AarYa OS: The Ghost - Final Chapter, pg 5 - Page 3

Originally posted by: sara1990

So sad. I had tears in my eye while reading it. Still it was beautifully written.

Originally posted by: BusiMusi

Res but Why 😭

Originally posted by: ksen

beautiful os

well written

loved it

Originally posted by: Themmy

No happy ending right? she just felt like breaking our hearts this new year 😭

Originally posted by: cuteariya

This is really painful that aarya went through so much

They lost their kids & lost each other

After such a longtime they put those monsters behind the bars

But after that why aarya was t back together?

After long 10yrs they again became parents of twins

But aarya couldn't share their happiness with each other

Wish they could have been together after their loose

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Tessi poo i will read soon and comment 😆

Originally posted by: sass8

Gosh 😕, it started with so much pain for Aarti, excrutiating pain for having lost her family that one wonder how could she still bare it day after day. Then I thought the chase partly help her heal because at least she was focus on an goal, one that could not be attained and maybe that was the real purpose because what would she do if he is caught. So in a way Yash under Arjun identity gave her life a new meaning. He was still a husband helping his wife overcome their tragedy, yes in an unconventional way but it work too. Ten year is a long time and despite taking different paths, they could not move on from each other. The love is still there like the first time and neither could resist it. I like their stolen encounters filled with passion and desperation. I did not expect the outcome but I am happy to see Aarti and Yash getting a second chance to be parent, and that is the happy ending they get with stolen moment. Its just sad that Yash could not fully acknowledge them but he is never far away. Strangely the one thing that made me really really sad was Gayatri passsing. She would have rejoiced at her grandkids.
I am running out of superlatif for your os Tessa 😊, so I am just going to stole Nikky words and brand this is a masterpiece 👏 👏.

Originally posted by: BusiMusi

U should write something sweeter than honey for us after this heartache masterpiece os.

Originally posted by: premap

A Sad and Sweet story ! Superbly written. and an unusual concept! Thanks.

Originally posted by: B-onesie

I didn;t reserve and I actually didn't even want to comment as i am very unhappy about the ending.

My Aarya world is shattered as my favourite couple did not get a happily ever after. Only glimpses of each other, flowers and the knowledge of each others presence.

Poor Aarti feels because of her principles and her occupation that she has to capture the man that she loves I understand that he is a criminal but he is a Robin Hood He steals from the rich and corrupt to give the poor. I supposes stealing is stealing if your are a good cop. But how torn must you be keep chasing the man that you love. And if she was so principled she could have revealed hsi true identity, yet she never did. Yash Scindiya was still a free and honest man for all concerned. Even her. Even if he frustrates he no end and plays cat and mouse with her, leaving his calling card so that she knew exactly who he was.

My sympathies here lies almost exclusively with Yash. He attempted to live and honest normal life withi his family, even declining a job with an intelligence agency (forget which one.) because he wanted to lead that normal life. Ironically he ended up living a life of hiding his true identity anyway. I can understand why he did what he did. He was only trying to get justice in his own way and bring the criminals to book. Unfortunately his actions made him a criminal also. And he lost his family and ended up alone after his mother passed away. Now he life revolves around glimpses of his wife and children in the dead of night. How awful for him.

There has to be a part two. A Mr. & Mrs Ghost in their happily ever after. I can't fathom that those poor kids will never know their father. The he will remain a mystery to them and their mothers main function is to get him behind bars. No, no, no. There must be a way for them to be together. They both intelligent people and clearly good at what they do. Surely between the two of them they can come up with a way to make the authorities see that "crimes" are committed with only with good intent and int he process he brought down many high profile criminals and saw that the ill begotten money was being put to good use.

The story is too good not to explore further.⭐️

Part 2. Please. Please, Please, Pretty please with a cherry on top