AarYa OS Phechaan (Identity) - Chapter - 9, Page - 29 - Page 20

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Hi Nikki

loved the update

the turn of events is surprising indeed now I am wondering who is this new sister my thoughts are with Paridhi being the child

Do continue soon 😆

Originally posted by: cuteariya

after such a long time we got this story 🤗

seriously i didn't like that aarti & maya came to help those monsters even after they got only humiliations from them👎🏼

for the first even shobha open her mouth & blast on those father sons👏

i felt that she had to choose between her own kids & had to ignore aarti

but she did wrong to aarti what she got choosing her so called sons?

she got nothing from her so called husband & sons rather then humiliation insults🤢

if only shobha was enough strong to take her own decision & fight for herself & her daughter

seriously satyendra aakash & ankit r really worst & disgusting as husband father & brother😡

seeing aarti & aman bonding & how much aarti proud of aman aakash & ankit felt jealous & guilty😡

finally aarti & maya pour their pain disappointment & anger👏

after all those pain humiliations insult satyendra finally realize how badly he wronged his whife sister & daughter

glad aarti & maya didnt trust him👏

but in my opinion aarti maya & shobha shouldn't forgive satyendra aakash & ankit for their deeds

shobha was guilty for ignoring aarti for those good for nothing father sons

poor vidhi still scared to trust pankaj & she is right as he broke her heart & trust😡

OMG shocking revelation aarti have another sister?😲

that means satyendra had an affair?😲

continue plz

Originally posted by: sass8

Its so great to have you back writting 😊 Nikky

And now the long awaited confrontation begins 😡

Shobha heartfelt refusal initially gave me a shock like the rest of them, but she only told the truth about the men behavior in this house , to which she has been complicit. That said how to go against centuries of society dictate and blackmail, because forcing to choose between your children is simply cruel. Shobha didn't know better. 😕

I am at least glad to see that Aarti is capable of anger, fury . Of course she is not helping Satyendra , but fulfilling her duty despite her good for nothing father, which is testament to her spirit and inner strength. She had it in her to rebel but like a good daughter she abided rules. And thank-g-d she had Maya as a mother to help her through the pain and bad treament. Satyendra and his sons are learning a life lesson here, the irony of the dance award.

money, helping the business would be funny if not for the serious nature of the affairs.

I still say that Satyendra is lucky, his salvation came from a daughter he rejected and neglected all her life. I suppose I can ease up on him for asking for forgiveness but I am not ready to forgive and forget. Like Manav said, having a difficult upbringing is too easy of an excuse to justified his atrocious actions. poor Aarti she did her dut , yet she is more confuse then ever about her father .

And wow , cliffhanger much 😲 !!!! how could you Nikky..you've made some changes I see.. who is she, what did Satyendra do again, and more importantly how did Pankaj knew because he dragged him to the house right, or did he? so many question.

Originally posted by: sakshi0123

Hey..just saw ur ff and I really enjoyed reading it very much it's an amazing story even u r an amazing writer Can't wait to see how u are going to unfold d story waiting for next part Eagerly...

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Well, well! What a twist!! I personally think Paridhi and Aarti are twins but Shoba was made to believe her other baby died, or Shoba was made to believe she gave birth to a dead baby in her last pregnancy because Satyendra's father did not want the "burden" of another girl. I can very easily see that happening! And like everyone else I believe that girl to be Paridhi... I think it will be harder to forgive him for concealing their daughter, then it would be had he cheated. As terrible as her life was, at least Aarti had an identity, the other girl never was given even that dignity.

But then what is identity? Can you really call it such when your freedom was restricted, when your choices were zero to none simply because you were born female? Aarti at least had the option to start anew, to carve out her own, but are all girls born under such circumstances really that fortunate? How many have lost their lives due to such beliefs? How many still are miserable because of it? Could we consider Aarti's sister fortunate for growing up in an orphanage where despite lack of belonging, she still had freedom to choose her own life? Make her own identity?

My pondering has gone a bit deeper on this one, it's just that you really are that good a writer! The topics you write on are well chosen and thought out. Now even I am inspired to work on such a topic but doubt it will be as well executed!

Well done Didu 👏

Originally posted by: taahir004

Outstanding and so Flamboyant Chapter

Shobha's statement to both Maya and Aarti was just in creditable I never thought that she would stand up to the men in her house but I'm glad she did and I liked what she said too

" Maya and Aarti stop right there , who gave you the right to enter this house which belongs to men .

a house where a woman has no place , no value and no respect "

this is a mother that never stood up for her daughter neither was she proud of her daughter's achievement nor she supported her daughter when she was thrown out of her in laws house

today this mother seems to have learned her lesson and bounces back throwing insults to the men of her house .

oh and when she calls them as Super Powers as they have ruined the business she further says they will bring it back to the top because they have such ego they will not accept help from the daughters but because of Arjun been present and he knows that help is much needed to save the business he takes the envelope from Aarti

I loved and admire both Aarti and Maya having such confidence to stand up to Satyendra and his sons telling them exactly what was needed

Aarti telling her father the money she is giving is the money she received from her winning of the dance competition but its a debt been paid for all the years she lived in his house got food , clothes , shelter and education this is the payment , now I just feel once a child reaches that point telling her father that it simply means she wanted to show him just how he treated her all these years

Yash explaining Aarti whether he has a son or daughter he would treat them equally love them and teach them values

I had never thought that Shobha had a difficult life but worst her sons never truly respected her and in my eyes that is wrong totally wrong

a mother is a blessing in the family

Satyendra was actually polite to Shobha , though for the first time in his life , his wife , his sister and his daughter stood up to him but I somehow think there must be some kind of realization going on in his mind hopefully he will treat the women of his family with respect .

Originally posted by: VICKY126

Dear nikky,it's nice having you back.thanks for the pm also. I've also been inactive of late.great story.at least Aarthi's father realized his mistakes and is willing to atone.update soon dear