PV SS - The Storm within Chapter 7(epilogue) - page 10

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Sunrio80

@Sunrio80

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#81

A bittersweet story of life of Aarti.

In the end she got her dream life and a family of his own. And Yash was so overly in love with her that he stands on her side. It is indeed from a disaster to a beautiful life.

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Tessaloni
now I will have sweet dreams! superb ending! ❤️ thanks Honey-Bee!

yes, yes I know this comment is not enough! I will give a detailed review later...

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

lovely epilogue.. thanks for the beautiful aarya story

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Busi

@BusiMusi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

wow both updts were amazing di. my favourite one was the epilogue.

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Okay now I can comment in detail. as I said it was a great ending. I imagined Gayatri's face when Yash would demand Aarti's time the stern saas that she can be! 😆 well she was happy enough with the result.

coming to Aarti's panic attacks during her pregnancy: that is actually very plausible and I like that you brought it up not only to enable her to face her past demons but also enabling her to work through her insecurities and come out stronger. She saw history repeating itself; although her case was different from her mother's she had grown with so much abuse which made her irrational; with her hormones all over the place it must not have helped any. I loved the patience Yash showed in that time.

I loved, loved, loved how Aarti confronted those vultures! she needed to purge herself of all negative emotions and energy she had because of them. she had been carrying that baggage around and for the longest time let it dictate her choices; she almost lost her true love because of it. she showed them that although they succeeded to destroy her mother they did not with her. throwing money at them was symbolic of paying back the pain they caused her and be rid of them! like saying you abused me but I am still better than you in giving value to what you don't deserve. it was a good slap in their faces especially her disgusting aunt! she may have delayed Aarti meeting her father but fate worked out well and she finally reunited with those who would truly value her.

I loved the five years later part the most! what they have had three kids in five years of marriage? 😲 😆 and their private moment was beautiful! so easy to see just how happy they are! now the storm is over and they only have sunshine for the rest of their lives.

amazing end to a wonderful story once again Honey-Bee 🤗

Edited by Tessaloni - 9 years ago