MY FIRST STORY ON AARYA: last chapter updated pg30

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: prettyji
eagerly waiting

thanx...😊

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: .KillTheBitch.
Really awesome Billie...I loved it!!!!

Arranged marriages are quite a problem...yikes!

Great update...continue soon!

yeah they are quiet a problem some, as some work out perfect, so lets see aarya's😉, thank u😃

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
nice story
read the 3 parts in one go..

loved it...

thank u for reading nd loving it, glad u like it😊

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nan0102

@nan0102

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

a very nice update..👍🏼

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Huh even though i want aarti nd yash to get married i don't want them getting married like this tht's just wrobg but liked how aarti nd yash cud stand up for themselves nd so can the wives

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Buddy your writing style is fabulous and unique,it reminds me of 18th century literature.Nobody here uses this style.

You know the way Gayatri and Shobha addresses their respective husbands as-'My Husband' is superb.The way Yash and Aarti maintain a decency in language even while arguing with their parents is remarkable.

Loved the broad minded and modern thinking of AarYa.And Dubey and SP are behaving like typical orthodox but this stubborness of Dubey and SP will result in AarYa marriage.

Gr8 going.