AarYa OS 'You Are My Rain'...Chapter-5, page-55

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
awesome os

Thanks Dona 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Folla
amazing update super waiting the next update update soon

Thanks Folla

Will try my best to update soon 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: lulujjj
Awesome update nikki like the way you define each and every character , emotions just loved it reading into bits.

Lullu after a long time read your comment on any of my updates. Thanks so much dear 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

Mukti I'm crazier than you, I forgot to highlight the part which left me speechless so I've highlighted it below...

"Yash realization that how wrong he was with Arti in the past and Arti's realization that Yash is changing in the present was beautifully written dear.Both were thinking about each other...both were trying to love in their won way...I am just waiting for that moment when rain of love will be showered on them and they they will take shelter in each others arms without any guilt...without any remorse...and your note has assured me that it will happen in the most beautiful way dear...😳😳😳"

Now I got to know that my craziness is very much infectious...😆

Oh you've no idea how bad it is for us 😆. We see the effect of it everyday in CCC 😆

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: roserosey
oh di first a big hug for ur comeback that too with a everlasting lovely update of YAMR🤗❤️🤗...i always wanted to see tha change in the dynamics of aarya relation in this way after post mumbai track ...that yash realizing by himself abt his love for aarthi and in the mean time he get to know more abt aarthi her likes dislikes her fears her fantasies ...so much more...😳😳

i m so much loving the way u r showing yashs heartfelt feelings for aarthi even though he is still confused to realise😉😳😳...love the way u showed yash to hid behind something and watch aarthis every move and admiring her unknowing to her⭐️⭐️...

and vidhi and aarthis convo left me so happy that i felt like aarthi indeed found a sister in the form of vidhi ...i m so happy di they r sharing each and every happy moment and sad moment ⭐️⭐️...lucky vidhi bhabhi to have aarthi⭐️⭐️...

now the massage scene how can i forget that ...omg yash was longing to touch and feel aarthi🤢🤢...ooh i m soon hoping that to happen di di take ur time and show it slowly in ur style ...i dont mind even if this YAMR gets converted into ff ⭐️...

yash and kids tal;k i always love that ...these kids love their mama and papa so much in the same way like aarya love them so much ...my heart went for aarthi when kids said she is scared to sleep alone di😭😭...as she is an orphan may be she suffered it from childhood too...she deserve a lot of happiness now di what not she faced in her life ...😭😭

and yash calling aarthi jkr 😆😆 but it was nice to hear it from yashs mouth so romantic😳😳

how yash distributed the tasks of taking care of aarthi⭐️ star of the update di⭐️
i wonder who is that person 😕😆😆 but will be waiting to know what u r planning for us in the romantic terrace of aarya😳😳...
as usual u r rocking di so keep on rocking👍🏼...dont kick me di but pls update soon naa after updating OUR MTB and BOY😳😳

stupendo fantabulous job di⭐️

Rosey I'm also so happy that I finally updated YAMR, as this OS is full of AarYa and only AarYa scenes

OMG I'm also loving the changes in dynamics of relationship between AarYa. And what better place than Mumbai to show it.

The more the time Yash will take to realize these changes in his feelings the deeper his love for Aarti will become.

Rosey I always loved the sisterly relationship between Aarti and Vidhi but as everything else, they ruined this also. So here I'll try to highlight that also.

Rosey Yash will definitely touch Aarti's back to give her that message, and he'll do it on his own 🤢

And by the time I finish this OS, it'll be automatically converted into an SS 😆

With the help of kids Yash found out a small part of the effect of his post Mumbai behavior on Aarti

But now he'll work to rectify that mistake 😳

Oh Aarti will be called JKR many a times in YAMR 😆. Yash's distribution of the tasks to kids is his protective feelings for his Aartji 😳

The mystery person will be revealed in the next update.

And I'll never kick any of you for demanding more updates 🤗

And love you Rosey for another beautiful comment ❤️

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: billieberry
finally u updated, 😃 finally i read it😉 nd finally am commenting😆
okay now to d update

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Awesome write up Nikki di as always,👏⭐️👏
Yashji is stealthily observing aartiji 😆
Love vidhi nd Aarti's phone conversations, Aarti still has some insecurities, love vidhi she is so caring, gives her soothing words nd her banter, real sister-in law😊
Thought yashji will do d massage, how he wished he could do what Bhawari did.😆
Yashji nd kids making out some hush-hush mission😛,
now it Aarti's turn to stealthily observe yashji but kids re there too.😳
Oh yash gonna be busy so assigning task to Ansh, Palak, and Payal.😃 very nice👍🏼
Love d scene ansh nd Payal told yash Aarti scared of sleeping alone, which made him realize his cold behavior post Mumbai
Love d adorable family moment, each person with a name hahaha superman's three musketeer's nd his JKR Aarti.😆😉
Red underwear kids are naughty🤣 nd it embarrassing for Mr.superman😳
Aarti not going to miss yash haha not possible, unknowingly he placed his leg on hers this time nice😛
Who could that man be?😈 disturbing our Aarya passionate eye lock, Uhmm... am I allowed to say it here?😊
Overall love it to d core dear⭐️⭐️👏⭐️⭐️
Superb work Nikki di🤗
Sorry for late comment
update soon nd take care!..❤️
MTB waiting for me😳

And Billie finally I'm replying on your comment.😆

Isn't our Yashji romantic at heart. He wants to watch her also and then deny the attraction also. 😡 😆

Vidhi and Aarti have bonded like real sisters, so she doesn't miss any chance to pull Aarti's leg 😳

Don't worry Billie right now Bhawari is doing the massage, but soon our Yashji will do it. 😉

Oh yeah our superman is on a secret mission with his three musketeers. Assigning them tasks to do in his absence and giving them secret names. And Aartji is onto them. 😎

Billie kids will slowly tell Yash what Aarti had gone through post Mumbai.

And our JKR is not going to tell him what he wants to hear for her. 😆

Sorry for the late reply Billie.

And thanks sweety for another beautiful comment. ❤️