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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Firstly Congratulations for 5 years at IF

Handling your personal life and giving us the best of stories

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Wow its truly a Phenomenal Start

This is only the first chapter and you already got me hooked

Yash was in his second year of Engineering when he created a software earning him millions so he decided to drop out of college and earn millions instead which means he is witty and very intelligent to be creating software until now and only did two years of Engineering

it seems that he was deeply in love with Ishita , he respected her a lot and after her though he has been with women he never got close to them intimately so something tragic may have happened with Ishita to be separated from her

but on seeing Aarti something changed in him , her innocence , her chirpy self , her smile , her touch , her eyes all yeild out to his inner self and this made Yash want her .

yes it seems now he is growing to be obsessed with her if a man can stay away from women and suddenly is extremely attracted to one gets restless thinking about her that subconsciously he has already fallen for her though Yash calls it lust and he feels if he spends one night with her then she'll be out of his system .

as a saudagar is all willing and ready to pay any amount just to have Aarti , it seems he has already fallen weak at some point

though now he plans to get Aarti knowing well that she is a girl with virtue and principal still he goes ahead in making a deal with her , her refusal just made him furious and anxious while her slap was something thats not surprising at all so I would have thought Yash would be ready for that but instead again he was angry and threatening her .

but the moment she faints Yash waste no time in rushing her to hospital , again concern and the fact that he wanted to know what is wrong with her why she always faint and when Dubeyji told him that Aarti has cancer I'm sure something surely would break in him

Aarti still in college full of life and spunk also doing Engineering , a daughter that loves and cares for father a lot to even come out in the rain and make sure her father has his meal that is so endearing

the first time she meets Yash the way she spoke about her and apologizing to him for disturbing his route was truly sweet while Yash got lost in her

their second meeting it seemed more like Yash was holding care yet for him it was all a plan to just have her .

when Aarti came to him for a job , Yash could not tell her that he wants her so made excuses so she could come to his beach house where he proposed the deal she wanting money for exchange of her body just for one night .

and I admire Aarti though desparate for money but her virtue and her principals are strong and high she declines Yash offer and also tells him that both she and her father had lots of respect for him but she'll rather die then sleeping with him .

when Aarti fainted I thought what now hope Yash does not take advantage of the situation but then again I thought back to the fact that he made a promise to Ishita which means he will only be with Aarti with her own consent . I loved the fact that Aarti slapped him though I always feel when girls do such things it may cause them more problems but I enjoyed it

now making Yash angry and herself but I think Yash will yearn more for her .

Aarti having cancer is a shocker and probably this is what both Dubeyji and she meant when they told Yash that Dubeyji's life is in danger

looking forward to seeing Aarti's strength in fighting her illness

Aman and Aakash both are extremely close to Yash and again something about Yash not wanting to tell Aman about Aarti makes me think that Yash is no Cassonova

I like the entire scene with Kilash too at the tea stall and again showing how Dubeyji and Kilash both are men of principals and when Aman they respect heardworking men then surely both Aman and Yash are good men themselves

I can't wait for chapter two to see what will happen and what you have installed for us

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Leevi05

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

awesome update cant wait for next chap

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Shaun

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Mind Blowing Start

Aarti is a daughter I think all fathers would be proud off

while I find Yash arrogant yet at the same time he seems to have had a soft heart once

promising Ishita never to get involved with women but now he is all prepared to break his promise

just to have Aarti

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SillySoni

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Update soon di

I'm waiting

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sass8
👏Five years , a milestone indeed , congrats on the anniversary, times flies . 🥳🥳
Here is another winner in the making.
With Bargain or trading come consequences and boy did Yash got a doozy...His action led him to a path he could not have anticipated or forseen.
What a dilemma, for all the characters, the proud father who has to put aside his principles for his daughter, the sick daughter who lost a little innocence with Yash demands, Aaman the friend who will definetely not approved Yash behaior and of course Yash the hero, not so hero after all since he acted under false pretense. The scene is set and lets see what's next .
Its interesting cause I feel like Yash is so misguided here, which does not excuse his blackmail but I felt pity more than anger at the attemps to sleep with Aarti in his house. It was of two mind, lust and disgust (becausee deep down he knew he was wrong).
It is so heartwarming to see the relationship between Aarti and her father. He adores her and she's his most treasure possession. He also has a healthy look at life, knowing what is important. And because of that he may be able to see beyond the facade of Yash despicable actions.

This is about Yash, through and through and how he'll grow from this experience ...or not. In any case next chapter asap 😉

Thanks so much Sassy 🤗

You are right. Every bargain, every trade comes with a prize and Yash is about to pay the heaviest of prices he could never even dream of. Well he actually deserves it.

Satyendra is indeed a proud father and he has taught is daughter the value of principles and integrity and honor. No wonder Aarti reacted the way she did when Yash tried to make that Deal with her. Money in return of her virtue. But her principles and her integrity stopped her from committing the biggest mistake of her life.

Let's see what will be the consequences of the so called Deal now that Yash knows about Aarti's illness.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mbakwe
This is awesome. You do have a way with words. Congratulations on your fifth year on this forum. Tnx for keeping it active.

Thanks for the wishes and thanks for commenting 🤗

It really means a lot to me when some new member comments 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Tessaloni
Celebrating five years of whining 🤪 but also five years of amazing talent 👏, five years of warmth , five years of love ❤️, and an eternity of friendship!

Blessed to have met an alien like you! 🤗

CONGRATULATIONS!

Thanks so much DQ 🤗

I wouldn't have completed these Five Years had you and others not been there for me and with me.

Bless you all ❤️

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: bongalisoo
Congrats on ur 5th year
Wow what an explosive start
Wonder whats Yash past and back story that made him into the man he is today
Aarti has cancer ,I thought Mr Dubey was sick not Aarti
Can't wait for more update soon

Thanks so much dear 🤗

Yes this was an explosive chapter 😆

I hope I keep on giving you such explosive updates and keep you interested in my stories 🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: SoniyaLovesGc

OK di I will wait for you to surprise all of us with new update. I'm eagerly waiting to see Yash reaction and I'm glad that Aarti is not damsel in disaster, that slap really needed to show Yash how wrong he is to take advantage of a a girl like this.

Yash's reaction will be something that you have not even imagined about.

That one slap from Aarti showed him that he was so wrong to use money to take advantage of someone's helpless situations.