Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 2

congo for the new thread..🥳

congratz 4 new n beautiful thread 👏👏🥳

congratulations on the second thread dearin du awesome part loved it, waiting for next part Insha Allah.

Congratulations on the new thread!

congrats for new thread ...

on your new thread and keep me enthralled with your intriguing pieces of literature!

Indu.. firstly congrats on the new thread but it came not as a surprise as samarpan is a beautiful following and is bound to rake in many readers.

Ah so I was right.. Yash is still in doubt due to previous heartbreak so he's putting aarti to the "test". Though he doesn't know her much, his possessiveness is already evident when he couldn't bare another man grabbing aarti's hand. I absolutely loved the way Yash was speaking to Payal in such a loving manner even though she technically isn't blood related to him.. Now that is what I call true and pure love; a love born from the heart without any prior bondage.

Again aarti is still lost in her past. People say if you want to move on in life, forget your past and look at the future but it isn't that simple when your present is haunted by your past and your future is filled with fear of the unknown. Aarti's fears, insecurities and deep hurt is probably killing her from inside out and thus she seems lifeless in the eyes. I wouldn't blame her after going through such traumatic events. Even for me when someone I really love says hurtful and insensitive things, I'll be crying my eyes out (alone) and be so hurt that I'll try to have minimum convo with that person as it hurts bad. This is what I call holding on to the past in which we don't want to let it go due to anger, ego, pain or whatever negativity going on inside us. The day aarti lets go of this will be the day she will be completely free.

Again my dearest Indu, this was beautifully written. I don't know how in the world you manage to write with such flow that it's so easy to read and each line connects to another and all your past chapters with such perfection. Samarpan is developing to be a story that is always on my mind that when I'm alone, I think of it and when I'm with friends I talk about it. So here again is my jhappi to my favourite writer in this forum...🤗

Btw Indu I would like to ask your permission to use this sentence as my facebook status if you don't mind that is Surrender is the path to freedom through our unique authenticity,
where we experience the flow of life not through the narrow lens of the mind,
but through the vast refuge of the heart

lovely update..payal is a darling and i am sure she wants to ask the fairy to become her mummy...am hoping it is nanimaasi and yash who are stopping sameer