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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .KillTheBitch.

Reserved...who knew one could feel this emotional for a fictional character?




You know Carissa...I had always wished for them to show a little of Aarti's growing up phase in the show and making that as a platform for Yash to understand her better.

I shall await your opinion on the chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

I loved the response to the burning drawings but Yash read her current journal without any qualms? That's not the same as reading the one she'd lost from my perspective.

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I agree. But as far as Yash is concerned, he is completely into this relationship, thereby he doesn't feel he is trespassing or doing anything inappropriate when he reads her composition. He is already a slave of her writings...and this is the first one he read after he came to know that Aarti is his journal writer.

I shall await your opinions lil sis.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pvanatic

if this is not beautiful i don't know what is. it pulls on heartstrings that weren't even there❤️




Thanks. You know when I place myself in Aarti and Yash's shoes and try to think from their perspectives, the emotional play pulls at my heartstrings as well. Two individuals who are perfect for each other still have to struggle to find each other. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Zetter

Awww that was jut a full b=packed emotional and fun update Pal 👏 👏 👏...I just wanted to hug Aarti she knows what Payal is going through as she went through the same thing years ago she 😭 🤗


haa well I knew that was what Yash was going to ask Aarti to choose the woman he should marry and the way she was getting jealous when she saw Yash w/ the girl 😆 😆...wow Aarti sure gave it to her when she talk about Payal's drawings just being things 👏

I love naanimaasi's words to Yash about Aarti defending her daughter, wow Aarti left Yash speechless 😉 😛 😃

Once again you've left me in awe with your brilliance my friend thanks you for being my lifesaver among these hard times ❤️ 🤗 🤗




Thanks pal...🤗🤗🤗
Yup, Aarti understands her little savior angel so well. That's why she calls her her savior...because while being there for Payal, Aarti is actually freeing herself from her shackles. She is saving herself..and deep in her heart she knows Payal's presence in her life is helping her.

Well, Yash has played a smart move. He has put the ball in Aarti's court. It's upto her to understand the game, set their lives, and understand the match. He knows that if he tries to make inroads, she will step back...so what better way than to make her step forward inadvertently till she has come so far away toward him and Payal that she understands what she is to them.

I am just glad that for a few moments we could all get together and remember Yash and aarti, albeit in a different way.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64




Rutu...🤗

Of course she paints again. Remember that painting on the cover of her book "Samarpan"? That was another surprise she gave Yash on his birthday. It took her all that while to paint bring herself to paint, but in the end she did.😊

oh yeah- i'd forgotten 😳
but i had written that right after reading the chapter and was really emotional..i kid you not, i had tears in my eyes and a huge pout. i was like a ten year old child asking/hoping for a happy ending. 😳 and this all when i already know what the ending is...
ofcourse, that's saying everything about your writing 👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: miyasingh1

it was nice but sad at the end😭



Thanks Miya. Welcome to the Samarpan thread.😊 Glad to have you on board.

I know it was sad Miya..but look at it positively. Aarti is waking up from a lifetime's regression. She is expressing herself freely now...A few days back she spoke for naanimaasi against Prashant. Now she did the same for Payal. Aarti is coming out of her shell and her natural traits are sprouting.😊


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveViShalini

indu di.. only you can make me cry with your words. i hate u for makingme cry in office...


but i love you for this wonderful update...

its so awesome..


I wann give tight hug to aarthi, the poor soul.. aww..


-will be back with long comment-



Thanks Shalini.. Come here; let me give you a tight hug for making you cry.🤗

I shall await your thoughts.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

Fantastic update Indu. I loved how Yash managed to ensure that Aarti plays an important part in his and Payal's life by giving her the responsibility of choosing his life partner as he knows deep down she feels something for him. Felt really sorry for Aarti though when she kept seeing Yash and Naina together as she felt she was losing a part of her life. I also love the comfort between them as Aarti doesn't seem to mind his touches. (Btw I could so picture that jacket scene the morning they saw the sunrise together). Beautifully written as always and looking forward to what is in store next.



Thanks Saf.

Yes Yash has ensured Aarti's active participation in his and Payal's life. Now it's for Aarti to realize that what she is doing is because of her feelings and her attachment for the two and not for some obligation.

Aarti feels very comfortable with Yash now, because she has not yet been able to see through her own feelings. She thinks it is normal in a friendship. At the same time, his looks and closeness and even touch take her on a different plane...where she faces altogether different sensations. They scare her now even as they excite her.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Lovely updt,cnt soon.
Waiting.



Thanks alekhika.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rutu83

oh yeah- i'd forgotten 😳

but i had written that right after reading the chapter and was really emotional..i kid you not, i had tears in my eyes and a huge pout. i was like a ten year old child asking/hoping for a happy ending. 😳 and this all when i already know what the ending is...
ofcourse, that's saying everything about your writing 👏👏👏




Aww Rutu...that's why I gave you that hug. I'd say the same thing that I wrote to Miya. Take this as the phase of Aarti's rebirth. She is breaking through and coming to her own self.

You know, writing for Aarti and Yash and Payal is emotionally rejuvenating for me as well. I am trying to understand so many things as I write. I am only glad that I am able to get through to you.😊

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