Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 106

Chapter 24
Emotional update loved aartis outburst against naina comment its only a drawing book she would get a new one, superb loved uncle chris and anna part with aarti and pratiek, aarti mistakenly think that its naina is the girl whom yash referred as long known friend poor aarti at one side feeling happy for him but also hurt she cannot hide her pain away from him.
description about natural scenarios that you write i can imagine it while reading it. feeling so real about the character emotions too.

Chapter 25
Naanimaasi and yash bonding getting to know each other very well and there is naanimaasi to guide yash to get his beloved pari in his life back, aarti pacifying payal and making her smile again esp the part both kneeling on the bed and giving hi 5 that scene was so perfect , yash and aarti hug was so emotional dear, pratiek going through different emotions aarti as his friend sister and babhi so nice, the four going on the trek payal falling into the ditch aarti saving payal , terrified yash coming with rescue officials, and that deep cut on aarti back was painful, naina she is such a selfish woman and yash tells her that she had lead a colorful life in London best appropriate word yash used to define her character, aarti standing with shocked face. please update next part quickly.

great update di.

nice update
love the way aarit made payal understand and
then sorry to naina
whattt arti told them to go ahead as she thought naina is interested in yash😕😕😕😕

love the way yash told naina straight way that he is not available 😆😆😆

waiting for next update

Originally posted by: jikky_84

Awesome update Indu 👏 🤗

Loved how Arati made Payal happy after the book got burnt. In a way when Arati healed Payal, she herself got some peace. I really disliked the way Naina told to Arati that Yash also likes her but is not saying that. I think Naina got that initially itself that Yash is liking Arati. Also she seems so in considerate to a child's feelings also just because she is not Yash's. But I feel, even if Payal was Yash's biological daughter, Naina would have never loved or accepted her but just showed to others that she loves her so that she can get Yash. And the sad part is she don't even love Yash but just wants to settle with him because of her parents.

Arati is so innocent that she still thought that Naina loves Yash ane the girl Yash meant was Naina and so helped Naina in the morning. Loved the way Arati helped to get Payal out of the ditch and how Yash stayed with Arati even if she told him that she is fine.

The best thing is that Arati got to hear Yash's and Naina's conversation. I feel she might have heard only the last part where Naina says that Payal is not Yash's daughter and its time for Arati to know the remaining of Yash- Payal history.

Hey Asha...thank you.

As always all your thoughts are an echo of exactly what I wanted to portray. Aarti and Payal have connected on a level that's very personal...very natural. By being there for Payal, Aarti is indeed mitigating some of the wrongs done to her in her own past.

Naina indeed was pursuing her own agenda. However, Yash was quickly onto her because he has had experiences with opportunistic girls and also because he can clearly see that she wanted this marriage for herself only...not greedy but selfish.

Well, Yash is taking it slow with Aarti for obvious reasons. But in such a crisis situation when he was so afraid for the two persons he loves so much, he does not hold back...he hugs her, kisses her, and not even Aarti can move him away from being with her.

It indeed is time for Aarti to know about Yash's so-called married life and Payal's birth.

@Naeema: You have been giving me some beautiful feedbacks in your own sweet and endearing manner. 🤗
So, like me, you too love jasmine. You know I find a lot of similarity between a jasmine flower and Aarti...both are simple and pure in appearance, yet their fragrance has such a long-lasting effect.

Thank you pal for taking me on a ride of the previous parts with such affectionate responses.😊

Originally posted by: meenadsouza

Really amazing chapter Indu filled with adventure, love, care, realization etc. You have pictured different emotions of all three (Yash, Aarti and Payal) so beautifully, I am speechless. Day by day the story line is getting more and more interesting and wish this was a novel where I could read at one stretch without keeping it down. Can't wait to know what happens in the next Chapter specially after hearing the conversation of Yash and Naina, what will be Aarti's reaction. Yash is already in love with her but Aarti is still not aware of it... will she find Yash's love and feelings for her or still have to wait for long? Getting very restless Indu and anxiously looking forward for the next chapter. Thank God Naina is already out of this story and thank you as well for not dragging this issue.
Hope you will get enough spare time to update it soon. Love your extrodinary imagination and awesome writing skills. Love you too Ind for giving us such a lovely story of AARYA which compensates for PV ZMD

Thanks Meena. Your compliments overwhelm me my friend. You are much too generous. 😳

As for Aarti and realization of her love...she is getting there, albeit slowly. Given what she thinks about love and her own beliefs regarding herself, it might take a strong epiphany for the realization to sink in. Naina was one of the movers that set the wheels in motion.

Meena , I try to update twice a week. Each update drains me emotionally...and I take a couple of days to come out of the zone and move onto the next one. I'll try to put up the next part during this weekend.😊

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

Awesome update...

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: Gkathria

Beautiful Indu, I look forward to seeing how Aarti reacts to the revelation of Yashji's past, great update!

Thanks Gimmy.

As for Aarti's reaction to whatever she heard...try guessing. As of now, I only know what she heard, and I too am trying to figure out how she will react. I have a feeling she will surprise me as well.😃

Originally posted by: freya123

amazing update

Thanks freya.😊