The Mumbai Aftermath -An Aarya FF (Completd pg 22)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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omg this is great aarti is angry this should have been seen in the show, it is just a natural reaction for her to be hurt, and angry instead of instantly understanding and forgiving,they needed to express their feelings and find a common ground to live together and allow their feelings [love for each other ] grow naturaly. thank you for sharing your thoughts I love this concept and it tied up so of the issues which the cv left hanging in the show.👍🏼 👏 [/QUOTE

Thanks alot for ur comments..😉 .Yeah I really felt they made Aarti too maahan by forgiving Yash too quickly.She deserved to be angry on him after all he did..Yes they will talk about it and hopefully will reach a common understanding..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Iqra--
Wow!! Great work!

Thanks Iqra...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks alot surish...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: elanpremi
WOW!Love this JKR Aarti
Nice update

Thanks elanpremi..I hope Aarti's anger is rightly potrayed..😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: MissSkeptic
This is interesting! And honestly, when I read the story somehow I recalled all those scenes in PV when the Mumbai aftermath was shown...I was so crazy pulling my hair out wondering caused Yash's anger back then! I missed the show...

And this is a wonderful attempt for your first time!

Thanks alot MissSkeptic..😛 Yeah the mumbai track was really exhausting for all of us thinking what went wrong..haha.. Yash just escaped without getting the much needed reality check..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Very well done Tleshini. I always wanted this reaction from Arti - furious at Yash, unwilling to forgive him, ignoring him and Yash suffering because he can't take her indifference. So - thank you!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: anni2
a great start..do continue..i really love it soo much..

Thanks anni...and welcome to the forum..!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: palbhar
Waow!!! Such anger in our JKR...how nice if this had happened...Yash would have been shaken to the core and Kratika would have done this scene superbly!!! Waiting eagerly for next take!!!

thanks palbhar,yeah KS would have been amazing in the last scene with GC just staring at her shocked..Hmm sad that we cant see any scenes like this...😭

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