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Posted: 11 years ago

So ch34 coming to payal samrpan or a testimony of aarti as mother

Arrpita called payal but things slip away when she hears about badi daddi

a small gesture makes you feel good that the person you love is always there besides you in all your ups n doesn't that aarya are for each other

i still could not believ aarpita can be so ruthless n cold despite being a childless n stuglling to live in materialistic luxury that even a mother a essence of woman is not able to touch her but i still wonder how she manage to then stick with rahul so long

aww yash is surrounded with best of woman n worst too now foucing on best aarti is inseparable but the other 2 great woman is NM n badi dadi she a live wire at this age still her taste vbuds make her go crazy n love their cute convo actually specially twh way she want cute nurse so that she can buly her in her own unique style

n then glad the ppl who don't know the true color of arpita is not their so that things can be set crystal clear between her n aarya along with SP

n now what we hear abt aarti the lioness saving her cubs from danger is here aarpita now you will see what wil happen to you before yash or sp will even do n i love aarti this JKR gundi roop so much

n then she tried to stir payal by telling about her father but yash words as his soul daughter soothes her pain

wow aarti or is shud wow di very powerful words

"Go angelI trust you to do the right thing."

Yash tried to hold her back, but Aarti shook her head, "Let her go Yash.We can't deny that they are the creators of our baby. They do have a certain right on her. Payal too will have some questionsShe will want those answers. Don't worryPayal knows what to do."

Payal will be permanently on our side of the bridge, without any dilemma or doubt nagging her through her life.

Aayu recalling words yup they are bonded with hearts n destiny as their saviour

gesturing toward Aarti, Yash, and Aayu, "this is my family. You gave me birthbut they gave me life

nt then how calmly n with maturity payal has displayed later aarti tight slap yash following about them n all prepare

need a huge round of applause as the beauty of woman to see true reflection of her goodness in her kids

n all i can say in short jor ka jhatak hayee jorro se laga haan lagaa

its fund to see arpita n rahul i cant say anything he is spineless man so nothing to talk about him

payal cries asking am i bad reminds me aarti asking teh same to yash oh she is actually daughter of aarti in true manner

aww the lady we know you made me wnder how may deep layers n colors are hidden besides you

hats off bow down to you n the whole journey of samarpan

a song i dedecite to KS, you n aarti of yours

Tu hi tu, tu hi tu, tu hi tu, tu hi tu - 2 times

Mamata bhi tu, shamta bhi tu
Chanchal bhi tu, natkhat bhi tu
Aanchal bhi tu, baajal bhi tu
Mera aaj tu, mera kal bhi tu
Main tera hi, tujhse hi, tujh mein hi - 3 times
Mujh mein tu
Tu hi tu ..

Tu hi umang
Tu hi tarang
Tu hi dor dor
Tu hi palang ..

Durga bhi tu, laxmi bhi tu
Tu saraswati, kaali bhi tu
Main tera hi, tujhse hi, tujh mein hi - 3 times
Mujh mein tu
Tu hi tu ..

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Posted: 11 years ago
👏 WOW!. The one word I have to say after reading tis story. Amazing. I loved it. Each and every chapter. Hats off to you and applauds for such a brilliant job. Fell in love with as soon as I started the prologue. Amazing job done. Congrats on successfully completing the Samarpan.
Best wishes.
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Posted: 11 years ago
@Ria: I am going to give you the tightest hug ever for such beautiful comments.🤗 You are a jewel. You didn't give up on your promise and came back to finish this. God bless you luv! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Avina-Ashvik

👏 WOW!. The one word I have to say after reading tis story. Amazing. I loved it. Each and every chapter. Hats off to you and applauds for such a brilliant job. Fell in love with as soon as I started the prologue. Amazing job done. Congrats on successfully completing the Samarpan.
Best wishes.




Hi Avina...Thank you so much for taking time out to read and appreciate Samarpan. This story is very dear to me, mostly because I met beautiful people through it who ultimately became my close friends. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Ria: I am going to give you the tightest hug ever for such beautiful comments.🤗 You are a jewel. You didn't give up on your promise and came back to finish this. God bless you luv! ❤️

🤗🤗😳

aapne mere chapters per toh comment kiya hi nahi😳😳😉 what you have to say on what i perciev from both chapters
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Indu,

I Know I am late..

but how could I miss out on the remaining chapters that I had left unread...


Part 13 -

Naanimasi Vs Sameer...amazing...

Here comes our Yash...Wow I'm not surprised he loves Nani..

I love Yash's sense of humour...when he talks about Aarti to Nani...he is a gem...

Growing horns..part how sweet.we all have heard of that right???

An offer to stay at their out house...wow Nanimasi is really a far sighted lady...


And finally the poem...

Wow Indu lovely part...

I'll soon be up with my comments on the next chapter...


Sorry for being so late...was busy writing some stuff of mine which got me busy...

Edited by kmfan_2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter - 14

Indu...The Yash Aarti meeting at the meadow...was simply out of the world...

Mountain Fairy!!!!

I don't have words to praise it!!!!

The cutting of the branch part was so well written...

Maa'am to nanimaasi was a good move...

Lovely update with a perfect ending of what Prashant got...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Juz love your story it's really good ... 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
@Shanti: Thank you so much for coming back to read the remaining chapters. I am touched my friend...so don't you dare be sorry. Always a pleasure to know your opinion. Reading your comments brought back wonderful memories. I miss the hullabaloo of this thread.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Juz love your story it's really good ... 👍🏼




Thank you Anne. Hand on heart...you made me much happy.😊

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