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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

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God y pankaj texted is still a msytery but uncle n aaunty heated argumenst n yeah g3 confessed as she is know it all much before anybody else gt to know my heart goes for her now she is truly maa for yash n aarti theri saviour by being protection shield

Wow charmi perfect words used

"today it is proven again that yashoda ma's love is always more than devki ma's love.

N love g3 aunty more for using coorect word for ishi she is a psycho

Haayye meri jaan wow i amlost at woirds they way you use

embrace gave them "sukoon". The "sukoon" they were longing for so long. Gayatri concern for them gave them the most "sukoon". They both slept peacefully calling eachother as u r mine "dil ka sukoon".

N lkya baat hai you made me soo happy by fulfilling my wish to burn ishi in big capital font 72 J after seeing dhak dhak taxation moment between aarya

N such a suspense story i can imagine each act aati horror to shock yash panic call n g worried ishi evil raavan wali hassi n yash blood on aarti forehead omg omg my heart is sinking n excited doing bale bale

N yash dialogue wow its amazing all wat i always want yash to say be aarti past n his rude behavior n aarti selfless ness n love for him n he admires her love her n respect her for being what she is .. wants his happiness beyond anything expectation

Wow you took my heart away i can only say silence peace n love i felt after reading this update you truly live up to the title dil ka sukoon

Thanks alot for making me partner in this ff journey really i am overwhelmed👏👏👏👏


pankaj texted pratiek to be home..immediately...thats it...nothing much...
yeah finally g3 confessed..that whatever she did was to save yash and aarti from the evil eyes of ishita... tht scene is really close to my heart riya
i just wanted to shw some relief in their lives after the tension which made them call "dil ka sukoon"..i m glad that u liked it...
hehehehe...u always loved watching the J factor for sihi...so aded one more...lol

u wont believe it took me alomost two hours to write that particular scene of ishita trying to kill aarti and yash saving her..n confessing his true feelings..u wont believe how much i wanted cvs to show this side of where he confesses what n y he feels for aarti..this scene is really close to my heart...n i m glad everybody liked it

i canot thnk u enough for encouraging me to write on this...
thank u thank u thank u
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Posted: 12 years ago
May be I am the first one who has read the last part at first...😆😉 but trust me dear it was a great treat for me...a great ending for Arya journey which we missed in real PV...😭😭.But now I am not sad at all coz such great writers like u r among us who can make Arya journey memorable for us...👏👏
Will give brief comment after reading the whole chapter...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
HEY ...charmi dear ...I am good thank you so much ... i was little busy ... with my bother addmission for his collage and all ... but i did read your epiloge form iphone so i was not able to comment as soon as i read later it got dealy beaucse of work ...but i must saysss it was perfect epi love it lot ... love the bound b/w kids and their love for little new baby... and it wasss fabulas and superb duper hit ... i love the way aakash got to know that how good yash is and what he did for him... and as always our arti and yash romance was fabulas evergreen love fresh love story ...and the last but most important part were intorduce gayatri friend veena ... it was sone pe suhaga ... i wish they might have shown somthing like this insteded of combineing PV 1 and PV 2 ...but i love it lot this story form part 1 to till the end ... they story never loss the charm ... it wonderfull journey... like it very much ... i hope you write more ... come back soon wait for ur new story ... and lot's and lot s of sorryyy to u for late comment ... lot of love to u ... take care dear ...god bless u ...biggg hug to u for me ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetkimeet

HEY ...charmi dear ...I am good thank you so much ... i was little busy ... with my bother addmission for his collage and all ... but i did read your epiloge form iphone so i was not able to comment as soon as i read later it got dealy beaucse of work ...but i must saysss it was perfect epi love it lot ... love the bound b/w kids and their love for little new baby... and it wasss fabulas and superb duper hit ... i love the way aakash got to know that how good yash is and what he did for him... and as always our arti and yash romance was fabulas evergreen love fresh love story ...and the last but most important part were intorduce gayatri friend veena ... it was sone pe suhaga ... i wish they might have shown somthing like this insteded of combineing PV 1 and PV 2 ...but i love it lot this story form part 1 to till the end ... they story never loss the charm ... it wonderfull journey... like it very much ... i hope you write more ... come back soon wait for ur new story ... and lot's and lot s of sorryyy to u for late comment ... lot of love to u ... take care dear ...god bless u ...biggg hug to u for me ...


thanks a ton sadhna...please dont say sorry...i love reading ur commnts...i m glad that u liked my story throughtout...
u wont believe how much i wished that all the scenes in this OS could have happened in PV...but ow we cannot do anything...

i also like the veena...i wanted to make hr repent for the humiliation she caused for aarti...n i m glad everyone liked it..

thank u for always supporting me through this entire journey of "Dil ka Sukoon"...u wont believe how much it has encouraged me to continue...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

May be I am the first one who has read the last part at first...😆😉 but trust me dear it was a great treat for me...a great ending for Arya journey which we missed in real PV...😭😭.But now I am not sad at all coz such great writers like u r among us who can make Arya journey memorable for us...👏👏
Will give brief comment after reading the whole chapter...😉



thats a really great complement for me mukti...thanks for reading...

n yes..i m waiting for ur reviews for the whole story also
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just have finished reading all the chapters and I must say that I have not enough words to praise you 👏.It was just mind blowing yaar. I was just all the scenes while reading it and was wishing that u were the CV's ov our lovable show PV and all these were shown in the show.Then no one could stop to be PV on the top of TRP chart.But it was our bad fortune that we just missed the opportunity.
But Plz dear dont stop your writing related Arya.You are just fabulous as a writer.Hats off to you for your such talent...👏
I'll be waiting for your next work...😊.
Dont make me wait so long...😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

Just have finished reading all the chapters and I must say that I have not enough words to praise you 👏.It was just mind blowing yaar. I was just all the scenes while reading it and was wishing that u were the CV's ov our lovable show PV and all these were shown in the show.Then no one could stop to be PV on the top of TRP chart.But it was our bad fortune that we just missed the opportunity.
But Plz dear dont stop your writing related Arya.You are just fabulous as a writer.Hats off to you for your such talent...👏
I'll be waiting for your next work...😊.
Dont make me wait so long...😉😉


thanks a ton mukti...i m so glad that u liked it...but i wasnt alone in this...

riya helped me a lot in this one...u flattered me very much...thanks again for reading this OS...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

Love you sweeto🤗



love u tooo😊😉
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Posted: 12 years ago



i m so glad that u liked it...

thanks for reading and commenting

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