Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 112

Hi Indu di , how are you.. howz things going around😃

ch23 is seems to new begining yash n aarti as she ask yash to re maary n we all know to hoem yash will

aarti is such sweetheart innocent soul n love teh way she is telling n yash loosin his controls.. how cute wow yash says it but this buddhu aarti dint get it

n then again when yash cornered her she says it all by herself but could not make sense out of it omg i am smiling or i shud laughing with this whole part.. oh man he is so sweet hot n cute sorry cant stop writing as it is direct dil se( wink)

"Follow the thought my sweet friend, and tell me what you find."

Oh indu di its amazing how yahs is dropping hints for aarti to pick up

Naukuchiatal never heard off that a surprise yash talking about yay but aarti felt pang of J thinking yash still love his ex but again she gave royal ignore right but how long tht we have to see

There's was a very natural, uniquely symbiotic interactive relationship….almost as if they always knew each other. Yes be it payal or yash n aarti hai naa

OMG OMG

HE FOUND HIS JOURNAL GAL OH YESSS

I broke a mirror…Was it yesterday?
I hurt him…and he walked away
There I stood amid the shattered glass
Diamonds fell all around me like shards

The silence deafened
The chime hollowed
My skin cut the edge
The silver back stained my blood
A pain well deserved

This is written by aarti after dubey n her meeting hai naa.. the pain stiil left you nowhere in all this blissful moments

Tera mujh se he phele ka naata ko yun hi nahi dil lubhata koi jaane tu ya jaane naa

Mane tu ya mane naa

Thanks for telling us about the place n again beautiful vision n poem by aarti for this

Awesome

N then again they started from where they begin yash marry the one who love you n payal so will this time yash says n still will give something so tht aarti will figure out by herself tht she is the one

Samarpan is one ff which i read 2-3 times till date n even after reading one chapter i cant jump to write comment but flow n still not much eager n restless to move to next part but keep reading n trying to grab more out of what you gave us which is still not enough

I never thot tht i will come back with ch24 but the condition yash put fro aarti is irresistible

I know he wll not ask her directly but tht which make her realize what is actually the best for yash n payal in none other than herself

N yes yash use the correct condition its like making the naughtiest kid of class a monitor now where will aarti hide

Omg aarti madam samjho ishara horn pukare pom pom

I mean how many clues yash will throw on her but in mid of thi s dark shadows of past again come as mist in between yash n aarti well i just wonder on thinking of those time we become restless what my poor lil aarti has faced .. i wish yash can take her in his smbrace n absorb her pain fear n make her value what she is of .. my heart cries for her

Oh feel so good to hear yash thoughts tht yes she is opening to him n her condition will heal n make her realize her worth in both of their life

N what a beautiful visionary you are indu di this smarapan has bring to you which was not been seen during sparsh honestly

You my sweet friend are the flower who has the strength of a mountain and beauty of an angel.

I just wonder how he knew about sameer well he is not around was he??

Oh a pange of J n emoyion surrounded aarti on yash saying about his someone spl

You will tell me when it is the right time Yash.

Is she is waiting for yash to say it all even their love n destiny connection of soul mates

Naina now who is she is she the one who will knock aarti mind ( as heart is always with yash) which is she is trying to shut

Omg she kissed yash nhe dint say anything n payal is naaina genuine or trying to be close to yash princess to mke her space ??

Mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha boss

Poor aarti i hope naina don't do much to already hurt n our healing aarti now with yash love although i ahve faith on yash but in his absence i hope nothing more

Oh bow down lady simple yet effect direct dil se really heart touching words

You left…she left….and I felt so alone
I look up at the night sky and ask myself why
I realize then that it's cause I had never known
What it meant to be cherished
Until I was cherished by her and by you
It always was so hard to be close to anyone
Yet it's so easy to be close to you.

No matter if you choose to stay or leave
I now know I won't be alone
Cause for a moment in time
All my pain you felt as your own
And just for that one moment
I felt belonged…I felt I was home.

Oh breathtaking be it yash n aarti n now most peaceful blissful sunset on mountains ,, we can callit KODAK moment hai naa

N nanian the spiler arggghh but i still feel she is needed to make aarti face her true feelings but still si feel the aarya moment is broken not for us but for aarti.. yash please tell her naa you came for her as you were looking on your beauty n admiring it not even looking at susnset

Uncle chris is a sweetheart n how he tell us about aunt anna smile only for him oh this is what we call true love n Prateik admires n makes the arrangement for our lover boy

N yes aarti feelings i hope will not hurt her but then J is one one the beautiful feeling i guess when you are in love but she is not yet secured thts my worry

Finally yash told him about morning n aarti said atleast to yash tht she thinks naina is yash choice good so far n Dear you dint let yahs clarify as naian has still more role to play bring aarya closer

Is aarti hands burn too in all this mishap but again you showcase two things first aarti care for payal beyond her life n naina insensitiveness on payal masterpieces but how can i feel tht if it is written by
indu can be as simple as it seem

Again a great depth of pain n misery with aarti painting s burn in front of her huff seriously when this dark demons leaver yash n aarti .. go knows another moving update with smile n lump in throt n little moist eyes thats samarpan for me thansk INDU DI FOR this beautiful masterpiece

congrats for crosiing page 150 as i am coming back with ch25 too 😆

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Ria: Thank you so much for such lovely feedbacks. I am sold to you my friend. Your comments have such simplicity and personal touch that I get all senti when I read them. Love how you intersperse with conversational lines...I feel you are sitting across talking to me. I am thoroughly enjoying retacing my steps and walking with you. *Sigh* thanks again pal...for making me happy and enjoying this journey as much as I have enjoyed writing it.🤗

Ch 25

jab hamare ya haal hai toh ,Really i can only empathize with yash as he is so attached to aarti tht her pain of past

thank s god this time aarti has yash n yash has NM

oh again yash encounter another destiny game which made aarti n yash bound to be bonded in unsaid yet strongest than ever which is i will say become their strength n inspiration to lead life be it aarti journal for yash and yash advice to aarti

NM again guided yash how not to do something which make aarti close the doors she has open to him ( although she herself hasn't realized itsjuts us n yash had )

N I love how you said its mother (aarti) fight for her child

Aarti is so crative wow collage what an idea induji (wink)

WOW payal world thats i will sure use for my nephew n for my child in future issshhh

Yash beinf father his emotion on payal sadness n then their angel their pari made a miracle which for her is love n belief which yash needs the most in his life aarti darling

A hug was it yash who need or its aarti

Yes it is for yash a scared father n then it really made aarti open another layer n shown it to yash nbnot in words but her body tremples with past fire n pain of losing his treasure emotion in form of art

So Prateik also find his bhabhi ( not yet gundi one) but yes a one to whom you can talk n share which you cannot share with family sometimes

So naina y she told it to aarti so tht aarti give her space n she cant talk to yash i still confused

N stupid aarti do give her space she need thinking yash was referring her as close to her jhalli hai humari aarti

N my blood is boiling thyansk to naaina space n yash srgumenet n aarti is not with payal she fall doen but i am again shocked to see aarti in new mode calm n logical ask yashto go n rescue them till that time she will be with their princess n where the hell was naina ji

N in between all yash n we see new side of aarti n again aarti dialogue was shaking me n touching the core

Yash, please. I have survived worse

N naina she is too much all she care about her damn n she said about payal oh thanks you stars naian yash dint do anything then asking you to leave n i am amazed he has figure it pout well i guess experience after Tanya,deepti n off course gr8 aarrpita

. I am happily bound to someone. In simple words I am unavailable ( this is in all trhis maess sounds musical to me) soory cant help it

Omg i have finally covered thread2 n yash n aarti journey to yash aarti payal journey looking forward to thread3 where they will bond to sacred bond of marriage

Thanks pal for beautiful story i have so much to day but words wont suffice

Cya tc.. god bless