'DIL KA SUKOON' AN AARYA OS Complete

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roserosey

@roserosey

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#501

😊wonderful os
felt bad as u finished it
specially i love yash and aarti love and bonding in this story
if u consider i wish u to start new work
i like ur work very much
i read ur os in a go

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Commented on page 69 😉

Though I'm sad that its over 😭, but I'm proud to a part of such a beautiful story 👏

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charmi

@princess121993

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: Shashi1984
Fabulous epilogue. Loved it. That Veena is now regretting that she insulted Aarti, and the good DIL is her if she has not rejected her. But that's destiny. AarYa are meant to be together, so it had to happen.

All are happy in SM due to AARYA.

thanks a ton shahsi...

yeah...if for once veena had ignored the truth of aarti being a divorce and a mother...she would have gotten a best wife for his son..but as u said...aarya were meant to be together...

no one can change destiny...

i m glad that u liked my...thanks for supporting me and encouraging me in my os...😊

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charmi

@princess121993

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: maha9
wow charmi dear excellent story sweety...
i want to hug u for giving me such a beautiful ss of arya...

the cute family of arya is always a pleasure to watch and even i can visulaize while reading it... their family hug superb !!!
and not to forget of yash's naughty romance... nobody can beat our yashu in his romance yaar... i bet !!!

the most cute of all is the part where u made veena ji feel for insulting arthi after seeing her with a cute family in SM ...

and arya's dance with singing is superb dear... i can see each scene as i was reading...
thank u so much charmi.. love u 🤗

hi maha...

i m so glad that i could make u imagine all these scenes...

yeah maha,,no one can be naughtier than yash...

i always wanted to see that part in pv..but sigh...it is and was not possible...so i added what i actually wanted to see...

i always wanted to see an aarya dance sequene on this song..coz i personally think it perfectly describes the condition of aarya after they fell in love...

hugss to u too...

thank u always for supporting me through the entire journey of this os

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charmi

@princess121993

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: chitsri65
Beautifully written and the essence of bonding, emotion, love, song, family togetherness is very well covered leaving for a sequel of PV2 in form of your flow of thoughts ...Charmi this is for you⭐️👏

thanks a ton chitra...

ur words flatter me...u r much more beautiful writer than me...

but i m really glad that u liked it

thanks a ton for supporting me and encourging me through the entire journey of dil ka sukoon

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charmi

@princess121993

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: Rhysenn
Very wonderful update!

thanks a ton buddy😊

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charmi

@princess121993

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: prettyji
awesome

thanks pretty..

thanks for supporting

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charmi

@princess121993

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: pvejani
wow👏👏👏...dear epilogue is beautifully written👏👏👏very sweet,cute😎 and dreamy too .loved very much...sad too😔 as this story is ended.

i love❤️ this ss dil ka sukoon very much dear.every update was beautifully written👏👏👏..every character in this ss is beautifully described⭐️...loved very very😎 very much.thanx for giving me this beautiful ss to read.
thanx for all pm's dear

thanks buddy...thanks a ton...i m also sad that it ended...but every begining also has its end ...so..it also ended...

n for the success of "dil ka sukoon" one more person is responsible..that is riya aka RA17...she had helped me a lot and encouraged me a lot in this os...it was her who convinced me to start writing again...

thanks for always reading and leaving ur precious comments for this...

thanks for supporting us through the entire journey of dil ka sukoon

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charmi

@princess121993

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: Abie10
Aww charmi,its so beautiful dear love it...

thanks a ton abie...

i m glad u loved it...

thanks for supporting for the entire journey of dil ka sukoon

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charmi

@princess121993

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#510

Originally posted by: roserosey
😊wonderful os
felt bad as u finished it
specially i love yash and aarti love and bonding in this story
if u consider i wish u to start new work
i like ur work very much
i read ur os in a go

thanks a ton buddy...i m also sad that it is over...

thanks a ton for giving ur time in reading my os...

yeah..i will be coming back with a new work in the niki di aka lovely_nikki idea for rewriting the episodes...

i m writing on aarti's past/childhood...i hope i can make it better than my previous works...

thanks for reading and commeniting