MY FIRST STORY ON AARYA: last chapter updated pg30 - Page 10

3rd chapter was superb dear.

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

Huh even though i want aarti nd yash to get married i don't want them getting married like this tht's just wrobg but liked how aarti nd yash cud stand up for themselves nd so can the wives

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Buddy your writing style is fabulous and unique,it reminds me of 18th century literature.Nobody here uses this style.

You know the way Gayatri and Shobha addresses their respective husbands as-'My Husband' is superb.The way Yash and Aarti maintain a decency in language even while arguing with their parents is remarkable.

Loved the broad minded and modern thinking of AarYa.And Dubey and SP are behaving like typical orthodox but this stubborness of Dubey and SP will result in AarYa marriage.

Gr8 going.

Originally posted by: Tahitien-moon

Lovely piece of writing billie😆

Originally posted by: suhaaana

till now i had enjoyed it reading amazing piece of writing

update next soon

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Beautifully written and a Great update Billie 👏

God I hate those two dads of Yash and Aarti 😡, forcing their kids to do something that they both don't want to do. 😡

Waiting for the next part so see how and why Yash and Aarti will get married.

Originally posted by: disha_rajdev

first of all what shall I call u dear😉

and these update is going great yar...am very much interested now... update soon and don't forget to pm me🤗

Originally posted by: maha9

3rd chapter was superb dear.

the modern kids being forced into marriage and their views are clearly said.

continue soon dear. want to see arya's meeting

Originally posted by: padmavar

it is a wonderful story. please update soon.