OS ' Because Of You'. Chapter 7 & epilogue, page 77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: pvejani
wonderful update👏👏...liked very very much.
gr8 work nikki👏
thanx for up😃date and pm.

Thanks Pooja for reading and commenting. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: palbhar
Waow!!! I felt as if I wasv reliving Aayu's kidnapping all over again!!!! Hate fact that Yash will go post-Mumbai state!!!! If he does, Aarti should give him a BIG shakedown!!!!

Thanks Bharthi 😊

Even I felt like reliving those days while writing, as I had to take myself back to the last days of PV to write these scenes. And it was very painful for me 😭

Oh dear Aarti will give him the BIGGEST shakedown ( and the rest of the family also) that the poor guy will be left wondering what just happened 😉 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505
Wow Nikki another great work of yours which is just mind blowing...👏
First of all thanks a lot dear for making the effort of writing on this truck which was brutally destroyed by some fools...😡😡😡.
Though it was basically written on the PV episods where that Kamini Ishita is present but what I love the most is your dialogue delivery...👏👏👏.Really Nikki now a days I am just falling in love with your dialogues as they directly touch my heart...👏👏👏.
Felt so sad to see Arti suffer like this 😭😭😭 but I cant ignore my Yashu's pain also...😭😭.
I am very excited for the next part as you have mentioned that it will be based on your imagination and we all know it very well how RAAPCHEEK your imagination is...😳😳😳.
Eagerly waiting for the next one as I am expecting a dhamakedaar confrontation of Arya...⭐️⭐️.
NB:Thanks a lot for giving me the Nishani of Yash...his son Ayu...as you mentioned Mukti got Ayu.😆😆😆
God bless you dear...❤️🤗

Mukti don't praise me too much yaar that I become over confident and ends up messing the whole OS/ FF 😕. But love you dear and love to read your encouraging comments always. 🤗

Yes this track was brutally destroyed 😭, that's why I'm trying to do some damage control 😳

Don't want to talk e out Wichita 😡

Yash and Aarti both are in pain, but Yash always crosses his limits, when he blames Aarti for everything 😕

Even I remembered you when I was writing about that orphanage, that's why I specifically wrote the name of the owner of that orphanage " Mukti" 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: roserosey
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mindblowing update di

i was so shattered after reading this😭😭😭 i know aarti did a mistake that she went all alone with aayu 😕
after coming to know yash had an accident but everyone in her place will do the same

why always aarti had to suffer the the most???????😭😭😭

all the words yash said to aarthi were so heartbreaking😭😭
he has to repent for all these😡

i want u to make yash repent for what he did to aarti even after post mumbai fiasco he never mouthed a single sorry to aarthi😡
doesnot he know his aarthi how she cares for kids and love them and how selfless she is??
alwats he took aarti for granted😡
in pv-zmd how i thought that cvs will show how yash repent for his actions and he teaches a great lesson to ishitha😡😡 for messing with him especially for hurting aarti

hoping aayu soon comes to his mumma 😉
i know u will do full justice to the track 😉

continue soon di
once again👏

Thanks Rosey 😊
Yes Aarti's biggest mistake was that she went alone along with Aayu ( that's why she's getting blamed for being careless ) but she's not entirely at fault also, as she was worried about Yash at that time 😕

Aarti will make Yash realize and repent for the way he misbehaved with Aarti post Mumbai and also right now.

Aayu will come home soon but not directly to his Mumma 😭

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr
Superb update...cont soon...

Thanks 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: chitsri65

The first Chapter though a leaf taken from the original PV...u have created a space for the next chapters of your vision which I will be waiting eagerly. Would say this Chapter is good as it is not that easy to repeat few scenes from the original and then incorporate yours. Well done Nikki!

Thanks Chitra.

It was necessary for me to use all those past scenes to put focus on what'll happen next. And what significance these scenes will have later on 😊. And I tried my best to incorporate my vision in those scenes. And I'll try my best to do so in further also with the upcoming scenes ( but I'll use only 4-5% of the scenes now, as they won't be needed anymore ) 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: poonamgarg
Amazing nikki dear👏

Then ask Poo 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Abie10

Yash surely has to pay for his actions. 😡 I was pissed off in the show wen he dint listen to Aarti saying she saw the goons that night. For Aarti I think she's already paying for her carelessness. Can't wait for your imagination as you'll rock! 😳

Yash will pay for his actions, as he never thinks before accusing Aarti for anything. So it's about time that Aarti make him realize that 😡.

And Aarti will also pay for her carelessness 😭