Samarpan (An FF) Epilogue (Thread 3/Page 103) - Page 5

Originally posted by: smileymj10

Oh wow, CONGRATZ on the third thread Indu!! 🤗
Happy Sunday! 😊

Thanks Barbie.🤗

Originally posted by: Gkathria

What a beautiful update Indu! I love how deep the connection between Aarti and Yashji is, and the last line where Payal says she wants a hug too really brought down the tears I was holding back! Amazing! 👏👏👏

Thanks Gimmy...The family is coming together at last; just a few creases need to be removed, and those three will be where they belong...in each other's arms...as a family.😊

Originally posted by: *Maleena*

Wonderful update and congratulations on the new thread.

Thanks Maleena.🤗

Originally posted by: cynthiagem

What a delightful surprise for me this afternoon (in my part of the world) to see Chap. 26. It was just a few hours earlier that I wrote my response for chap. 25.

Oh well, no complaints here but a Yehey! By now I should be used to your way of writing, but as Yash mentioned to Aarti, there is always something new to discover. I never tire reading and re-reading this story. I go through and imagine the scenes with your picturesque words, the ethos of emotions, the peace.

So, the most exciting part of Aarti finally knowing the woman whom Yash loves! The moment we have all been waiting for, the beginning of their journey together after a lot of discoveries and instrospection about themselves and about each other.

Congratulations on thread 3 and looking forward to the next.

Hey Cynthia...I know, that was quite a coincidence. *Sigh* You always compliment me so sweetly...so affectionately...always brings a blush on my face. Thank you. It makes me happy to make you happy.

Aarti is just about waking up to the realities of the emotions that have awakened in her. She is trying to understand them. I wonder what will come first...her own realization or realization of Yash's feelings.😊

Originally posted by: meenadsouza

What an episode Indu... beautifully written taking care of each and every small issue starting from Yash and Arpita's marriage, he agreed to marry her thinking she is a writer just coz of the Journal which belonged to Aarti, Arpita left leaving Payal behind, Aarti's reactions for Naina and how it did not matter to AARTI that PAYAL was not his blood daughter, her pull towards Yash and so on. Every word written has its own weight and deep meaning and I really cannot understand how you can write so beautifully...I know that you have extraordinary thinking power and magical hands that can take you to any extend. I am running short of words to give you any compliments Indu but I can only say that I have fallen in love for your beautiful imagination and awesome writing skills and don't forget to congratulate you for the third successful thread which I very well read with appreciation and heart full of good wishes for you to continue further.

Thanks Meena. Your words of praise overwhelm me my friend. I don't know what to say. When I began Samarpan, I just had a broad vision of the story. The events are getting added as we cruise along. I am only happy that what I visualize is getting across to you.

Love you for the sweet words. 🤗

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams

congrats for the new thread. Wow...arthi as always surprised me on how she reacted differently with yash whenever there is a revelation.glad that the journal part is also out to her. you have beautifully brought her inner feelings out for yash. her realization is superbly handled.must thank naina for this. i loved it how she had taken payal's truth and concentrated on things like yash's reason to marry arpita, naina not being the girl yash spoke abt. this is what separates arthi from the main stream of women. she has this underlying strength to face and handle the situation in the most positive sense. i was all smiles when yash was more drawn into her cute antics where he has such a serious issue to deliver truth. out and out enjoyed and loved reading each and every word of this update.

Thanks pal.

Yes...Aarti does think out of the box and right from the core of her heart. That's because she has had a very unconventional upbringing, which taught her to subconsciously give more weightage to relationships forged from heart. That's why it didn't matter an iota to Aarti that Yash hadn't sired Payal. She was more angry with Naina for making that an issue.

Originally posted by: shalini28

wow beautiful update di. loved it so much.

and congratss for new thread😳

Thanks Shalini.😊

Originally posted by: Abie10

Oh..la..la..thread 3 👏 👏 👏

Indu ❤️ brilliant update 👏 👏 am speechless. Absolutely I have no words to define what I felt reading this chapter. You never fail to amaze me in each and every installment of yours.

I so love how you captured all the emotions of both yash and Aarti. I wanted to laugh along yash seeing a jealous Aarti. I was surprise by her reaction cos I expected the way round but just like yash we have much more to learn about Aarti.

Am glad Yash finally told her all about his past. When Aarti asked him why did you agree to marry Arpita? I chuckled knowing where it was leading and you beautifully penned it.

Ah, I just love that cute voice in the end asking to be part of that hug.

Indu, my excitement is growing with every chapter as we getting closer to yash and Aarti's future together. Wherever u are know there's someone a very huge fan of your writings.. Stay blessed ⭐️

Abie...thanks pal. I am glad that I could successfully make you feel what Yash and Aarti are individually feeling for each other at the moment. It's a longer route for Aarti, for obvious reasons...but she is almost there...where Yash stands waiting.😳

Once again thank you so much for all the support. Means so much to me.

Originally posted by: Leevi05

Congrats awesome work😉

Thanks Leevi.😊

Originally posted by: Zetter

On the new thread Pal 👏 🤗

Woohoo you did it again Bud, you left me in awe...what an awesome update 👏 👏 👏...I love how Yash told Aarti everything and without even seeing the book she knew it was hers and the way she got mad at the Naina talked to Yash was such a delight 😳 😳 Plus Yash loved seeing and angry and jealous Aarti as well 😉

Magnificent job Pal 🤗 🤗 🤗

Thanks Zet...Love the cheer leaders. Pretty girls! Sweet gift from a pretty lady. Love you...🤗

Yash is awakening all the dormant emotions in Aarti...without even making an effort. It's as if his presence has brought Spring in her life for the first time, and she is blooming and unfolding herself now. She is not restraining herself anymore, but letting he emotions flow out...😳