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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Thanks for this 'frustrating' update ! At the end of the chap I felt like 'murdering' someone !!!! That was the degree of frustration , I was undergoing !!!!! I am never one for wife/mistresses or 2 -4 wives ! I get sick seeing such people, BUT here , Aarti is neither a 2nd wife nor a 'mistress' as the true meaning goes !!! The blame of the situation goes to maam Aarti !!! She messes up 3 lives plus the lives of 3 kids !!! It would have been kinder to Arpita if Aarti DISAPPEARS from all their lives !!! I am that mad at her ! [ Sorry for taking out my frustration ] ! You have given work to my adrenaline ! Thanks and please do not be 'mad' at me 4 my comment .

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piyasa

@asmani

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

One of the benefit of coming online after a few days of gap is you get to read 3 parts at a time of a wonderful interesting story😃

The story started beautifully With 2 individuals

Falling in love and theirlove nest

Then come prashant and Arpita who are too good to be believd😆

Prashant who was advising yash anou hiding about arpita and hurting Aarti , did the same thing to Aarti by having an affair while he was married to aarti

Otherhand aarpita very well knew yash did not love her but still wanted to stick to him and bear his presence as well. Arpita might be a great character here but i don think her to be a lohical one. She is selfish. Had she really been great. She shoul have tried to unite aarti n yash.

Yash tried enough. I dont want to critisize the poor guy though he took an impulsive decision og marrying arpita

Aarti what should i tell about her. She wanted to be great. I really dont think hiding about engagement was really a great offence to reject ur love repetatedly considering the situation.

She is the most to blame for entire situation

Please continue and sort out the mess😆

And i want a happy ending pls😉

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bongalisoo

@bongalisoo

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

What a mess they lives have become ,arpita is a god sent to help aarti the way she did and acept ansh as her own same goes to aarti for acepting the twins they making the best of a misrable situation even if it could of been avoided ,everyone is to be blamed here, aarti for overreacting and pushing yash away, yash for lieing and overreacting by marrying arpita, then arpita for agreeing to marry yash knowing his in love with someone else ,hope everything gets sorted out soon ,great update,continue soon

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Bee, looks like you've set the forum on fire with this story 😆.

But then that's the sign of a good writer. To make readers react. Yes sometimes the reactions are severe, but then that is what makes it all the more interesting and challenging 😳.

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Bee, looks like you've set the forum on fire with this story 😆.
But then that's the sign of a good writer. To make readers react. Yes sometimes the reactions are severe, but then that is what makes it all the more interesting and challenging 😳.

i am loving the different view points😆

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Fandu

@Fandu

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

B a great story so far, very interesting, intriguing and very complicated. They all are to blame for their situation, some more than others. What I am looking forward to is how this is going to get uncomplicated, and how they are going to get out of this situation. Although Arpita appears as a good character, she is very selfish, she married Yash knowing that he loved Arti very much and he did not love her. To me if she really truly loved him she should have set him free and helped him to get Arti. The other two could not think rationally as they were hurt, angry and confused from each other's actions. I am not excusing their actions, just that they could not and did not think logically as they were going through emotional roller coaster. Arti was too much into sanskars and duty and did not think things through by that she did not think that three lives will be ruined. Yash could only fight so much under the circumstances, especially when Arti kept rejecting him time and again. Despite all this he should have not rushed into marrying Arpita after his last encounter with Arti. As I said they are all to blame for this situation and yet again the children are the ones who are affected. Thank you for exploring the complicated human nature. Looking forward to the next update. Great writing. Thank you.

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Bee, looks like you've set the forum on fire with this story 😆.
But then that's the sign of a good writer. To make readers react. Yes sometimes the reactions are severe, but then that is what makes it all the more interesting and challenging 😳.

Loving the controversy

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Fandu
B a great story so far, very interesting, intriguing and very complicated. They all are to blame for their situation, some more than others. What I am looking forward to is how this is going to get uncomplicated, and how they are going to get out of this situation. Although Arpita appears as a good character, she is very selfish, she married Yash knowing that he loved Arti very much and he did not love her. To me if she really truly loved him she should have set him free and helped him to get Arti. The other two could not think rationally as they were hurt, angry and confused from each other's actions. I am not excusing their actions, just that they could not and did not think logically as they were going through emotional roller coaster. Arti was too much into sanskars and duty and did not think things through by that she did not think that three lives will be ruined. Yash could only fight so much under the circumstances, especially when Arti kept rejecting him time and again. Despite all this he should have not rushed into marrying Arpita after his last encounter with Arti. As I said they are all to blame for this situation and yet again the children are the ones who are affected. Thank you for exploring the complicated human nature. Looking forward to the next update. Great writing. Thank you.

You comment is a spot on analysis / summary. It's like you were in my head. All the comments on this chapter were good and interesting as well because of the varied reactions and perceptions of the readers. But what you have written is what I really wanted to bring across. Thanks so much. Loooved your comment😳❤️

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: bongalisoo
What a mess they lives have become ,arpita is a god sent to help aarti the way she did and acept ansh as her own same goes to aarti for acepting the twins they making the best of a misrable situation even if it could of been avoided ,everyone is to be blamed here, aarti for overreacting and pushing yash away, yash for lieing and overreacting by marrying arpita, then arpita for agreeing to marry yash knowing his in love with someone else ,hope everything gets sorted out soon ,great update,continue soon

Thanks for the comment. Agreed. Everyone is to blame. Everyone made bad choices here.