AarYa OS 'You Are My Rain'...Chapter-5, page-55 - Page 18

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

Though I am waiting for the update of MTB so much but in between I was waiting for the update of YAMR coz the concept of this story is very close to my heart and the way you wrote the first part was enough to grab my all attention Nikki...and I must say that you have done full justice with your concept...so there is no doubt that you deserve a standing ovation from all of us.👏SO finally Arya and kids are in Mumbai... city of dream and Arya romance.😳😳😳.I really loved the convo of Vidhi and Arti.It had contained such clues that should be clearly shown in original PV which we didn't get.Loved the way you have shown contrast between Arti and Arpita.I just loved the concept of terrace...it's so romantic and at the same time very exceptional also...👏
Yash and Kids part was another amazing part.It was very nice to see the cute bonding of Yash and kids.The way Yash was talking with his lil Army and giving them responsibilities was wow for me...specially the duty of Payal was so lovely...and it just touched me and my soul...😳
Yash realization that how wrong he was with Arti in the past and Arti's realization that Yash is changing in the present was beautifully written dear.Both were thinking about each other...both were trying to love in their won way...I am just waiting for that moment when rain of love will be showered on them and they they will take shelter in each others arms without any guilt...without any remorse...and your note has assured me that it will happen in the most beautiful way dear...😳😳😳
Will be waiting for the next part and plz this time dont make me wait so long...😉😉😉

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Mukti what do I say to you, you crazy sis, all I'll do is 🤗 ❤️. Actually I'm working on MTB. But I thought that while I work on it why not to give something to everyone to read, before they start forgetting me 😆. That's why I updated YAMR and the new OS also. 😳

Mukti Mumbai is indeed the city of romance for AarYa, so I took them where it all began .

Yes Arpita and Aarti are different from each other, but both are nice, good hearted souls, that's why Yash fell in live with them.

Terrace concept has a major role to play, especially in the climax.

And Mumbai trip without cute kids is impossible. So I'll try to give as many cute kids scenes as possible.

@ bold.

OMG Mukti you've left me speechless. I'll write this in YAMR, I've saved it. I loved it so much Mukti ❤️

Love you sweety and take care 🤗

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

Nikki sis I am sorry to say but t this crazy Mukti will be glued with you and there is no chance for you to run away from me...😆😆😆
I love you as my elder sis but when I comment on your work I just be a reader and write what exactly I feel.That's why I alz take much time to comment coz I just try to absorb each and every word in myself and think that I am in that situation.SO whatever I have said about you is 10000% honest opinion sis.You deserve this praise and respect.Everyday I read more than three or four FF but it happens hardly that I become so obsessed for the writing.But you are one of the writer who left no stone to make me fall in love with your work in the most passionate way that for sometime I forget everything.And I wanna confess you something...whatever I have tried to write in my JKT you are my inspiration sis.I alz think about you and your writing skill while I write my own update.SO I should say thanks to you for for being there to give me inspiration ...❤️🤗❤️
How did I leave u speechless...😕😕
What have u saved sis...😉😉

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Now I got to know that my craziness is very much infectious...😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: sb1410

Love the update so Aarya made it once again to Mumbai, enjoyed the conversation between Aarti and Vidhi new information for Aarti about Yash taste and his past, the kids and their papa scene beautiful now yash turn to learn something about Aarti and relize the dept of hurt she felt post Last Mumbai trip also Aarti found out how much her kids and Yash care for
her. The bedroom scene was enjoyable the kids are too cute with their innocent conversation, the bed yash did not move his feet nice touch showed how his is slowly changing. Waiting patiently for the next update. Nikki 👏 👏