FF 'Meant To Be'... Thread 3, Chapter 23, page 95... - Page 43

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Nikki...
about your PM -
I think as a writer one needs to have the freedom to write...
as far as your readers are concerned they will surely love what you write as they are with you throughout this journey...

If you ask me - as a writer I prefer writing short updates - not more than 1500 - 2000 words...mainly because I want to sustain the interest of the not too patient readers...
I write to the point as you must have gathered till now...but each one is different and we will always support you as we have done in the past...

I love reading long updates so no issues with your long and detailed ones...

All the best and looking forward to your next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Sharlene I won't lie to you when I say that I was eagerly waiting for your comments and when you didn't comment, at first I thought that you must be busy, but later I thought that you must've felt it too emotional that's why you didn't comment (and I'm sorry for jumping to conclusion like this 😭) I should've known better that no matter what you'll come and definitely comment, cause you also love MTB so much ❤️
Yes Sharlene such heinous incidents takes place everywhere around the world. We learn about some of them and sometimes no one finds out about it, cause they bury the matter there and then. 🥱

There are really people like Aarti's parents in this world who treats daughters as a burden, as a doormat. 🥱. They don't value their daughters and the same happened with Aarti also since the day she was born.
But there are people like Gayatri also who stands and support the right over the wrong. For that she went against for her own family.
And you are so right about SP, he always took his wife for granted and never valued her. This point will be shown in the upcoming chapters.
I don't have any words left to talk about Prashant and Ammaji.

Thanks Sharlene for showing your love and support for MTB and also for giving me your opinion and guidance and for helping me to stick with my original vision only.
I agree with you regarding what you wrote about teenage readers. So I'll stick with my visions and won't change anything. ❤️





Hi Nikki you are correct I was busy that why I did not comment earlier, but I have to make time for this FF because it is my favourite 😃 ❤️ and simply writing awesome is just not enough!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hii nikki atlast i unreserved my post😉 which on 47th page see and reply to it
have a nice time👏



😊chandu😉


Thanks fr reading nd liking my coment ya take ur own time to reply so nice of you to pm me abt it
Edited by vinnas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Already reservations started oh hurry i reserved this place
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 20


Superb Parts as usual, Nikki di !! 👏👏

It was always heart wrenching and my heart was torn to see Aarti in such condition !! Not only that, I was really hurt for Shobha's words... 😡😡😡 How could she blast to Aarti with such words when she's her own daughter ?? Oooh.. No no !! She actually didn't ever swallow the fact that she had two daughters !! 😡 Plus, she and Dubeyji didn't ever want any daughters in life.. 🥱 What a cheap minds they have !! 🤬 🥱 !! No words for them !! 🥱


Gayathri... someone I've started to be in love with !! ❤️ She's a very brilliant mother with beautiful heart !! Somehow, I really loved each and every steps of her in taking care of Aarti !! 😊 Really, I couldn't imagine how terrible is Aarti's condition !! 😭😭 And in this time, she really needs a person to look after her especially a mother !! 😭😭 Thanks to God that there is Gay3 with her, although she couldn't physically be with her, but her mind was always thinking about her and that's when she decided to seek a help from Dr.Kiran to help her and Aarti ! 😊

Ammaji and Prashant !! Two perfect devil partners !! 😡😡 🤬 No words for these devils as well !! I know what Ammaji had in her mind... And what literally Gayu heard in the phone !!

SP.. Issshhh !! This man was really in hurry and didn't hear to his wife's words !! Nahhh... That's the reason why today is so dark in Aarti's life !!


Good one, Nikki di !! 👍🏼 As for your PM, I'm sure you know my answers !! Go on with your original plan.. Would love to read the original from you !! 😉

LOL.. As usual, Sorry for the late reply !! I know I shouldn't say, but my sorry will always be there ! 😆 😛
Edited by IsYaRoCHeR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
so painful
wanted to kill that prasant...
n the dubey's how could they believe prasant not their own daughter...
n ammaji hate her she khows abr prasant's misdeed still she supports him!!!!!!!!!!!!!
only gayatri understand arti n supports her...

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Posted: 12 years ago
That was such an emotional and heart wrenching update Nikki 😭
I don't know what to say about Shobha and Dubey 😡 how can they be so cruel to their own child. Leave the case that Arati is their own child but how can they do this to any human being.


And what a good actor Prashant is. How cheap and low living he is that he has gone to such an extend just for revenge 😡 he is worse than a demon 😡

i don't want to write anymore because any word is less to describe Prashant, Shobha, Dubey and Ammaji.

Waiting to read more about the past especially from Arati.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Nikki, congo for the continous thread and also for the story..
Just logged in and so sorry for the late reply..
Absolutely love how the story is going!👏👏👏..
Thank you very much for the pm's on all the update an dof course, waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kratzyfan


Thank god, i didn't get any dhamkis from u😆😆...u understood me😳😃...

and ha..how can we not love u n ur story when it's a story of a girl like us😭😭...we would want to know how she faced each n every phase of her life to reach the destiny of happiness i.e., her love yash❤️😳...this is for u 🤗...for giving us this story...


Anu I'm too tired to give any Dhamki's to anyone 😕 😆
Yes Anu it's a story of a girl like us, but one who had to go through he'll throughout her entire life 😭

After Yash learns the whole truth, it'll take some time to get her out of her sordid past completely. But once that happens there'll be no going back. He'll give her all the love and happiness that she deserves

And this is for you for reading this story 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vinnas

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so finely i came here to unreserve my post👏 sorry for delay what to do busy in other stuff and need a pc to type all my feelings even i simply say trogh moby that ur update was awesome fabolus etc etc but im not satisfied nd it not sufficient from my part so...🥱 if i type in my mobi my fingers got puntures so dont want to take a risk😉😉 becoz i want to reserve my post place in your next update thats why always my comment delays but aftr seeing my post defnitly u cheers i know is it im correct nikki???🤗
coming to update of MTB as ususual very strong, concerned, faboulus, awesome oh god why im typing only that words(fabolus,awesome) dnt know y after reading it those words are coming out from my finger by keypad its not my fault its you always makes same magic by ur taking over on story⭐️
charcts:g3 charcter fantastic through out very genuine, 👏lovely,👏 understanding 👏at first she is women so knows women struggle and very well known abt prasnth so she stood up to arti side consoled her like more than her mother⭐️ protected her so nice of her⭐️ and also want to share entire thing to sp and yash to make justice to arti really every women should like her⭐️
shoba, duby-really pathetic😡 they are very self baised people they doesnt see ther daughter trouble instead accused her😭😭 so disgusted people😡 really feel worry by having this type of people as parents in arti condition😭😭 who to support console her really are more tourturing her😡
ammaji:fan of her lalla😲 she knows everythig and always taunts arti for p death😡 in arti conditn even arti has the right to kill p on spot its no crime but this lady always accuses her i think p marris arti by her suggestin only but one instinct she also feel some time for a women who under the horrible condition then as usual supports her lalla😡
this parts are filler parts to future which needed⭐️⭐️⭐️
no yash scenes its ok hope upcoming will contain it
overall very well written my side no complaints for this nd complimentes only⭐️
one questn? you mentiond arti sister swathi i think her char didnt mentind in updates so far want to know her side presntatn to her sis wat relation is it fair or like her parents ill treats or frindly???
coming to contunation of your update from my side😉
dont change any scene, condition, emotion which you fixed already!!!
dont bother first some of them told it was draggy boring at all!!!
first fix your own judgement which required for ur update and who edits your parts follow as usual!!!
in this 20 updates i didnt get bored any where yes first felt to not read as arti betryed yash nd marries his bro p after starting read feel amazed👏 what a content it is till now i dont stick to any update like this but now it made my daily work to check for next update of MTB see the magic if it really draggy how we stick like this😉👏
my pov dnt feel bad for my examples😉
⭐️-if soliving a math prob mentioning of every steps helps who are poor in solving and understanding somebody feels it was waste of space like that

⭐️-ending of tiny story like not coming to sudden conclusions how we know actual mean of story in this story⭐️
⭐️⭐️-every thing is interconneted like arti loves very much yash she said after p attack to her mother and hurts after her words like betrying him so she marries p without interfering yash life👏👏
⭐️⭐️-in pv with yash also she didnt accepted first concern his future after watching him other girl akashi or other name sorry i cant remember😉 she requested her to marry him for his future and reqest her for taking care of palak also by seen her bonding ⭐️👏
⭐️⭐️arti didnt want her parents to take a part in her pv with yash becozz of their nature they does not allow it nd she palak suffers alot becoz palak also girl child not a boy so they dont concern her👏👏⭐️
⭐️yyash is the only person to give life to palak so she marry him⭐️
so...
this horrible incident happend 2years back dnt know between them after that so it takes naturally length in story ther burdens fears to hide infront of every one in family now the time arrives to open up all so g3 was the first person was started her pov during this period it justifies👏👏 and after that the main victim of all this evilness might open infront of all her life what the hell😡 she went throuh during this period 👏
story progressing is very promising aftr g3 part aksh part and arti pov are going to reveal it takes time dnt worry we wait😭😭
this is not romantic thriller like story it is a story revolving a girl who sufferd alot and ended with her soulmate so it have emotin in its peak the mini details, feelings, and emotional situations are help to essence the story so keep continue like as usual👏👏
my request is as you already know by my above comment plzzz continue😉 make MTB in its yours (nikki)style dnt bother anything just continue regular readers dnt dissapointe by this but dnt wait us long 3weeks atleast try to give one update weekly if possible as per your conditions👍🏼
at first i prepare alot to say my feelings trough this comment but ends like little one😉 in my pov dnt mistake me next time i will make huge like your update 👏oh sorry pvians dnt through any thing on me😳😉 for long posts🤗
thanks for bearing and waitin for my cmnt (i think)😉 i hope it will encoreges you at a small tiny way (i think) 😉
have a nice time nikki and praying waitin for your BOY, YAMR and our heart favourite MTB updates


Ok so sorry Chandu for replying on your comment so late 😭. Though I had already read it but still didn't replied on it 😭
And don't say sorry for the late comment, I understand 🤗

I won't reply on the rest of the comment as you already said everything from Gayatri's relationship with Aarti and standing by her and supporting her.
And how Aarti's parents, Prashant and Ammaji are responsible for her condition 😡

I haven't yet given much thought on Aarti's sisters character. But I'll definitely show something on her in the upcoming chapters, when Aarti starts to tell her side of the story.

OMG Chandu I simply loved how you compared my detailing habit with a simple math problem 🤗. I LOVED IT ❤️

Yes all those readers who ready it sincerely and regularly wants and deserves to know the entire truth in the FB in detail. So I'm not changing anything and will go with my vision only. Yes two years is a long time, so it'll definitely take time to cover everything in detail and I'll certainly do that at my own pace and time.😳

And this time I'm sorry I won't be able to update soon as I'm going on a vacation for two weeks. So no update till I return back 😭

Sorry once again for the late reply. And thanks for all the love and support my friend ❤️ 🤗


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