Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 107

Originally posted by: RA17

Hey di I am back with ch15

Well mr yash suraj schindhiya really sameer says mafia n P says ruffians bechara aarti tune kya kar diya...Just kidding

Really NM has come up as a strong woman.. i salute

also how his gesture of coming today itself n nm assured n feel secured.. n yash n nm again click not just on jovial note but on deep understanding , love n care for the one n only aarti

Indu di you create magic of yeh dil hai in bg wow superb hayee that just remind the great eye locks we have relished in airy journey in show.. n hey mujhse dosti karoge just amazing thoroughly njyed it

But then again the mist comes in of aarti past which made her feel so low abt herself tht even she thinks she is not worth of being a friend either n then again yash has taken one more step towards her

N then aarti n yash silent yet strong connection which led to share theri food then happy moments to the one who kept very deep inside of human n how each other company soothes it as balm

Poem just marvellous the best way to put across your thots in simple way loved it "a friend is a feeling of forever in the heart"

N yash is not right but can't say wrong either as it is was life has made him n similar sting numbs me when i read aarti thot on finding nm house on sale tht she is the one who again lead to her close one in wary but a sigh of relief the damages once done cannt be healed but controlled n there comes our yash...

This whole samarpan journey has its own diff approach may be it lead be also grow as reader n reading btwn the lines as i compare my journey from sparsh to here n yeh the credit goes to you Indu

I mean ek ajeeb sukuoon yet restlessness you create for next but i resist as cant hurry up to grasp n yet always fail to go dive deeper..

Thanks again for update n regular update..cya

Hey there Ria...Another heart to heart by you. You are such a love...and you describe the emotions so beautifully...Sukoon with restlessness...aha, I love that.

You touched upon the journey from Sparsh to Samarpan...Because a couple of readers are going through Sparsh now, I went through a couple of chapters myself. I find myself much more organized in my approach now...I can feel the growth.😳

I cannot thank you enough for visiting all the chapters and giving me such lovely comments. Thanks a ton.

Originally posted by: surprising

awesome upd👏

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: InduG64

Hey pal...thanks a ton. Your support is mandatory for me...always and ever.🤗

Yeah, Naina has no clue whatsoever about real and true love. For her it's all about acquiring something. She wants Yash as a husband because she thought herself in love with him once and now that he is single he seemed like the good husband material.

Aarti put her demons to rest somewhat when she resurrected Payal from her grief and directing her toward positivity. Yash helped with the rest with the hug, which he knew she needed. So even though he thanked Aarti for helping Payal and him to regain their smiles, it was in fact the other way round.

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Wow! Fabulous update. Aarti consoled Payal and diverted her mind from the burning paintings to making a beautiful collage of her paintings. Yash ask her if he can hug her and she let him do that.

Naina confess her feelings in front of Aarti that she loves Yash, and Aarti side tracked herself from Yash. Aarti reminded of what Yash said, Someone who has been very close to me'.someone I have known a long time... and she thought that Yash was speaking of Naina.

Aarti deliberately avoid Yash so Naina can talk with him about their relationship. Aarti excused from the trek to give chance to Naina so she can confess her feelings to Yash.

Aarti screamed seeing Payal fell into a ditch. She told Yash to bring rope or someone to help and she will take care of Payal. He hugged her and kissed her and told that they both are precious to him.

Aarti got hurt badly going into the ditch. Yash bring help and take out both of them. Aarti hurt badly but she wants that Payal should get the first-aid first. Aarti got stitches on her wound in back. Aarti can do anything to save Payal. I hope Yash made her realize that nobody is better than her for him and Payal.

Naina came to talk with Yash and tell him that she liked him and wanted to marry, but Yash said sorry he can't marry her. He is bound to somebody. Naina want Yash but she doesn't care for Payal. Naina told him why he was thinking so much about the kid who is not even his daughter. Aarti heard that and shocked.

Aarti definitely heard about Payal not being his daughter. When she will know about the truth, she will definitely admire Yash, as he is taking care of Payal as his own daughter, and her father never cared about her even though she was their own blood.

*Sigh* Shashi...your reviews are such feel-good ones. You always summarize the part so nicely...I wish I had compiled your feedbacks somewhere...cause then I wouldn't have to search the previous chapters for references. I would have just skimmed through your reviews.

Thanks a ton pal.

Yes, slowly but surely she is getting the message that there isn't anyone out there who equally wants Yash and Payal both in her life. Naina only wanted Yash. She was tolerating Payal for his sake.

Originally posted by: pvejani

wow👏👏👏...superb update...loved much ...beautifully written⭐️.thanx for update and pm.waiting for next part.

Thank you.😳

Originally posted by: KrantiGuru_JKR

Awesome update again..
The way Aarti managed to calm payal..
Loved how Yash asked Aarti for hug

Next day the way Aarti calmed Yash when payal fell and she herself went down to payal and took her care in spite of being injured - awesome write up.

And at last Aarti overhear Yash & Naina's conversation ... Now I m waiting eagerly to see Aarti's reaction.
And also waiting how Aarti reacts to her feelings for Yash as she herself is noticing change in her feelings for Yash...


and ya I commented in time this time 😉 I m not sure if I will able to comment in detail for all parts that I didn't as I have so many pms to answer but I definitely want to say i m a big fan of ur write ups 😊
And can't thank u enough for giving such beautiful stories..

EDIT-
Di btw I wonder how much Aarti heard..??
whole conversation or only part where payal's truth was revealed??
*thinking mode* so now better that u update ASAP lol

Hey Miti...How are you? Hope you are recouping well.

Thank you.😊

Aarti realizes she is developing some feelings, but is still unable to give a name to them. "Love" is such a taboo word for her that she won't even consider it in her conscious mind.

Hmm! How much has she heard? Million dollar question there.😃

Originally posted by: Leevi05

awesome update

Thanks Leevi.😊

Originally posted by: shalini28

great update di.

loved it so much😳

Thanks Shalini.😊

Originally posted by: jasraj123

nice update
love the way aarit made payal understand and
then sorry to naina
whattt arti told them to go ahead as she thought naina is interested in yash😕

love the way yash told naina straight way that he is not available 😆😆😆

waiting for next update

Thanks Jasraj.😳

Yeah, Aarti thought not only Naina but also Yash is interested in this relationship. That's why she let Naina be with him to sort it out.. It's just this big misunderstanding on Aarti's part that she thinks Yash meant Naina when he spoke of the girl he wants in his life.😊

Awesome as always my dear indu👏