AarYa OS: The Ghost - Final Chapter, pg 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Themmy


No happy ending right? she justfelt like breaking our hearts this new year 😭

yah she is breaking our hearts
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Posted: 8 years ago
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poor
Auyu n Payal they hve 2 grow up without their father in their lives wht a shame.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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U should write something sweeter than honey for us after this heartache masterpiece os.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A Sad and Sweet story ! Superbly written. and an unusual concept! Thanks.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I didn;t reserve and I actually didn't even want to comment as i am very unhappy about the ending.
My Aarya world is shattered as my favourite couple did not get a happily ever after. Only glimpses of each other, flowers and the knowledge of each others presence.

Poor Aarti feels because of her principles and her occupation that she has to capture the man that she loves I understand that he is a criminal but he is a Robin Hood He steals from the rich and corrupt to give the poor. I supposes stealing is stealing if your are a good cop. But how torn must you be keep chasing the man that you love. And if she was so principled she could have revealed hsi true identity, yet she never did. Yash Scindiya was still a free and honest man for all concerned. Even her. Even if he frustrates he no end and plays cat and mouse with her, leaving his calling card so that she knew exactly who he was.

My sympathies here lies almost exclusively with Yash. He attempted to live and honest normal life withi his family, even declining a job with an intelligence agency (forget which one.) because he wanted to lead that normal life. Ironically he ended up living a life of hiding his true identity anyway. I can understand why he did what he did. He was only trying to get justice in his own way and bring the criminals to book. Unfortunately his actions made him a criminal also. And he lost his family and ended up alone after his mother passed away. Now he life revolves around glimpses of his wife and children in the dead of night. How awful for him.

There has to be a part two. A Mr. & Mrs Ghost in their happily ever after. I can't fathom that those poor kids will never know their father. The he will remain a mystery to them and their mothers main function is to get him behind bars. No, no, no. There must be a way for them to be together. They both intelligent people and clearly good at what they do. Surely between the two of them they can come up with a way to make the authorities see that "crimes" are committed with only with good intent and int he process he brought down many high profile criminals and saw that the ill begotten money was being put to good use.

The story is too good not to explore further.⭐️

Part 2. Please. Please, Please, Pretty please with a cherry on top
Edited by B-onesie - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: B-onesie

I didn;t reserve and I actually didn't even want to comment as i am very unhappy about the ending.

My Aarya world is shattered as my favourite couple did not get a happily ever after. Only glimpses of each other, floweres and the knowledge of each others presence.

Poor Aarti feels because of her principles and her occupation that she has to capture the man that she loves I understand that he is a criminal bur he is a Robin Hood He steals from the rich and corrupt to give the poor. I supposes stealing is stealing if your are a good cop. But how torn must you be keep chasing the man that you love. And if she was so principled she could have revealed hsi true identity, yet she never did. Yash Scindiya was still a free and honest man for all concerned. Even her. Even if he frustrates he no end and plays cat and mouse with her, leaving his calling card so that she knew exactly who he was.

My sympathies here lies almost exclusively with Yash. He attempted to live and honest normal life withi his family, even declining a job with an intelligence agency (forget which one.) because he wanted to lead that normal life. Ironically he ended up living a life of hiding his true identity anyway. I can understand why he did what he did. He was only trying to get justice in his own way and bring the criminals to book. Unfortunately his actions made him a criminal also. And he lost his family and ended up alone after his mother passed away. Now he life revolves around glimpses of his wife and children in the dead of night. How awful for him.

There has to be a part two. A Mr. & Mrs Ghost in their happily ever after. I can't fathom that those poor kids will never know their father. The he will remain a mystery to them and their mothers main function is to get him behind bars. No, no, no. There must be a way for them to be together. They both intelligent people and clearly good at what they do. Surely between the two of them they can come up with a way to make the authorities see that "crimes" are committed with only with good intent and int he process he brought down many high profile criminals and saw that the ill begotten money was being put to good use.

The story is too good not to explore further.⭐️

Part 2. Please. Please, Please, Pretty please with a cherry on top


awww now when you ask so nicely...

Whether you wanted to comment or not, it was a treat to read your views like always! And entertaining too! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful os really sad that they can't be together and the children they loss ,lovely story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tessa I did not see this os until today it is so beautiful I admire how you are able to take a topic and make a beautiful story from it. There are sad parts but there us also hope the first babies died but she got her gifts returned to her in the form of another set of twins. Sorry kiddo time is short so cant comment more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tess, can I first hug these Two heartbroken souls? My heart literally went out to them 😭

Life was so cruel to them, because of those monsters who snatched their everything, their whole world, their kids. 😭

They found their own way to punish who had sinned them. But for that they had to live separate lives. Yash had his mother. She had no one. Yes he was with her every step of the way, but he was a Ghost.

He ran, she chased him. I don't think she would have handed him over to the authorities even if she had caught him. Because chasing him had become the purpose of her life. If he was caught, that purpose would have been over. Her life would have been over and she would have lost everything all over again.

He was the reason for her living. Chasing him, watching him punishing those criminals, those sinners was the reason for her living.

They didn't meet each other directly for ten years but that didn't lessen the love, the affection they had for one another. One meeting and they succumbed to their passions, their desires. The result was she got the family that she had lost. But a life in which Gayatri was not there. A life in he was there but only as a Shaodw, A Ghost.

It is so unfair that Gayatri is not there to see them together.
Too bad that he is there in his kids life but they don't even know he exists.
To bad he can't hug his kids when they are awake. He can't talk to them, ask them how their day was, can't play with them.
He can't be with his Aarti the way she deserves him to be.

Why?

Because he is nothing but A Ghost...


Gosh... No matter what I say words won't be enough to praise this beautiful and heart touching (or heart breaking) story.

For this ⭐️ (as many as you want)



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Tess this is MASTERPIECE ⭐️

Like I mentioned in CCC that I only scanned through it and didn't read it properly but whatever I read i was left SPEECHLESS.

I had tears in my eyes as my heart went out to them. 😔 🥺

I don't think I'll be able to comment on it as anything and whatever I write won't do justice to this story.

All I'll say is that it's ⭐️ (plus millions, trillions and gazillions ⭐️).

my head is getting the size of a pumpkin with so much praise! 😆 I am sorry for making you cry but very happy you enjoyed the Os. thank you Alien of mine 🤗

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