OS ' Because Of You'. Chapter 7 & epilogue, page 77

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Sri_Radha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Thanks Sri.
I hated it whenever Yash hurled accusations at Aarti without giving her a chance to explain or defend herself 😡
So here I'll make him realize his mistake and Aarti will do,it. 😳
Wichita will always remain Wichita 😡
I want to show some intense reaction from Aarti when she sees Aayu with PraDhi. Cause I feel that being a mother, Aarti should've recognized her child immediately. But in PV they showed that AarYa didn't even recognized Aayu, which I found very strange 😕 😆

Welcome dear😳

When aarti recognize aayu.. will yash and other members will believe her..🤔

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Welcome dear😳
When aarti recognize aayu.. will yash and other members will believe her..🤔

What do you honestly think? 🤔

And wait and watch in the next update 😳.

Ok I'm seriously going now, before I get a scolding from my hubby 😆

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caller123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Awesome start Nikki! 👏👏I love the way you are touching the story. Waiting to see how Yash's behavior effect on Aarthi and I know you will do full justice to the track! Now I'm waiting foe the next part

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pooja vejani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

wonderful update👏👏...liked very very much.

gr8 work nikki👏

thanx for up😃date and pm.

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palbhar

@palbhar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Waow!!! I felt as if I wasv reliving Aayu's kidnapping all over again!!!! Hate fact that Yash will go post-Mumbai state!!!! If he does, Aarti should give him a BIG shakedown!!!!

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roserosey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

😊
mindblowing update di

i was so shattered after reading this😭😭😭 i know aarti did a mistake that she went all alone with aayu 😕
after coming to know yash had an accident but everyone in her place will do the same

why always aarti had to suffer the the most???????😭😭😭

all the words yash said to aarthi were so heartbreaking😭😭
he has to repent for all these😡

i want u to make yash repent for what he did to aarti even after post mumbai fiasco he never mouthed a single sorry to aarthi😡
doesnot he know his aarthi how she cares for kids and love them and how selfless she is??
alwats he took aarti for granted😡
in pv-zmd how i thought that cvs will show how yash repent for his actions and he teaches a great lesson to ishitha😡😡 for messing with him especially for hurting aarti

hoping aayu soon comes to his mumma 😉
i know u will do full justice to the track 😉

continue soon di
once again👏

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Wow Nikki another great work of yours which is just mind blowing...👏👏👏👏
First of all thanks a lot dear for making the effort of writing on this truck which was brutally destroyed by some fools...😡😡😡.
Though it was basically written on the PV episods where that Kamini Ishita is present but what I love the most is your dialogue delivery...👏👏👏.Really Nikki now a days I am just falling in love with your dialogues as they directly touch my heart...👏👏👏.
Felt so sad to see Arti suffer like this 😭😭😭 but I cant ignore my Yashu's pain also...😭😭.
I am very excited for the next part as you have mentioned that it will be based on your imagination and we all know it very well how RAAPCHEEK your imagination is...😳😳😳.
Eagerly waiting for the next one as I am expecting a dhamakedaar confrontation of Arya...⭐️⭐️.
NB:Thanks a lot for giving me the Nishani of Yash...his son Ayu...as you mentioned Mukti got Ayu.😆😆😆
God bless you dear...❤️🤗

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Chitra_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

The first Chapter though a leaf taken from the original PV...u have created a space for the next chapters of your vision which I will be waiting eagerly. Would say this Chapter is good as it is not that easy to repeat few scenes from the original and then incorporate yours. Well done Nikki!

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Abie10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Thanks Abie😊
Yash will pay big time later for his rude behavior towards Aarti. Even Aarti will suffer for her carelessness. And then they'll learn about their mistakes and will come together after apologizing to each other.
Right now this chapter was only on the scenes which were already shown in PV, as these scenes are very important for the future scenes. But from next chapter 80-90% scenes will be on my vision and imagination😳

Yash surely has to pay for his actions. 😡 I was pissed off in the show wen he dint listen to Aarti saying she saw the goons that night. For Aarti I think she's already paying for her carelessness. Can't wait for your imagination as you'll rock! 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: caller123
Awesome start Nikki! 👏👏I love the way you are touching the story. Waiting to see how Yash's behavior effect on Aarthi and I know you will do full justice to the track! Now I'm waiting foe the next part

Thanks Kate 😊

Yash's behavior will shatter Aarti this time, cause he's accusing her of loosing Aayu because of her carelessness 😡

I hope that I do justice to it, as sometimes I tend to get confused while writing an update 😕 😆