FF 'Meant To Be'... Thread 3, Chapter 23, page 95... - Page 41

Originally posted by: Abie10

, my editor😆 keep it up!👍🏼

Originally posted by: Folla

i love your FF 👏i am waiting your next updat

😊 update soon love you and all the best dont make us wait the next update and keep in your story dont change any think we are with

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

First of all wanna confess something Nikki.I have read your update yesterday morning after getting up from bed and the whole day was sad coz of the impact of MTB.But I refrained myself from commenting then coz I needed sometime to to think properly as I was also very emotional after reading this part.
So finally the truth is coming out...not only truth but ugly truth that ruined Arti's life ..her dream...
Shova is the most disgusting character even more than Amma ji.Even after watching her own daughter in such condition ...to see her sufferings and pain she reacted in such a way..she accused her for this mess...started abusing her verbally...sorry to say but she really failed to be called a mother.
Dont want to say anything about Dubey coz though he is wrong but unfortunately in every sphere of life we meet such type of people.He is nothing but the representative of male dominating society who considers themselves as the controller of women's fate.He said that a man has all the right to do what he wants but I was sad coz even in this century we get to hear this very often hear and there.
For me the soul of the first part was the following lines.

Aarti who was quite till now, screamed loudly " No, I Won't Marry him. I won't Marry the guy who ruined my life. I know that my Yash will marry me. He'll marry me despite knowing everything"
For the very first time we got the chance to witness Arti's emotion ..her feelings for Yash.When she said "My Yash" my heart just jumped coz I was dying to see this type of emotion ..verbal acceptance of her for Yash and finally you gave it.This scene was a wow for me...

But the cruel words of Shova killed all her hopes and I just felt crying with her.
But in the whole part the way G3 supported Arti was very good.

Part two
In this part what amazed me the most was the sentences Amma ji spoke.For a moment I thought that it's not Amma ji .It's someone else who was talking so sincerely but the very next moment I found myself wrong coz even after knowing the truth she decided to help her laal...not only that she was planning to save him...Ammaji go to hell.
Dr Kurian's portion was very well written nikki.
I just wish SP would listen to G3 and stopped the the following disaster to be happened.
The phone cal scene was very alarming for me.Even I got scared while reading that part coz I knew it will change the fate of Arti and bring only pain for her...
Nikki people come here to enjoy and even I do the same.But I really admire you coz through your FF you have not only entertained us but have given a very strong social message also for which you deserves a standing ovation dear.Really Hats Off to you Nikki. 👏

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Nikki first of all its your story ,your imagination so u decide how u want to take this forward dear,,,trust u completely

Great updates dear👏

Poor Aarti,,,her parents are😡😡,,what to say about them ,,they cant even see her daughter's pain still blaming her without knowing the truth😭

Shoba,,,what a woman she is ,,how can she hate her own daughter

G3 ,,,i just loved her character ,,,wow the way she understand her pain ,,,even her own son is the culprit but still she stood for Aarti ,,great ⭐️

SP ,,,he is true businessman ,,cant see anything beyond that not even his wife phone call😔

Ammaji n Prashant ,,oh God what to say about them ,,,😡😡😡

Nikki just loved the part when Aarti screamed that Yash will accept her depite of all this ,,,this is for the very first time we got to know how much Aarti trusted Yash n his love for her ,,even they had hardly met,,,

Hope G3 n Dr Kiran will help Aarti to recover

waiting for next updates nikki,,,pls continue soon

Thanx for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

Superb update...eagerly waiting for the next update...

Originally posted by: ns1970

Wow another amazing update Nikki I can see how much time you take and thought you take in putting into this story as and this is appciated👏

This part was put in the way of showing us aarti's condition and prashant way of lieing to get away as always.Shoba and Dubey disgust me and well ammaji as normal hides for her loving grandson.Oops I nearly forget to say wow only gayatri is the only one that have understanding for aarti

Anyways loved it waiting on next part

Originally posted by: gurikafan

PART 1:

uff...very long update..but shobha ma is totally opposite to the real punarvivah..but that what u portrayed and thats why aarti is close to gayatri even after prashant's death..gayatri's understanding nature towards aarti and the way she put clothes on aarti when shobha was only standing and accusing aarti was really a motherly love and care towards aarti.🤗

hating prashant and ammaji😡...the way prashant put all blame on aarti and showing that he is very innocent..huh🤢

aarti loves yash and that was clear wid the sentence when she said "my yash is there for me". so sad for aarti that after loving so much to yash she had to hurt him after his return from US.😭😭😭

PART 2:

why dis society is male dominating??? SP doesnot care about gayatri's feeling who is his wife and from 30 years. also dubey and shobha..this is only fiction story but in real life also many or mostly men thinks it as a pride to dominate over their wives.😡

coming to the story..

to be frank..i felt boring about Dr. kiran's history😆😉, and i also know that u like to write in detail..so i adjusted it😛😃...

cruel ammaji and her lalla..mere bhagwan ki kasam..kuyein mein doob ke marr jaaye..😈 i m sure ammaji ne prashant ko aarti se shaadi karne ka hi suggestion diya hoga..and prashant is agreed for saving himself..as he hates yash and for dem aarti,thats why he used to torture after marriage also..

missing yashji...

par abhi tak samajh nahi aaya akash ke baare mei

i have made so many predictions also...will w8 for next update so that my questions will get their answer 😉

now waiting for all truth come out and love between yash and aarti again...

Originally posted by: caller123

Kate actually it's really hard to imagine what a girl really goes through something this traumatic. Here Aarti don't remember anything, but what those girls goes through when they were very much conscious during the sordid most traumatic experience in their life 🤢

God only knows what would've happened if Aarti had a brother. Maybe he'd turned out to be like Prashant. And imagine having such parents as Dubey's and then on top of that an equally abusive brother. 😕

I don't know Kate wether my story will help anyone or not, but I'll feel better that at least I wrote something like this in my life. Being a girl myself, I know and understand how sometimes it becomes difficult for us to face certain situations in life.

We are lucky that we don't have a mother like Shobha and a father like Dubey. And you are so right Aarti indeed became a victim of two women, Shobha and Ammaji. And men like Prashant and Dubey.

But luckily she found Gayatri and then later Dr. Kiran. 👏

Shobha will be proved wrong by Yash, but isn't it too late for that, cause Dubey's have no relation with Aarti now. But Aarti will now be least bothered with her so called parents.

And Kate please don't say worry for sharing your POV on boys also suffering by their parents, these things really happens and there's nothing wrong in sharing something like this, when the topic is about domestic abuse, be it on a boy or a girl.

An abuse is a abuse. 🥱

Kate even I wish that every girl gets a mother or MIL like Gayatri. 👏

Love you Kate for loving MTB, and supporting MTB and me also. ❤️

Originally posted by: pvejani

i m shocked with shobha😡😡 ,dubey😡😡 and ammaji's behaviour with aarti.😡😡😡

prashant😡.

very ver4y nicely written👏👏👏.

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Any writer who decides to write FF/ OS should follow the vision already set and not ask too many question to get too many answers which leads to confusion to already confused state of mind. Commenting on the outcome of your vision is our job but to interfere and get your story thru our vision is wrong and at the same time comments by viewers on any chapters - good or bad should be accepted with grace without arguments 'cause this leads to imporvement ( which U do..)

The main problem with U Nikki is u want everyone to be satisfied which is not possible - always be happy with the maximum than minimum and u will see urself in a less confused state...stop asking and continue your vision and u will see the result.

To be honest - am always away from cruel handling track - probably u may see my reserved comments on ur future track but I will definately not leave midway and force my vision on you.

Nikki - so far - u r doing exceedingly well - don't ask for more - as I don't want to spoil u with my expression of good words on u - so dear cheer up and stop questioning and concentrate on future update...with best wishes and take care dear !