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Ken309

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Posted: 11 years ago

#711

Hey there sorry for the late reply, loved the chapter

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#712

Hey all I've started to reply on your comments. Sorry for being late. But I'll try my best to reply on each and every comment.

Thanks for being patient with me 😛

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#713

Finally I am here on the thread of MTB which is my third home as PV forum is my second one..😉😉
I read this chapter many times specially some scenes as I was waiting for it for a long time.I know what a tough time I have passed to know about arti' s pov and finally it has started to come out...😳😳
For me the following part was the soul of your update.Arti were right.Somehow they both responsible for the incident that took place last night (according to to the incident of MTB)

Yash, I admit what happened last night shouldn't have had happened. I can't blame you entirely for it. I'm also to be blamed for last night. I'm also at fault here. In fact we both are responsible for last night. I'm responsible for hiding the truth of my past from you. And you are responsible for jumping to conclusions. Had I told you everything and had you asked me about Aakash, yesterday, none of that would've happened. So you see we both didn't had enough trust in each other"

Whatever they had suffered was meant to be .They paid for others fault but this incident took place coz of their mistake.But it is said na that every bad thing has a positive side also.Here it happened.If nothing like this would happened then may be Arti would have leave Yash forever...so their this mistake is forgive from my side...

Di you have portrayed Akash's role very we..the really loved to know about his character from Arti.

So Arti had met Yash first in the cafeteria...the whole sequence was just perfectly presented Di.The way Yash saved the child was ...👏👏👏.No doubt that his act left a great impression on Artiis heart and mind..😳😳😳.

DI you had said that you lost interest in writing but di trust me your magic is still present in each and every word of your...the fragrance of MTB is still fresh di...you are doing the journey of MTB remarkable not only for us di but for you alz and now I feel that it was meant to be that we have got such a loving di who is a great writer...👏

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prachidalmia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#714

lovely update

loved the flash and the way the story was plot

hope you abid by what you have mentioned in notes that aarthi want be telling everything infornt of all

and really hope that this time yash wont leave his side and will be with aarti

looking forward for aarthi's part of story

update soon

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princess4120

@princess4120

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Posted: 11 years ago

#715

i finally got to catch up and read the last chapter.. awesome awesome.. enjoyed the depth of it to introduce arti and aakash relationship and yash's character.. lots of much needed detail for clarity..

i there a new link? new thread where you will continue?

looking forward to the continuation .. take care

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Priyasi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#716

FINALLY... Phew... Finally I read your updates...

A BIGGG Sorry for reading them so late but I am quite held up these day and couldnt read the updates even though I wanted to..

Khair, coming back to the update...

I absolutely loved that little flashback of how and when Aarti fell in love with Yash...We have always seen Yash's side of love and respect, be it through his anger, but Aarti's character had so many shades and now one by one every shade will be revealed...

And special thanks to that pic you used in the beginning, it fits perfectly for the last... Could imagine Yash hugging Aarti so protectively with all his warmth and love... Was waiting anxiously for this very moment since the beginning and I must say you didnt let down my expectations...

Yash's regression and Aarti's unshakable trust in Yash was worth reading...

And yeah, it was nice to Akash's story too. We know, how much Mano and Prateik mean to Yash, so it was important to know about people whom Aarti loves so much...

Now, me waiting for the next part. And will try to read it as soon as I get the pm...

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jikky_84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#717

Couldn't read the last 2 chapters 😒

I am quite held up these days...will read and comment as soon as possible.

Don't think that i lost interest and left the story..will come back soon 😛

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RIYA

@RA17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#718

Nikki first of all congrats dear for completing an year n second thread 2 century

well coming to you hope aunty recover soon n you enjoy your stay in India n come back really missed you

ch23

in one word its perfect

how aarti who always confined things within is the one who told yash everything from the very beginning which even yash was not aware of with detailing to yash character

and, about aaksh as a person n his bond with aarti i must its beautiful dear

also i love how yash love care n trust n somewhere remorse too bring strength for aarti in true way

really rocking update dear loved it simply beautiful no here n there just bang on