in white streamers, balloons and flowers. Her eyes widened thinking that she had forgotten some body's birthday or worse yet her parents wedding anniversary.
No that can never happen. Piya Dobriyal was adept at remembering such dates.
Just when she was about to head to the kitchen to ask her mother, the front door almost flew open and in stepped.

Piya (screaming) - "PANCHI!"
She felt like banging herself for forgetting about her sisters arrival.
The decorations was for her back- to - home Party. Piya slapped herself mentally.
Panchi was grinning from ear to ear. She was home after a long time and right now it sank into her how much she had missed her home.


Panchi (screaming equally loud) - "KIDDO!"
She rushed forward and hugged her kid sister.
Piya - "Ouch birdie you will break my bones'.I am still light weight and you still heavy FYI"
Panchi - "Hey that's rude baby sis'.I am just back from US and mind you I have been dieting and working out"
Piya smiles and scans her sister from top to bottom. Panchi had indeed lost weight. But what was the fun in being a sister without the leg pulling.
Piya - "I think you might have just lost a microgram of fat, Fatty"
Panchi - "You" she raised her hand to hit Piya playfully. Piya laughed and ducked. They started running about the house just like olden days.
Madhu and Arnab had reached the hall by then and smiled at their daughter's antics. They were 22 and 26 but yet their childishness was heart warming.
Madhu (intervening) - "That's enough girls'.I can't have my hall torn down and Panchi, you are just back from a long flight"
Panchi (hugging her mother) - "All my tiredness flew out of the window once I landed here mom and saw my home and this kiddo"
She gently pulls Piya's cheeks.
Arnab - "Where is my hug my cutie fatty"
Panchi - "Awww my handsome Papa" she gives him a bear hug which is soon joined by Piya.
Piya (pouting) - "Why did you come back Panchi?"
Panchi - "Excuse me madam this is my home too"
Piya - "I know that'but now poor mom will have to make extra food na'.elephant has flown in from US"
Panchi - "Now you are gone"
With this the girls run upstairs while their parents try to stop them.
madhu: am soo happy to see our daughters happy
arnab:yh i know i am really too
madhu:i hope the happniess stay forever..
arnab:it will stary for ever...
tears of happniess
both piya and panchi run up to piya's room panchi was chasing piya .. ... both run around the 3 time n then finially panchi got piya n both of then sat on her bed ..
panchi:nw kiddo tell me everything i went to us
piya:ok wat do u want to know..
panchi:hws college ? hws mishaa ? n every one else ..
piya:yh college is good n yh mishaa gud .. still up to her old jokes .. n yh the whole is guddd...
panchi:that nice.. need to meet mishaa ...its been long time snice spoke to her...
piya: ok n yh u can talk to her she will be very happy to see uuu
panchi:gud .. hmmm tell me hw many boyfirends have u had snice i left .??
piya:none .. i dont waste my time after boys .. n i dont need to go to them they come to mee...
panchi :lying to ur sis ..kiddoo ...
piya:am not fatty
panchi:u must have fallen in love with one guy aleast ...
piya:stopped.. n though about it...mmm no mooo i dont love anyone ..
panchi: okkk as u say i believe uu kiddo .. then she stood up and started towards the bed room door ..
piya:where r u goin fatty ho sorry sis ??
panchi:watch it .. kiddo .. n yh am going out need to meet some old firends.. need catch up..n see wat they have been doin..
piya:ok .. u goo n take ur time noo hurry ..
panchi: i will kiddo ..
panchi ... left the room and went out to see her firends ..
Thank GOD she went out ... or esle would have i plan the party ..
wat will happened nxt?
hw will piya n abbya meet again?
wat will happen at the party ?

sorry for any mistakes...

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Thnx For The Luv And Support So Far
Iqra xx

INTRO- pg1
part 1-pg 3
part 2-pg 5
part 3-pg 6
part 4-pg 8
part 5-pg 9

part 6-pg 12

part 7-pg 14

part 8-pg17
part 9-pg 19

plz comment ...love read themm 😊
thank uu xxx

iqra xx





Edited by luv_vivian_luv - 13 years ago
trishnawaliya thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice yaar... both r thinking about each other forgetting their sleep
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update.Gud 2 c Abhiya thinking abt each other😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice chapter i am fine thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks 4 pm now its confortable to read d update, both have same feeling but these idiots dont understand this and ya dat panchi and pia part nice but it should be chapter 10 na not ch. 11
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww!! Abhay lft DD!! And Pia wz SOOO rude 2 him!!!
Cont sooon!!
-Gauri
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good job Iqra...
Must say the additions have made the update more interesting...
Party at Dobrials means something is gonna happen...
Waiting for that
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

thanks 4 pm now its confortable to read d update, both have same feeling but these idiots dont understand this and ya dat panchi and pia part nice but it should be chapter 10 na not ch. 11

ohh thank xx . n yh damm i forgot will chage it nwww ...



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