Samarpan (An FF) Epilogue (Thread 3/Page 103) - Page 3

What can I say Indu?Just loving how you beautifully conveyed how Aarti would react when she knew about Payal's truth.Like Yash,I was also confused with her lack of curiosity of Payal's origin and what u conveyed as Aarthi's thoughts were so touching and completely within Aarti's characterisation👏..

Yesterday I was re-reading the initial chapters and now when Im readin the current update,I can sense so much of growth in Aarti.How she was so shy and hesistant around Yash earlier,now she is so protective and possesive of both father and daughter..she is no longer scared of anyone when it comes down to the 2 most important people in the world..

Im now feeling really bad for Yash,from what I can see,he seems to be a strong and level headed person on the outside,but deep inside,he too is longing for a person to come and give a hand and bring out from his sadness😭..How he was deceived from all these cunning women and yet he was strong...Now I think he truly needs Aarti to heal him(I think she has already done that😳) and also to show him what true love means..hopfefully she will shower him with all the love he needs after what he has gone through...This journey is not only about Aarti gaining her self worth but also the same for Yash...

Payal,what can i say about her..you have successfully captured her innocence in the story and Im having a feeling that in the present once Payal knows about her origin she will have some tough time dealing with it...By the way,I do miss Aayu alot..😆

One doubt Indu ji,am I correct to say that only Suraj Pratap and Yash knows about Payal's identity and no one from the family knows about it?...

Sorry for the long comment,..I have difficulties in stopping,..Anyway looking foward for the new installation soon..

i was so happy when saw ur pm..

Thank u so much di..

Love the update..

will be back with long comment..

love ya...

Congo for the 3rd thread di..

loved the fiery and protective arthi...

she still does not know that yash held her hand right when she was born and feels that she was born for him...

Preliminary Note: Congratulations on the 3rd thread of Samarpan, Indu! 🤗 I shouldn't have read this update since I have some catching up to do, but I couldn't resist...And it was such a beautiful part. I am still slightly dazed from the rush of emotions that went through me as I read...

I have last part to read from the previous thread tooo..

so here is my super long comment indu 😳

wow wow arthi's anger is so cute dear.. yash was really finding it unresistable being near her...

atlast yash revealed his past to arthi in a most comfortable way...

really arthi was so impressed and sad hearing the life of yash and payal 😭

she still don't know she is the person who can fill their life 😉

but that diary is the best way to express yash's love for her... when yash read those lines arthi must have been connected with his soul rite...

that's why she got comfort in the warm hug of yash 😳😳 so sweet hug..

and the cutest thing is payal too joining them for the little family hug 👏👏👏

super indu dear don't make wait continue soon dear

I just cant tell u what i was feeling while reading it

Loved the way u described all emotions of Yash n Aarti

Finally Yash shared his past with his soulmate

Indu u are really a fantastic writter ,,,l loved this part so much,,at the end when Payal wants to join them to Hug,,was really an emotional moment for me

Pls continue soon n thanx for the pm

Congrats on the new Thread dear