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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

For new thread dearšŸ‘


Mind blowing update dearšŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
Aarya confrontation was emotional and superbšŸ‘šŸ¼.Beautifully writtenšŸ‘ šŸ‘.Loved it😳
Me also surprised with Aarti's reaction towards the truthšŸ˜› and her anger for naina and also herself that She misunderstood yash feelings...ā­ļø
Glad that yash shared his past to aartiā­ļø.
Last part was beautiful..Loved the way yash reveals about the journal and aarya's hug,Aarti realizing Maltidi's word and so cute when payal asking to join their hug😳 ā¤ļø
Waiting for how aarti going to figures out yash love and her feeling towards yash
Continue soon
Thanks for pm😊




Thank you Radha.šŸ¤—

Aha...Aarti surprised all of us, didn't she? We all expected her to be upset with Yash...but her thoughts are on another wavelength. Her thinking and emotions are all an offshoot of her own experiences in life. Even though her own father rejected her and had nothing to do with her, she never abandoned him. Till the end she gave him the due respect and tried to understand him. So where was the question that she will judge Yash on such a piece of info? That's how Aarti is...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: padmavar

Beautifully written update. I just love the way Yash and Aarti getting closer and closer and becoming soul mates.
Your writing style is just excellent.




Thanks Padma.

Well, they are already soul mates. It's just that Aarti hasn't realized it yet.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks Surish.šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: palbhar

Love the way Yash is slowly bringing awareness to Aarti about their soulmate connection and how he's leading her out of her past!!!




He is giving her the right nudges...the rest she is figuring out.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: AntaresVega

So, has Aarti reached an closer to realising her feeling?

I definitely think yes!! She's on her way and when she realises it, she might initially back out in fear but subsequently feel wonderful about it. She'll feel wonderful about being in love and being loved!!

Di, I wonder at times, does true love really happen in the real world or is it just confined to fiction? Can anyone have the depth in their relationships that you've described Yash and Aarti to have in Samarpan?



Yes Lyra...Aarti is inching very close to giving a name to her own changing feelings. If you think back on the last few chapters, Yash has prepared her to face these changed feelings. So I am expecting a much more introspective reaction from Aarti.

Lyra, true love in fiction is more fairytalish, I agree. Having said that, I have seen many examples in my own family and friend circle where such deep bonding exists between a husband and a wife. "True love" per se is very subjective.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ns1970

Wow Indu congrats on the three thread šŸ‘

This was an amazing update hoping aarti will start having some different feelings for yash now.
Update soon




Thanks ns.šŸ¤—

Aarti is expected to be more aware now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for 3rd thread...wow,its so beautifully written...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: InduG64



Thanks Zet...Love the cheer leaders. Pretty girls! Sweet gift from a pretty lady. Love you...šŸ¤—

Yash is awakening all the dormant emotions in Aarti...without even making an effort. It's as if his presence has brought Spring in her life for the first time, and she is blooming and unfolding herself now. She is not restraining herself anymore, but letting he emotions flow out...😳


You're very welcome Love šŸ¤—...awww love you too 😳 ā¤ļø ā¤ļø

Exactly Aarti is tuning into a beautiful butterfly, Yash is really helping her out of her cocoon and she doesn't know that she is blooming and why but we all know that it is because of Yash's love and hers for him as well...I can't wait for Aarti to realize that she is in love with Yash šŸ˜› šŸ˜‰

Keep up the great work Pal *muah*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jikky_84

Awesome update Indu šŸ‘ šŸ¤—


So finally now Arati knows about Yash's past and about Payal's parentage. Its so nice to see how more than anything Arati was angry at Nina for saying anything against Yash and Payal. Arati is the real Arati when she is with Yash, he very easily brings out her true self without doing anything specific. With all others she easily hides her true self by hiding her feelings and emotions.

Now, Arati is herself aware of the change in her. She knows that never used to become angry or aggressive but now she is when Yash is around. Its now only some time that Arati will understand what she feels for Yash is love and that will be a crucial point as she will try to withdraw herself but our Yash babu is all up for the challenge, so no worries 😳




Thanks Asha...

<<Arati is the real Arati when she is with Yash,>> You said it my friend. That is exactly what's happening ever since they met in Brownies that night. Aarti just forgets her inhibitions when she is with Yash. It's as if they naturally mold themselves into each other's space. Now even Aarti is becoming aware of these feelings that crop up with regard to Yash.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tleshni

Oh ho Indu ji this update seriously got my eyes all swelled up..i was literally breathing so fast wondering whats gonna happen next as i read..šŸ˜†


What can I say Indu?Just loving how you beautifully conveyed how Aarti would react when she knew about Payal's truth.Like Yash,I was also confused with her lack of curiosity of Payal's origin and what u conveyed as Aarthi's thoughts were so touching and completely within Aarti's characterisationšŸ‘..

Yesterday I was re-reading the initial chapters and now when Im readin the current update,I can sense so much of growth in Aarti.How she was so shy and hesistant around Yash earlier,now she is so protective and possesive of both father and daughter..she is no longer scared of anyone when it comes down to the 2 most important people in the world..

Im now feeling really bad for Yash,from what I can see,he seems to be a strong and level headed person on the outside,but deep inside,he too is longing for a person to come and give a hand and bring out from his sadness😭..How he was deceived from all these cunning women and yet he was strong...Now I think he truly needs Aarti to heal him(I think she has already done that😳) and also to show him what true love means..hopfefully she will shower him with all the love he needs after what he has gone through...This journey is not only about Aarti gaining her self worth but also the same for Yash...

Payal,what can i say about her..you have successfully captured her innocence in the story and Im having a feeling that in the present once Payal knows about her origin she will have some tough time dealing with it...By the way,I do miss Aayu alot..šŸ˜†

One doubt Indu ji,am I correct to say that only Suraj Pratap and Yash knows about Payal's identity and no one from the family knows about it?...

Sorry for the long comment,..I have difficulties in stopping,..Anyway looking foward for the new installation soon..





tleshni...I am speechless and I just want to hug you...šŸ¤— Thank you for giving me such a wonderful write-up. And you are apologizing for it getting long? Come on!! I was so disappointed when I came to the end. I just loved reading through your thoughts.

You have hit upon the pulse. This was always a two-way healing process. Yash's healing began the morning after he met Aarti for the first time. That's when he realized how wrong he was to generalize "women." Aarti was all that those women were not...and much more. By just being herself, she reinstated his faith. And she is still doing it. For instance, do you think the Yash of before Aarti would have dismissed Naina's behavior so easily? Think about it.😊

About that query in bold...You are right. Only Yash and his father know about Payal's identity...and now Aarti knows. Yash had no idea that Naina knew about this.

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