OS ' Because Of You'. Chapter 7 & epilogue, page 77 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Pretty 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leevi05

good start

waiting for next

Thanks Leevi 😊
Will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jitupatole5

in the next part Aarti goes to police and told them about Raghav.and gave them his discription .police found out them.they told everything to police.

but before that they cought ISHITA kidnapped Aarti try to kill her,somewhere out of the city police traced her but she shoot Aarti by
gun and ran away from there.in hospital Aarti"s condition got critical,
and then Yash realised his mistake.
THIS IS MY SUGGETION FOR THIS STORY IF YOU LIKE IT.

Wow nice suggestion. 😊I can write another OS on this. 😳
But right now I've a totally different vision for the way this track should move.
I want to show Aarti making Yash realize his mistakes in a totally different way. My vision might look sort of filmy- dramatic, but it is something that I wanted to see in PV ZMD 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nikki
i am so happy you picked this phase of aarya to write OS as well all were that time so depressed n with cvs always so slow but in rush to close aarya track they did not did justice to aayu kidnap n taken 1 month leap i am eagerly waiting how you give us details of that unseen one month about aarya most difficult phase when they love each other yet khafa khafa
want to console each other still giving th epian as unbearable

separated in anger n yet being the one
yash aarti se as father was upset but still he is after all her yashji really dear will love to see how you take this n pour to us😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

hey nikki

i am so happy you picked this phase of aarya to write OS as well all were that time so depressed n with cvs always so slow but in rush to close aarya track they did not did justice to aayu kidnap n taken 1 month leap i am eagerly waiting how you give us details of that unseen one month about aarya most difficult phase when they love each other yet khafa khafa
want to console each other still giving th epian as unbearable

separated in anger n yet being the one
yash aarti se as father was upset but still he is after all her yashji really dear will love to see how you take this n pour to us😃

Thanks Riya for supporting me and for the encouraging words 🤗
The CVs depressed us and disappointed us Big Time, by showing that stupid meaningless track. And worst of all they unnecessarily dragged it till the very end. Without giving proper closure to anything.
So I wanted to write this to give Myself a closure regarding the things that I wanted to see in the end.

I'll try my best to show the pain and anguish of both of them, to the best of my possibility. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow,,great update Nikki 👏
Poor Aarti ,,,,Yash is not ready to believe her,,,not even trying to understand her feelings ,,she has also lost her son ,,,😭
Very well written dear👍🏼
Ishita is so heartless 😡
Precape is very interesting
Waiting for ur own version😊
Thanx for the PM n sorry for late reply dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Thanks Riya for supporting me and for the encouraging words 🤗
The CVs depressed us and disappointed us Big Time, by showing that stupid meaningless track. And worst of all they unnecessarily dragged it till the very end. Without giving proper closure to anything.
So I wanted to write this to give Myself a closure regarding the things that I wanted to see in the end.

I'll try my best to show the pain and anguish of both of them, to the best of my possibility. 😊

your welcome sweety well let me know if you need any help as i too would love to see it explore the one moth leap in details so make it ss not os😉😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Wow,,great update Nikki 👏

Poor Aarti ,,,,Yash is not ready to believe her,,,not even trying to understand her feelings ,,she has also lost her son ,,,😭
Very well written dear👍🏼
Ishita is so heartless 😡
Precape is very interesting
Waiting for ur own version😊
Thanx for the PM n sorry for late reply dear

Thanks Rachna 😊
We all know that whenever Yash got angry, he was never gave any chance of explanation to Aarti. And this time also he did the same 😡, I always wanted him to realize this and rectify it by apologizing to Aarti. But alas it never happened 😕
And Ishita, she never had a heart that's why she was 😈
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

your welcome sweety well let me know if you need any help as i too would love to see it explore the one moth leap in details so make it ss not os😉😛

Riya I'll definitely let you know if and whenever I'll need help. 🤗. I know that I can always rely in you guys for everything ❤️


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Posted: 12 years ago
can u give me the link of ur first os di

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