AarYa OS Phechaan (Identity) - Chapter - 9, Page - 29

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sakshi0123

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Posted: 6 years ago

#181

Hey..just saw ur ff and I really enjoyed reading it very much it's an amazing story even u r an amazing writer Can't wait to see how u are going to unfold d story waiting for next part Eagerly...

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 6 years ago

#182

Well, well! What a twist!! I personally think Paridhi and Aarti are twins but Shoba was made to believe her other baby died, or Shoba was made to believe she gave birth to a dead baby in her last pregnancy because Satyendra's father did not want the "burden" of another girl. I can very easily see that happening! And like everyone else I believe that girl to be Paridhi... I think it will be harder to forgive him for concealing their daughter, then it would be had he cheated. As terrible as her life was, at least Aarti had an identity, the other girl never was given even that dignity.

But then what is identity? Can you really call it such when your freedom was restricted, when your choices were zero to none simply because you were born female? Aarti at least had the option to start anew, to carve out her own, but are all girls born under such circumstances really that fortunate? How many have lost their lives due to such beliefs? How many still are miserable because of it? Could we consider Aarti's sister fortunate for growing up in an orphanage where despite lack of belonging, she still had freedom to choose her own life? Make her own identity?

My pondering has gone a bit deeper on this one, it's just that you really are that good a writer! The topics you write on are well chosen and thought out. Now even I am inspired to work on such a topic but doubt it will be as well executed!

Well done Didu 👏

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Shreyas2
Hi Nikki
Hope you are feeling better now. Please take care of yourself.
Thank you for the PM.

I have been inactive for a long long time now.
Not sure when I will find time to be active again.

Anyway when I do manage to find time will read and comment.

My username too had to be changed which I never wanted to. Glad you still thought of sending me a PM.

Take care and lots of love
Shanti

Shanti, you changed your username?

How are you?

I'm better now. Was not feeling well few months ago due to which I had become less active. Now that I'm much better I got the mood to work on all my pending and ongoing stories.

I can understand why you aren't much active. Personal life have started to keep all of us busy.

You don't have to read any of my stories. I had accidentally sent you PM about the updates thinking that you must be a new reader.

Do try to drop in whenever you get time and if this forum is still open.

It was nice to hear from you after such a long time. You also do take care of yourself. Hopefully I'll see you soon.

Love you too...

Nikki...

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Fandu
Nikki it is good to have you back. Hope you are doing better with your health issues and back to normal. Love the update. Never expected this twist. I do feel little bit for Satyendra and the boys as you are product of your past. However the the wounds that they inflicted on Arti and Maya are too deep and will take time and genuine redemption from them for Arti and Maya to start healing. Poor Shoba having to bear not only the atrocities but have to deal with maybe possible illegitimate child. I feel it is Paridhi who is the daughter Satyendra is talking about. Looking forward to the update to clear all this. Take care.

Hey Mandy how are you?

I'm better now thanks for asking. And also a big thank you for patiently waiting for my updates and not giving up on me.

Now that I'm much better I'm trying to concentrate on and finish this story and work on Saudagar and P&P.

This twist was decided out of nowhere. I hope I won't disappoint any of you with this twist.

I also didn't want Aarti or Maya to forgive them so easily. And that is how I want to keep it till the very end.

But eventually they will be forgiven as I like to show happy endings 😆

I'll update it by early next week. Before that I'll update Saudagar so I'll see you then 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Teemah
Hi Nikki, I'm new here and it's good to have u back after so long, how is ur health. I've read all ur stories so far and I love it, I especially love the twist in the story and I'm thinking Paridhi is the daughter. I'm still finding it hard to believe satyendra repented. pls continue.

Take care and it's nice knowing you.
Teemah.

Hey Teemah welcome to the forum and welcome to my writing world 🤗

My health is better now, thanks for asking 😊

It feels so good when I see a new reader commenting especially when most of the old readers have stopped reading.

Thanks for reading all my stories and loving them. It means a lot to me. As it encourages me to write further.

Satyendra is surely repenting but he won't be forgiven so easily. I'll try to do justice to why he is repenting.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: saf24
Nikki it is great to have you back and fantastic update as always. I really liked that Aarti and Maya did not just fall back into old ways after Mr Dubey gives his explanation of how things turned out. I loved the difference in personalities that came out in the update. Fab job as always.

Thanks so much Saf.

Aarti has gained strength now that she knows thay Yash will always be there for her and support her. Yash has become her strength. Due to which now she is able to speak what's in her heart. It won't be easy for her and Maya to forgive Satyendra that easily.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: ksen
great part
loved it
thanks for the pm

Thanks Ksen 😊

I'll update the next part by early next week. Before that I'll see with the next chapter of Saudagar 😊

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#188

I'm truly sorry for been so late to comment

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#189

Outstanding and so Flamboyant Chapter

Shobha's statement to both Maya and Aarti was just in creditable I never thought that she would stand up to the men in her house but I'm glad she did and I liked what she said too

" Maya and Aarti stop right there , who gave you the right to enter this house which belongs to men .

a house where a woman has no place , no value and no respect "

this is a mother that never stood up for her daughter neither was she proud of her daughter's achievement nor she supported her daughter when she was thrown out of her in laws house

today this mother seems to have learned her lesson and bounces back throwing insults to the men of her house .

oh and when she calls them as Super Powers as they have ruined the business she further says they will bring it back to the top because they have such ego they will not accept help from the daughters but because of Arjun been present and he knows that help is much needed to save the business he takes the envelope from Aarti

I loved and admire both Aarti and Maya having such confidence to stand up to Satyendra and his sons telling them exactly what was needed

Aarti telling her father the money she is giving is the money she received from her winning of the dance competition but its a debt been paid for all the years she lived in his house got food , clothes , shelter and education this is the payment , now I just feel once a child reaches that point telling her father that it simply means she wanted to show him just how he treated her all these years

Yash explaining Aarti whether he has a son or daughter he would treat them equally love them and teach them values

I had never thought that Shobha had a difficult life but worst her sons never truly respected her and in my eyes that is wrong totally wrong

a mother is a blessing in the family

Satyendra was actually polite to Shobha , though for the first time in his life , his wife , his sister and his daughter stood up to him but I somehow think there must be some kind of realization going on in his mind hopefully he will treat the women of his family with respect .

Edited by taahir004 - 6 years ago