Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 96

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Indu...beautiful...poor Arti what all she has gone through ever since shoba left her...no one should go through what she had to face...

really hope atleast now arti realizes she is the only one for payal and yash...

Thanks Alamelu.

Aarti is bound to realize that soon...She is slowly understanding her role in Payal and Yash's life. That is exactly what Yash wanted when he put in that condition.

Originally posted by: palbhar

Waow!!!!! Loved the entrance of Naina to bring the twist to the story and to hopefully make Aarti aware of her feeling for Yash...(always loved the name Naina...in fact I was thinking that would be a nice name for KS's next character)...look at home Aarti fought for Payal...only a person who has gone through it will understand...so true!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

Thanks Bharthi.

Naina will bring in Aarti's awakening. In fact she is already doing that. At the moment Naina has managed to evoke the strong maternal protective instincts in Aarti. Very soon she might be the catalyst who will bring in changes in Aarti's feelings for Yash.

Originally posted by: gafulu14

shock 4 arti n pain for but other hand yashjio v ery madup mind person n have best taste for life

Yes Alka, what Aarti is going through might seem painful now, but this is her transition phase. She is getting aware of her own worth in Yash and Payal's life. Yash is only giving her the right nudges.

Originally posted by: tleshni

Indu,this is the first time Im commenting on Samarpan although I've been a fan for a long time..Finally decided to break my silence😳.

Im not good with words bt all I can say is Samarpan gives me a completely different feeling altogether.. Something so peaceful and serene about the whole picture of the story..Nobody is completely evil,everyone are complex in their own..Ahh I can just add on and on.. I love your Yash..So mature and understanding..

And recently Ive been connecting with Aarti alot more..Not that I have any experience like her but her lack of self esteem,the feeling of worthless etc is completely understandable...It looks like deep inside,Aarti wants to be loved and accepted but due to everything tht she has gone through,she is kind of punishing herself because she sees her self as a burden and not worth to be loved...Im hoping that with the presence of Naina,she will realise her true feelings for Yash although Im pretty sure she will try to push it away...Maybe with the help of Yash,,she can come through it..😳

Another thing Indu,I absolutely loved the sunrise scene...😳❤️...there is subtle romance and I can completely picturise how beautiful the scene would be..with Yash looking at Aarti with eyes full of love and Aarti too being pulled into his eyes..(kind of reminds me the Dil kyu yeh mera scene where Aarti blows on Yash neck and they share this passionate eyelock☺️) Gosh,now I cant wait for the romance to bloom on both parts😳

Btw I have some doubts... You mentioned in the earlier chapter that Yash will tell Nanimasi that he has hurt her,and nanimasi tells him that both Yash and Aarti were confused souls..So Im wondering whether you meant Yash lying about his true identity...or there is something else to come?

Another doubt.. In the present,Payal calls Aarti mumma..bt she does know that Aarti is not her biological mother?because it seems like in the flashback,Payal is old enough to remember how she met Aarti etc...

Ooops...this one got too long..I see that you're going for a holiday..Do enjoy it...although we wont be getting any updates this weekend😭..hopefully by Wednesday we will be getting a dhamaka update...(I've sent you a buddy request for PM😉)

Oh, Wow for such a wonderful review. Thanks a million times. I am so glad you broke your silence and decided to come in. Welcome to the thread!🤗

I loved your insights regarding Aarti. She indeed is unaware of her worth. Her family did a good job on her. However, those lowlives didn't count for a Yash in Aarti's life. Yash loves Aarti . He understands how predestined their coming together is. So it's natural that he should be the one igniting the flames of her self-worth and making her glow in its warmth. He knows she can't be pushed, so he is creating situations that will bring her closer to him on her own.

About your doubts..Yes, Yash could never fully forgive himself for being so wrong about Aarti, even if for a few hours, and then keeping her in the dark about his identity and hurting her some more. Even after so many years he still feels the pangs of remorse...and that's what he shares with naanimaasi. As for Payal, I shall tackle the "mumma" part soon enough. Sure Payal will know that Aarti is not her biological mother. She will be with them when they get married and there will be pictures and videos for her to see later. However, that would never make a difference to her. But there are other things she wouldn't know till much later.

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Amazing update dear👏👏

Yash condition superb😃,he want aarti to choose the woman, where aarti was surprised with his condition

Poor aarti still in pain😭😭 due to her family..Loved the way yash comforts aarti.⭐️

Liked aarti jealous to naina⭐️...I hope soon aarti will realize her feelings towards yash

Aarti poem is endearing⭐️...beautiful words👏 👏

You left'she left'.and I felt so alone...I felt belonged'I felt I was home.

Especially loved yash line-"I choose to stay my love'.always and ever"😳

Aarya morning scene beautiful😳

Aarti outburst to naina was superb👏👏 ..naanimassi convo with yash so emotional.😭😭😭..Poor aarti.😭

Waiting for how aarti comforts payal

Continue soon

Thanks for pm😊

Thanks Radha. 🤗

And thank you for liking the poem. Aarti is so open and 'vocal' when she puts her feelings into words, isn't she?

Of course, Aarti will soon realize that the unknown feelings that Yash evokes in her are nothing but love. Why else does she have these flutterings along with a sense of security with him? She is an intelligent girl and will soon question her own feelings.

Originally posted by: AntaresVega

Naina is the person who will compell Aarti to give a name to her feelings. I think you followed a similar pattern in Sparsh.

:))

I knew what was coming when you wrote that Naina left the drawing book by the fire.

What are Naina's thoughts on Yash? Is she another gold-digger? The line where you wrote that she left Payal's drawing book to catch up with Yash makes me think that she's craving for Yash's attention.

Or is she just another friend? Anyway, she'll be the one who will indirectly make Aarti realise her feelings. Are wedding bells going to be heard soon? From Yash mentioning to Gayatri on the phone that he'll bring Aarti home to Aarti being concerned about Yash getting married, it does seem that their wedding is round the corner. The only roadblock Aarti has to overcome in order to marry Yash is that she makes people go away from her and everyone leaves her because she is a curse. That's very low self-esteem I must say.

Indu di, yo write so well that reading about antagonistic characters like Prashant and grey characters like Naina and Sameer won't cause us much pain. At the same time, the way you describe Yash and Aarti's interactions is also very aesthetic and beautiful to cherish.

Thanks Lyra...I try to write what I feel. Just as I feel your affection when you write such sweet words for me.🤗

Yes, you are right. Naina will be one of the catalysts to propel Aarti into taking cognizance about her feelings. Naina does want to communicate with Yash. Maybe she has a residual matter unattended. Let's see.

You are spot on about Aarti: She is her only hindrance. This is her awakening phase, where she is discovering herself. At the moment she is going with the flow of the events. Very soon she'll sit and analyze her own feelings and her involvement.

Originally posted by: Gkathria

I'm catching up a bit late! but I love it! I love how well sketched the characters are! Keep up the great work Indu!

Thanks Gimmy (am I right?).

No problems whatsoever if you have entered late. I'd love to know your opinion as and when you can.

Originally posted by: pvejani

wow⭐️⭐️⭐️...lovely update indu...loved very very❤️ very much...

very beautifully written👏👏.superb work dear👏👏😎.

loved that poem very much which aarti wrote in her journal.every emotions she was feeling was beautifully described in it👍🏼😎.

you are very talented writer indu👏👏👏

loving the way story is progressing😎👍🏼

thanx for this wonderful update and pm.

continue soon dear...waiting.

Thank you dear friend.🤗
Your emos express your feelings...Love you for being so eloquent.❤️

Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks Surish. The jumping smiley is just adorable.❤️

Originally posted by: meenadsouza

Hi Indu,

Really lovely update . Part 24 was awesome and I cannot express my appreciation as I am not good at words. In simple, I can only tell you that , all parts 1 to 24 were read with great interest and appreciating your outstanding writing skills every second while reading. You are really a great poet and a writer Indu, every word you write has a deep and lovely meaning and the poems were extremely superb and heart touching. ... tears do come while reading. You story is beautifully woven with mixer of all different feelings i.e. ignorance, torture, pain, love (various kinds ) thrill, suspense, friendship and one can find everything in this story. Its really worth publishing a Novel Indu and I am sure full world will appreciate and enjoy reading it.

I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving such a lovely, interesting & heart touching FF sacrificing our valuable time and wish you all the best to get more strength and imagination to complete this story with beautiful ending to the entire satisfaction of the readers.

Take care and enjoy your short vacation which you really need.
Luv
Meena

Hey Meena...thanks for such a lovely, lovely, lovely feedback...and thanks a ton for the mail.
I am absolutely overwhelmed with your compliments. What can I say? I keep saying that I only write what I feel, and in the end what I feel makes you feel and connect. I love this mode of communication between us. Love you for the good wishes. 🤗I'll certainly try my best to give this a logical conclusion.

Take care.

PS: I had a superb vacation. 😳