The Mumbai Aftermath -An Aarya FF (Completd pg 22)

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MissSkeptic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

This is interesting! And honestly, when I read the story somehow I recalled all those scenes in PV when the Mumbai aftermath was shown...I was so crazy pulling my hair out wondering caused Yash's anger back then! I missed the show...

And this is a wonderful attempt for your first time!

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anni2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

a great start..do continue..i really love it soo much..

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palbhar

@palbhar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Waow!!! Such anger in our JKR...how nice if this had happened...Yash would have been shaken to the core and Kratika would have done this scene superbly!!! Waiting eagerly for next take!!!

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tleshni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Yaarti.mini
reserved OMG SHOCK

Oho,I hope its a good shock..😆

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tleshni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: anu93
Hey Amazing start dear👏 I like this furious Aarti who is not ready to forgive Yash so easily👍🏼
Yash needs to realize his mistake and apologize for whatever he did...
Plzz continue soon and PM me when u Update this FF

Thank you so much for ur comments...Yeah I felt this is how they could have shown Aarti being atleast abit angry on Yash for a while.. Will update soon,and Iwill try to PM😊

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tleshni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: *Maleena*
I love it, I always thought that Aarti forgave Yash too easily. I always wanted them to talked about what happened in Mumbai, I can't wait for your next update.

Thanks alot !!😃... yes they will definitely talk about it..