AarYa OS: The Ghost - Final Chapter, pg 5

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: bongalisoo
Beautiful os really sad that they can't be together and the children they loss ,lovely story

thank you Lisoo 😊

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Tessa I did not see this os until today it is so beautiful I admire how you are able to take a topic and make a beautiful story from it. There are sad parts but there us also hope the first babies died but she got her gifts returned to her in the form of another set of twins. Sorry kiddo time is short so cant comment more

you did see it and reserved too my lazy Didi 😆. but thank you for this unexpected and lovely comment! ☺️ I am happy that you are among the few who did not mind a sad ending 😃

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Tess, can I first hug these Two heartbroken souls? My heart literally went out to them 😭

Life was so cruel to them, because of those monsters who snatched their everything, their whole world, their kids. 😭

They found their own way to punish who had sinned them. But for that they had to live separate lives. Yash had his mother. She had no one. Yes he was with her every step of the way, but he was a Ghost.

He ran, she chased him. I don't think she would have handed him over to the authorities even if she had caught him. Because chasing him had become the purpose of her life. If he was caught, that purpose would have been over. Her life would have been over and she would have lost everything all over again.

He was the reason for her living. Chasing him, watching him punishing those criminals, those sinners was the reason for her living.

They didn't meet each other directly for ten years but that didn't lessen the love, the affection they had for one another. One meeting and they succumbed to their passions, their desires. The result was she got the family that she had lost. But a life in which Gayatri was not there. A life in he was there but only as a Shaodw, A Ghost.

It is so unfair that Gayatri is not there to see them together.
Too bad that he is there in his kids life but they don't even know he exists.
To bad he can't hug his kids when they are awake. He can't talk to them, ask them how their day was, can't play with them.
He can't be with his Aarti the way she deserves him to be.

Why?

Because he is nothing but A Ghost...

Gosh... No matter what I say words won't be enough to praise this beautiful and heart touching (or heart breaking) story.

For this ⭐️ (as many as you want)

and my head is getting heavier it might just fall of at any moment ☺️ thaaankuu so much Alien ji! 😃

yes you are right in that he was giving her purpose to go on after having lost everything; he also ended up returning a part of what they lost in the form of their children and now he was the one truly alone. 😕 having to content himself with mere glimpses of his children and stolen moments with his wife...

but yes you will have your happy ending after the heartbreak Didu 😆

Edited by Tessaloni - 8 years ago

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

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B-onesie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Yay a happy ending. My Aarya bliss is restored

it was infinitely sad thought that G3 had to watch her family from afar Knowing that she was going to be a grandma again but not being able to be there for Aarti and never being able to be with her grandbabies. I don't think that she died peacefully knowing that her son and his family were still seperated. Knowing that he was still living in the shadows.

i wish that they had a way to be together before G3 died, but that was not to be. Far so long they lived half lives. She lived her life with her children during the day and at night he had to sneak in to be with his family, careful not to wake them and giving her a break and doing pyjama drill to help her out. But this whole business must have been so draining on both of them Knowing how much they loved each other but not being able to be together.

I can just imaging how torn Aarti must have been to call him in the first place. She must have known that the IB would not have come for him for something easy and would have been aware of the danger. Yet she called him with hope that they could be together again. A family.

They were both so ready to finally live there lives instead of existing and pining for would could not be in the situation that they found themselves in. He was ready to put the ghost to rest and be real dad to his children instead of sneaking in to spend time with them. And he was confident that he could do what they asked.

Her fears were evident after her got shot or rather grazed. Finding that he was wounded or dead was probably her biggest fear while he was not with her.

I can just imagine how happy the kids were to have there daddy back. And they must surely have felt his familiar aura as he was always with them. They were so happy to have him in their lives, they wouldn't even let them go. And they were both happy to let the kids monopolize him. And the reunion between them was so beautiful.

And finally they had a happy life, A normal life. Well sort of. She still had a less than normal job and he must still have been worried about her every day that she went to work and that is why i suppose her made catching the criminals easy for her.

Finally normality for them. Playing with the kids at the beach, getting ice-cream, normal job for him. Just what they wanted. And some romance and a love nest too. Maybe another set of twinsies in the future. Wouldn't that be awesome.

Happiness is ⭐️⭐️⭐️ a happy ending

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premap

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Very Satisfying to have an happy ending! Though Tragic endings have their own beauty and are equally enjoyable, still the happy ending is good, as we need not go to bed after a 'good howl' over the sad ends !!!! 😆

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cuteariya

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

wow this was a great treat for us 🤗
u gave us happy ending ❤️
it was really heart breaking moment when yash lost his mom 🥺
he went to meet aarti & kids just at night 😭
finally the had come when those agents came to yash asked for help
after that help yash can live with his families without any problem 😃
at last yash made it just for his families so he can live with them 🤗
wow aarti told kids abt yash being their dad 😃
it was really happy moment that yash could hold his kids & be with them & aarti ❤️
kids were so happy to get their dad that they didn't leave him even for a moment 😃
finally aarya got back what they lost went through so much but they got their way back to each other ❤️
at last aarya romance was so passionate 😳 ❤️

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sass8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

I like the first part with Gayatri, it was a nice transition from the first part, but so bittersweet. She went in peace knowing that her son had a purpose and all was not lost after all. Aarti being pregnant gave her hope, its just so sad that she missed her daughter in law second lease on life.

Yash could not stay away despite his resolve. How could he since he also got a second chance to love his children. I mean seing them during the night only and leaving before they wake up became increasingly difficult. It was just a matter of time before his life change. And it came from the law enforcement, the same law that failed him and Aarti years before. But it was a good deal , a free get out of jail card. Then again it would have been a waste of talent (althought not condoning Yash actions, he did break the law in a way) and IB understood that, the greater good. Aarti was right to be worried, this is serious business, then again she also put herself in danger when she go to catch a criminal.

It was so nice to see them found solace and treasuring their family, carefree and having fun with their children. They live changed so much. They more then ever knows the values of appreciating an living in the moment, laugh again with their kids.
Gosh 😆, one can have a heart attack with Yash surprise. Really!!! using her job to trap her, the man do like the thrill of the chase. incidentally he should have scoldher for going in without backup but hey i suppose romance too over. 😳. Its all good .
Really nice part 😛

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Busi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Awesome update sis.
Yahoo at last a happy ending.
I loved Yash's moments with the twins.
Now G3 can rest in peace has Yash has his family back.
Over all Yash has a big ego 72 hrs really what a show of but should i expect from him his Yash after all.
I am still trying to process that he really bribed the dog with treats 😆 so he can be with his family.

Tnx nikki di n honey bee for demanding a happy ending.