Aarya FF: I Want You (Part 2: Page 9) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: akui1984

hmmm..this story reminds me of indecent proposal...a movie by demi moore...not sure if u know that story...

nevertheless i m curious to see what happens next...


I have watched the proposal but not indecent proposal 🤔!
U have made me curious i will search for it on wikipedia 😃!
lets see if my future story will resemble to it too 🤔!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

I will try to update soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey...by the way is the title changed from 'Dil ka Rishta' to 'I want You'...or just because I am reading too many FF/SS/OS has led to confusion 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
i am hating prashant
plsss contsoon and dont frgt to pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Hey...by the way is the title changed from 'Dil ka Rishta' to 'I want You'...or just because I am reading too many FF/SS/OS has led to confusion 😆


I have changed the title 😳!
U r not confusing 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

i am hating prashant
plsss contsoon and dont frgt to pm me


Prashant 😡😡😡!
I will try to continue soon..But i don't do pm stuff sorry !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantastic prologue..👏 amazing storyline...👏 Mind blowing update Fatima.
I was so happy to read the prologue of your story as it was enough to grab my attention fully.OMG Prahsant wants his wife Arti to sleep with his Boss who is none other than our Yashu so that he can get promotion... gats off to you Fatty for introducing such intense concept..👏
Yash is mesmerized by Arti's beauty from the first sight...now it was bound to happen as they are meant to be together but the most interesting part is the path you have chosen for their union.😳😳
Prashant is a born Kamina and he will be like that forever.He hit Arti and abused her for his selfish pursuit..😡😡😡 and finally Arti agreed to do what her heart denied to do...😭😭😭
I know right now Yash's character has so many dark shades but I am sure in future you will make all the mystery and will give reason of his dark decision also.😳😳
Love the night scene between Arya.Though you are new in this type of writing but trust me I just loved it .Each and every word was perfectly chosen dear.So congrats ..👏👏👏
I love the care of Yash for Arti and the line that he hugged Arti tightly and sleep just made me mad.😳😳
Cant wait for the next one.Plz update soon..😳😳😳

Edited by nusratjahan505 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

Fantastic prologue..👏 amazing storyline...👏 Mind blowing update Fatima.
I was so happy to read the prologue of your story as it was enough to grab my attention fully.OMG Prahsant wants his wife Arti to sleep with his Boss who is none other than our Yashu so that he can get promotion... gats off to you Fatty for introducing such intense concept..👏
Yash is mesmerized by Arti's beauty from the first sight...now it was bound to happen as they are meant to be together but the most interesting part is the path you have chosen for their union.😳😳
Prashant is a born Kamina and he will be like that forever.He hit Arti and abused her for his selfish pursuit..😡😡😡 and finally Arti agreed to do what her heart denied to do...😭😭😭
I know right now Yash's character has so many dark shades but I am sure in future you will make all the mystery and will give reason of his dark decision also.😳😳
Love the night scene between Arya.Though you are new in this type of writing but trust me I just loved it .Each and every word was perfectly chosen dear.So congrats ..👏👏👏
I love the care of Yash for Arti and the line that he hugged Arti tightly and sleep just made me mad.😳😳
Cant wait for the next one.Plz update soon..😳😳😳



awww thanxxx 🤗!
Yeah prashant is born kamina😡!
Poor aarti😭!
Yash's character is dark but slowly his past will reveal which is very he is like this!
Thanxxx dear😳!
I will try to update soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😲 Fatima title changed😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Abie10

😲 Fatima title changed😆


Yeah 😉😆

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