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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Charmi I can't thank you enough for giving us such a beautiful AarYa story with such a beautiful ending ( or rather for such a beautiful beginning of AarYa's journey ) 👏 👏 👏


I don't have words to describe how I felt throughout this journey, my only regret is that we didn't get to see such beautiful scenes in our PV 😭. Wish they had shown us at least few scenes from your FF, but what's done is done.

But you gave us what we actually wanted to see and missed in PV, so once again I can't thank you enough for giving us such beautiful " Dil Ka Sukoon " 👏

Hope to read something equally more beautiful FF soon 😳


nikki di..u dont need to thank u...if u really wnt to thank anyone...then it is riya...

frankly i was really relunctant to start this ff...as i wasnot getting a proper idea for this...it was riya who encouraged me...n helped me with small drafts n that helped me to do this part...

di..i have included all those scenes...which i and riya personally wanted to see in this scene...

but i m glad that u liked it...thank u always for reading, commenting and encouraging me to keep writing...thank u for being the part of entire journey of dil ka sukoon...

dont worry di...i will come back soon..wel i m coming back in ur idea os rewriting the epi...

after that i will again come back soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful bouquet in appreciation of beautiful writing
glitter flowers

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hola re Princess! 😆 🤗 I'm back to read your updates! 😃

Part 9

Oh ji... Now I understand.. Actually Gaya3 was faking kya? 😲 She didn't want AarYa to stay in SM because she knew Ishu's bad intentions.. And I so love the emotional scene of Gaya3, Yash and Aarti... Finally I can see something turning calm there! 😊 Oh my.. the Dil Ka Sukoon was exactly there during AarYa's scene! 😳

Ishita is such a real bit*h! Hate her!! 😡😡😡 Thanked god all her plans especially final plans turned popat.. 😆 😡😡 I so loved when Yash finally confessed his real feelings he had for Aarti to Ishita... 😳 Shit To Ishita's face I guess.. 😆


Epilogue was awesome.. 👏👏👏 Loving the fact that Ishita realized her real mistake and Akash finally got attached to the family! 😃 Oh my Aayu.. 😆 He's so very adorable like Yashji... !! Awwwnnn.. Whole entire AarYa-Aayu scene was very cute! ❤️

Oh god.. Pity Aarti during the labour time! I'm glad she and Aayu were saved with prayers! 😃 And then, AarYa scene with the family scene was very well described! ⭐️

Haillaaa...Yashu is very naughty! 😆 ☺️ Romance scene was good enough! 😳

Dance was dreamy along with the song! 😳

I think the story is lovely, Charmi! 👏👏👏 Thanks for the beautiful journey of Dil Ka Sukoon... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx for this wonderful journey of aarya...hope u will come soon with another FF...will wait 4 u dont disappoint plz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahitien-moon

Beautiful bouquet in appreciation of beautiful writing

glitter flowers


thanks a ton prasu...its very very beautiful...n i m glad u liked it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Hola re Princess! 😆 🤗 I'm back to read your updates! 😃


Part 9

Oh ji... Now I understand.. Actually Gaya3 was faking kya? 😲 She didn't want AarYa to stay in SM because she knew Ishu's bad intentions.. And I so love the emotional scene of Gaya3, Yash and Aarti... Finally I can see something turning calm there! 😊 Oh my.. the Dil Ka Sukoon was exactly there during AarYa's scene! 😳

Ishita is such a real bit*h! Hate her!! 😡😡😡 Thanked god all her plans especially final plans turned popat.. 😆 😡😡 I so loved when Yash finally confessed his real feelings he had for Aarti to Ishita... 😳 Shit To Ishita's face I guess.. 😆


Epilogue was awesome.. 👏👏👏 Loving the fact that Ishita realized her real mistake and Akash finally got attached to the family! 😃 Oh my Aayu.. 😆 He's so very adorable like Yashji... !! Awwwnnn.. Whole entire AarYa-Aayu scene was very cute! ❤️

Oh god.. Pity Aarti during the labour time! I'm glad she and Aayu were saved with prayers! 😃 And then, AarYa scene with the family scene was very well described! ⭐️

Haillaaa...Yashu is very naughty! 😆 ☺️ Romance scene was good enough! 😳

Dance was dreamy along with the song! 😳

I think the story is lovely, Charmi! 👏👏👏 Thanks for the beautiful journey of Dil Ka Sukoon... 🤗


hii isya...
yeah..gayatri was faking all time in order to save aarya from that witch..
yes..yash could successfully explain the meanibg of true love to ishita...

epilouge is really close to my heart..firstly i want convinced with the fact that i wrote that well...but seeing at the response i got for the epilouge...i m glad abt it...

yes...aarti did have complication due to the injuries she got when ishi tried attacking her...

i love "ek din ap" song..i was waiting for some one to make a vm on this song...i also made a request..but its ok..i just used this song in my epilouge...

thanks for reading and commenting..i m glad u liked it...

thanks for supporting me through the entire journey of "dil ka sukoon"
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gurikafan

Thanx for this wonderful journey of aarya...hope u will come soon with another FF...will wait 4 u dont disappoint plz



i m glad u liked it...

thanks for always reading and supporting me in this entire journey...

i will try soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry sweetu i know the much waited sommenst took me really long way but its better late then never so coming with big suprise ch8 n 9

so ch8

aww how sweet of sm family visiting aarya n that evil ishi too but yesh even we r grateful to prateik for taking oath else our aarya pv wont be possible hai naa

charmi tihs line is so sweet "melodious aarti sung by aarti"

wow yahan bhi fire be it aarti diya or ishi ha ha mazza aa gaya n haey my yashji totally fida on aartiji haan tere chere se nazar nahi hath thi nazzare hum kya dekhenge

coming back too ohh n lovely gundhi bahbhi n dever interaction just love it n thnkz for putting theis too ishi emotion for humans not for you wicthita

thnaks prateik to come in between else i wud hav smash the vey same cake of tht eveil ishi face

Kya baat hai charmi budget bahut mast hai gifts ka ho bhi kyun naa first they are schindhiyas n scond diamon is bff for gals

N yeah kya bonding hai gidt n kaata i mean ishi give flowers thats amazing

Aarti n her sixt sense or we call detectivepanti haye gift gift mnein yashji ka aarti ko praise karna yes indeed tht truly symbolize aarti love for yash n your surprise to us hai naa

N then lil sweet convo between vidhi n yash

N yeah my baccha party rock mazza aaya ishita chachi you %$@#%#$%#$

So P 2 tell aarya abt ishi evilness omg my heeart goes for aarti her reachtion really touched me she is not angry but feel cheated n broken trust bby the one she thot is her own ishi you😡😡😡 really leave it

Well glad yash is thr for aarti in her this condition especially pregnancy...pankaj n prateikhmm coming soon to find out with ch9

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Posted: 12 years ago
ch9

God y pankaj texted is still a msytery but uncle n aaunty heated argumenst n yeah g3 confessed as she is know it all much before anybody else gt to know my heart goes for her now she is truly maa for yash n aarti theri saviour by being protection shield

Wow charmi perfect words used

"today it is proven again that yashoda ma's love is always more than devki ma's love.

N love g3 aunty more for using coorect word for ishi she is a psycho

Haayye meri jaan wow i amlost at woirds they way you use

embrace gave them "sukoon". The "sukoon" they were longing for so long. Gayatri concern for them gave them the most "sukoon". They both slept peacefully calling eachother as u r mine "dil ka sukoon".

N lkya baat hai you made me soo happy by fulfilling my wish to burn ishi in big capital font 72 J after seeing dhak dhak taxation moment between aarya

N such a suspense story i can imagine each act aati horror to shock yash panic call n g worried ishi evil raavan wali hassi n yash blood on aarti forehead omg omg my heart is sinking n excited doing bale bale

N yash dialogue wow its amazing all wat i always want yash to say be aarti past n his rude behavior n aarti selfless ness n love for him n he admires her love her n respect her for being what she is .. wants his happiness beyond anything expectation

Wow you took my heart away i can only say silence peace n love i felt after reading this update you truly live up to the title dil ka sukoon

Thanks alot for making me partner in this ff journey really i am overwhelmed👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

Sorry sweetu i know the much waited sommenst took me really long way but its better late then never so coming with big suprise ch8 n 9

so ch8

aww how sweet of sm family visiting aarya n that evil ishi too but yesh even we r grateful to prateik for taking oath else our aarya pv wont be possible hai naa

charmi tihs line is so sweet "melodious aarti sung by aarti"

wow yahan bhi fire be it aarti diya or ishi ha ha mazza aa gaya n haey my yashji totally fida on aartiji haan tere chere se nazar nahi hath thi nazzare hum kya dekhenge

coming back too ohh n lovely gundhi bahbhi n dever interaction just love it n thnkz for putting theis too ishi emotion for humans not for you wicthita

thnaks prateik to come in between else i wud hav smash the vey same cake of tht eveil ishi face

Kya baat hai charmi budget bahut mast hai gifts ka ho bhi kyun naa first they are schindhiyas n scond diamon is bff for gals

N yeah kya bonding hai gidt n kaata i mean ishi give flowers thats amazing

Aarti n her sixt sense or we call detectivepanti haye gift gift mnein yashji ka aarti ko praise karna yes indeed tht truly symbolize aarti love for yash n your surprise to us hai naa

N then lil sweet convo between vidhi n yash

N yeah my baccha party rock mazza aaya ishita chachi you %$@#%#$%#$

So P 2 tell aarya abt ishi evilness omg my heeart goes for aarti her reachtion really touched me she is not angry but feel cheated n broken trust bby the one she thot is her own ishi you😡😡😡 really leave it

Well glad yash is thr for aarti in her this condition especially pregnancy...pankaj n prateikhmm coming soon to find out with ch9


SO finally u commented...but u dont need to say sorry...
i also love the whole ch8...u know how much everyone has waited for that witch to get exposed...
i am so glad tht atleast in our story we showed she exposed without any masala...
n most imp we showed every member of SM with brains...
I also love each and every part of ch8..thanks to u for the draft...
our bacha party is also great...will not let thier parents separate..n will never let their gifts destroy...

thanks for supporting me riya..it was because of u i was able to reach till here

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