Pv OS / SS An answered prayer - Epilogue - page 23 - Page 6

Originally posted by: B-onesie

The intention was to reply to comments and then to post but it was just a long day and I got too tired and gave it up. Sorry.😳

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

that means the chapter is finished then... My forgiveness can always be earned with a nice treat 😉

Originally posted by: B-onesie

We will just have to wait and see.😉

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Parts copied and pasted, parts edited😛😆

First up, I really really love the Arpita in this story! The family could not really fight Yash with her standing by him. Still I know that Yash choosing to stay married gave her the confidence to support him. But I still can't get away from her decision to marry Yash when she knew he loved another. she set them all up for a life of unnecessary heartache. yet I blame Yash more than her for approaching her with marriage again. after all one is not always wise when in love, and it can make one selfish as well...

Ever the tubelight is to blame for the mess they are in!😡Arpita was willing to walk away but he went and made a stupid decision! Did he expect Aarti to be fine from one day to the next??? Really! After so much betrayal? Didn't the fact that she gave herself in a moment of pain tell him what she was going through? Stupid tubelight!😡

And what a sacrifice Aarti made. She knew and understood their traditions better than Yash because he had been away a long time from India. Being a woman she knew even better just how harsh society would be on them both. Still she chose a life of scorn to save Arpita from one; I think Arpita realized Aarti made him stay married to her, he hadn't even consummated their marriage he could very well walk away from her. I think that was the root for the mutual respect they had for each other, despite loving the same man they grew to love each other too, and each others children as their own.

They all realize they have to make work a painful situation for the children. I love that the children are not made to suffer and can feel the love of four parents as Prashant too must be active in their lives. they know only love and will grow up as well rounded human beings.

Prashant must have married her to give her honor and respect in a harsh society, but also because he loved her. yet even he must know that she only loves Yash and could never love him the same way.

I am very curious to see how you get them out of this situation; I don't much like the idea of the other two dying as they are good people but they somehow have to make way for true love, maybe they can marry😳yes crazy! I know!😕

it's just so heartbreaking to see two people so in love but not be together😭a complicated story but I love your exploration of human imperfections and know you will do it justice!⭐️

Originally posted by: B-onesie

Yes, the fact that both Aarti and Arpita both chose to martyr themselves does not make them any less guilty. They both contributed to the messy status quo. Only once in it did they decide to make the best of a bad situation.

If only, Yash didn;t lie, If only Aarti didn't take so long to forgive him, If only Arpita declined the marriage proposal and the list goes on. So every had a hand in the unhappiness that ensued. And no, the unhappiness does not end there as you know😳

Originally posted by: cuteariya

aarti made a big mistake pushing yash away 👎🏼
when he was ready to fight for them
both spend night together but the next morning aarti rejected yash 😡
even was rude when yash called her 😡
but suddenly 1 day she came to tell yash she is pregnant when he was already married
I blame aarti for all this bcoz of her stupid decision 3 life spoilt
now ansh & twins isn't getting proper family
both aarya still love each other but couldn't be together
their life total mess up
continue plz

Originally posted by: sass8

Well what a triangle or I should said polygamy, Yash lucky b**(sorry)😡, got the love of two good woman . I hate that Yash marry Arpita, but its done and they all try to leave with it. I give him that he took his responsabilites and did stand up for Aarti. It will always baffle me how a man can claim to love one woman and yet still be able to sleep with another 😕. I can understand Aarti feelings of betrayal, must have left a bad taste, being lied to for three long years. But then they succomb to passion and of course a child was created. Talk about really bad karma, first the hidden fiance because he lied, then him going through the marriage because he couldn't wisthand the pressure, 😡 or bare the hurt, really!!!. Seriously Yash has officially pissed me off. He really messed up badly on both side.
As for Arpita, well I am honestly torn. I don't dislike her but not too fond of her either despite having taken the high road with Aarti and Yash son (actually I can seems to put my thought in order about her). She is also a victim here, partly at fault for convincing herself that her love would suffice. Then again she must be suffering inside despite being the recognize wife of the Scindia family whereas Aari is the mistress aside.

This entire affair is just too sad and so polite between the three😲. Neither having what they really wishes, the love of their better half and living on borrow time. Something has to break at some point right?. I wonder what will happened next.

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Bee, my reaction is the same as that of Manita's and Sassy's

They have made a mess of their lives. And I also sort of blame Aarti and Yash. . Yash was only engaged and he was ready to break it off but Aarti pushed him away only because he hid his engagement from her. She could not see how much he still loved her, despite spending the passionate night with him.

And he goes and marries Arpita because Aarti kept rejecting him. And once again he was ready to annul the marriage but once again Aarti forced him to honor his marriage and vows to Arpita, who is now mother of his twins.

They really have made such a huge mess. Don't know how they will clear it and come out of it

Despite being angry at all three of them, I know they are all humans and they all have flaws and this is what made this story different and interesting and intriguing. Can't wait to see how you unfold things.

I just hope that you stick to your original vision and don't change anything after reading our angry rants. We as readers can be very harsh many a times. But as a writer one must stick to their original vision and convince the readers about their perceptions and perspectives 😳

Honestly I'm looking forward to this story as it is different 👏

Originally posted by: premap

Thanks for this 'frustrating' update ! At the end of the chap I felt like 'murdering' someone !!!! That was the degree of frustration , I was undergoing !!!!! I am never one for wife/mistresses or 2 -4 wives ! I get sick seeing such people, BUT here , Aarti is neither a 2nd wife nor a 'mistress' as the true meaning goes !!! The blame of the situation goes to maam Aarti !!! She messes up 3 lives plus the lives of 3 kids !!! It would have been kinder to Arpita if Aarti DISAPPEARS from all their lives !!! I am that mad at her ! [ Sorry for taking out my frustration ] ! You have given work to my adrenaline ! Thanks and please do not be 'mad' at me 4 my comment .

Originally posted by: asmani

One of the benefit of coming online after a few days of gap is you get to read 3 parts at a time of a wonderful interesting story😃

The story started beautifully With 2 individuals

Falling in love and theirlove nest

Then come prashant and Arpita who are too good to be believd😆

Prashant who was advising yash anou hiding about arpita and hurting Aarti , did the same thing to Aarti by having an affair while he was married to aarti

Otherhand aarpita very well knew yash did not love her but still wanted to stick to him and bear his presence as well. Arpita might be a great character here but i don think her to be a lohical one. She is selfish. Had she really been great. She shoul have tried to unite aarti n yash.

Yash tried enough. I dont want to critisize the poor guy though he took an impulsive decision og marrying arpita

Aarti what should i tell about her. She wanted to be great. I really dont think hiding about engagement was really a great offence to reject ur love repetatedly considering the situation.

She is the most to blame for entire situation

Please continue and sort out the mess😆

And i want a happy ending pls😉