AarYa OS: The Ghost - Final Chapter, pg 5

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Busi

@BusiMusi

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

yes I have given it a happy ending... hope it will help you get over the painful story Busi Musi😊

😊 am happy now. Now am the ghost has get to read during midnight has am too busy during the day.

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

nice ending

beautifully written

liked both the ending

thanks for the pm

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Thank you so much for this chapter 🤗

And I'm sorry for making you write another chapter when you no longer want to write more than one part OS. But it was worth it. Not because it had a sad ending earlier but to me it felt incomplete as Yash never found the peace.

But now he did.

Felt so sorry that Gayatri was not there to see him living blissfully with his family. She too longed for that family but then sometimes not everyone gets everything. Her demise made him more lonely. Yes he had his stolen moments with Aarti but then he still could not be with his kids like a father is supposed to be. For them he was non existent, not even a Ghost.

When it all became unbearable he was on the verge of surrendering himself. Had not those IB officials come to him, the moment was not far when he would have. That is why he grabbed the opportunity when it presented itself. One could sense Aarti's fear, which was justified as if anything happened to Yash then once again all would be over for them. And this time for good.

Absolutely loved the scene with his kids, poor souls didn't even know their father was alive but they still recognized him, which shows that the bond was always there.

He was lucky that he got a second chance to live the life that he has lost. He also got his old identity back and was now working in an boring 9-5 job, but then he was also living the life he so craved for. He was still assisting Aarti in catching criminals and through her was living the life of thrill.

Not to mention the thrilling surprise that he gave Aarti. He really misses that thrill.

Loved their happy and blissful moments. Now they were Home as the Ghost no longer exists.

Thanks for giving me what I wanted. Now this story is complete 🤗

Edited by lovely_nikki - 8 years ago

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bongalisoo

@bongalisoo

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Nice happy ending ,I personally liked the sad ending more but not to take away from the happy ending ,it was really sad about G3 dieing not being able to see her grandbabies and not seeing aarti up close in a long time and knowing they both miserable with out each other ,family time was just too cute with the twins argueing and meeting yash for the first time ,beautiful os

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Fandu

@Fandu

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Tessa another great OS. Although I was fine with the first chapter I am glad that you decided to give us the second chapter. I love the happy ending because Yash is free and no longer living the fugitive life. It is sad tat G3 is not around to be part of ArYa's family and their current life. Thank you.